Alrighty, I’m gonna try to do some outlining today and tomorrow in preparation for NaNo. I’ll be finishing up a book and then starting a new one, hopefully. You ready to get writing?

I’m just throwing this out there because I really don’t support the real NaNo organization so this year I am joining a writing group called the Glory Writers for NaNo. I am pretty sure they have a website run by two really fun Christian girls (Victoria and Livy) where you can probably find a link to join their “Cabin”. They are also…[Read more]

WHOA!! Has it really been THREE MONTHS since I posted in this thread?!  . . .

Okay, it has.

Tell me what you all think of this poem.

Rainbow in Waterdrops

Come down…[Read more]

This one is another very personal to me.  Critique and enjoy!

Twenty-One
Sometimes I don’t think I qualify
For twenty-one
Weighed down by the times I have to try
I’ve never…[Read more]

Okay, I guess I’ll post in this thread when I remeber too! LOL.

Here is my latest poem. Critique and enjoy!

True North

It seems that all the world has lost it’s…[Read more]

Don’t really know what to say about this one. Any and all critiques welcome!

My Morning Song (What you will say to me)

The sunlight is dawning
And though I am still…[Read more]

Hope you all enjoy!

All of the Pieces
All of my pieces I’d scattered o’er
The cracks in the surface of my stone heart floor
All of my days were lost so empty
Then You came and…[Read more]

This one I have been trying to finish for over a year now. Critque and enjoy!

Resolutions

I wrote my list of resolutions
Not to create my own solutions
I want to live like my…[Read more]

Merry Christmas!!

My Christmas Prayer
All the lights are hung, twinkling
Like a million stars glittering all over the walls
By the window the tree is shining
Crowned with a…[Read more]

Oh, wow! I keep forgetting about this. I am a bad thread-up-keeper . . . if there is such a word. . .

Anyway, this week’s is rather short. Just something I started singing to…[Read more]

This one is another very personal one to me. As always, critique and enjoy!!

Rest in Him

I know where there is a hushed abode
If in my life the longings are heavy load
A…[Read more]

Here’s this week’s.

Along the lanes and the country road
Through these rugged hills the landscape comes alive
Such vivid hues of scarlet and wine

Blown on the wind of a stormy…[Read more]

Another more personal peom, but I hope that you all enjoy it! 🙂

Thank You for Forgiving Me

Once my life was wasted with lust, aslant in a downward slide
Once I lived like a…[Read more]

Oh, dear! Sorry I forgot about this!

This week’s is one that I wrote more recently.  It’s a little more personal to me than most of the other poems I have written.

As usual,…[Read more]

Here is another revision of one of my older poem/songs. Enjoy and critque! A

And if you have written any poetry you’d like to share, please feel free to post it here. 🙂

My…[Read more]

This week I have another revision of an older song. Enjoy and critique!

Bloom (Where you are)
Flower, you’re crowned with a jewel-like bud
But all you think about is that…[Read more]

Okay, so I know some of you (uhem, @parker) have encouraged me to publish my poems as a book. I have really appreciated the encouragement and critique you all have given…[Read more]

Sorry I’m a little behind! This week’s is a revison of one I wrote some time ago. As always, I hope you enjoy, and please…[Read more]

And this is the final piece of the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😀

EPILOGUE:

The magnificent life of Chloe Juancarlos was a unique one.

When she accepted Eric Diego’s card-making business, along with her friends Chloe ventured across the realm. From Arizokaland towns to th…[Read more]

CHAPTER TWELVE:

A splinter of light pierced the utter dark.

Chloe bolted upright and glanced upon her cream-shaded bed. Pale walls decorated with vibrant flowers surrounded her. Dazzling, golden light descended through her window upon the multicolored floor. A wreath of…[Read more]

I know you saw the announcement about archiving the guilds Kat, but I just wanted to ask, do you two want to continue this roleplay in a new thread or what do you want to do?

Two poems this week!

This one is another ‘spontaneous inspiration’ one. As always, enjoy, critique and, if you want to, post…[Read more]

@jessi-rae  I don’t mind. As long as nobody else is in favor.

@ellen-blanc @e-b-raulands

As the bathroom door closed behind them with a soft whish, Megyn felt ‘Sarah’ flinch. She could feel the fear in ‘Sarah’, so strongly she could almost smell it.

Poor…[Read more]

This one took me months to write, but I finally finished it. Critique and enjoy!!

Watchmen (Sound it Loud)

Watchman,…[Read more]

Hope you all are doing well.  As always, critique and enjoy! 🙂

Torchlighters

Go! the torch must be carried on
All the…[Read more]

*takes in deep breath*

Alright, the final climax is written. Feel free to critique. If you think anything in this chapter is a little weird, unnecessary, or that you just disliked, and that might be because of Chloe’s odd POV, you may share your thoughts on them if…[Read more]

This one was also one was kinda spontaneous, but I still have simiular feelins at the time I wrote it. Feel free to comment,…[Read more]

YIKES!! Sorry guys, I forgot to post this past week.

This one came from a sorta random inspiration. I was sitting, thinking…[Read more]

Alright, next chapter out!

Read on and critique if you wish. However, if for some reason any of these scenes you happen to find a little dark or violent (which I hope aren’t), please share your thoughts on them. Thanks and enjoy!

CHAPTER TEN:

The maze was a…[Read more]

This a revision of song I wrote a while ago. Critique as hard as you want and enjoy!

The Surrendering

I’m down to my last…[Read more]

Okay, this one I just finished. I wanted to write this one ever since last fall but I just couldn’t get -get it! In the end,…[Read more]

Sorry guys I didn’t reply to the threads yesterday. I was outside, helping out with making some maple syrup. Yummy! ( but I can’t eat it)

@jessi-rae @ellen-blanc @e-b-raulands

“Okay.” Ignis sighed as she got up to leave. She headed towards the door, but paused, casting a glance back at the flo…[Read more]

(Having Storme is fine with me. 🙂 Megyn will sit by and, if needed, be a helping pair of hands. )

@jessi-rae @dakota @e-b-raulands @ellen-blanc

Okay . . . *holds breath a moment* This is one wrote a while ago, but I wanted it to make it my best work yet. But ev…[Read more]

@katthewriter (Megyn told me to tell you it’s okay. We get it. XD )

“Somewhere better than this. .!” ‘Sarah’ snapped

Megyn pressed her lips shut. I guess this isn’t a good time for that kind of conversation. But her eyes softened even more.

“I hope so . . .” she whispered, then let the rest of the sentence drop as she…[Read more]

“Somewhere better than this. .!” Was getting kinda annoyed and worked cuz she was hurt and she didn’t want to talk to this lady.

(Sorry Megyn. Hasnt been brought up very well xD)

‘Sarah’ looked down. “I guess…. but dying sounds better….”

Storm smiled sadly. “Dying might seem to sound better, but remember: Not all things are as they appear.”

“It’s better than living agony every day. ….” was the reply

“But, Sarah, where would you go?” The question, though quietly and gently asked,  jumped from…[Read more]

Storm continued to whisper, speaking gently.

Suddenly the girl looked her in the eye, almost in defiance, but mostly pain in her deep blue eyes. She got a bit…[Read more]

@katthewriter @e-b-raulands

Storm skated through the door and knelt beside the wounded girl, who seemed so weak now she could hardly move. She whispered to her, her words just low enough that Megyn couldn’t make them out.

The girl slowly turned her head, her eyes traveling and…[Read more]

(Haven’t heard from you both in awhile.  Everything okay?  Should i have not had Yuri running away when she’s hurt? If it feels like I’m trying to make my characters the center of attention i did not mean too. If that’s what’s bothering you,  i can have her just pass out so they can help her,then I’ll make the wound di…[Read more]

@ellen-blanc @dakota @e-b-raulands

This is my very latest one! Critique heartlessly and enjoy!

Awaken the Dawn
Up the pale granite heights I climb.…[Read more]

(Well, I don’t know if waiting much longer would be a good idea. . . But what do the rest of you think?)

“N-no… no…” The girl struggled and tried to force her weak body to move, to crawl away.

Megyn reached out a hand and gently held onto the girl’s arm. “Steady, don’t try to move. Please, let me look!”

@e-b-raulands

@dakota @ellen-blanc (she’d have to take off her hoodie…also unless the nurse (@e-b-raulands we need you! ) shows up she’s not gonna give in,  so either i can make her pass out. Or they’ll just do it even though she said no so she doesn’t die. Just gently holding her down and talking soothingly will make it a little…[Read more]

@e-b-raulands @dakota

(It’s been like two weeks since e-b-raulands last posted so I’m going to pull out my futuristic tech now (I also love…[Read more]

(Actually if @e-b-raulands gets here,  having Amber say she’s a nurse would actually help. Cuz she actually trust hospitals and doctors more than my other traumatized cherries do.  Just with getting taken there so many times.)

Her body was a bit rigid, whimpering in pain like a puppy. “P-please…” s…[Read more]