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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
Sounds good lol!
Oh, can someone give me a list of all the people who are currently in the room (which I guess is everyone active in the castle at the moment)? I want Vulferym to look around at everyone but there’s a tiny problem… I don’t have a clue who is actually still here XD
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
@beth20 Aaaaa I’m sorry!! If you want, you can write a scene that went between when Jaylin sat down with him behind the bookshelves and when Dharin faded? And then maybe just put a note that tells when it happened?
Aww have a tissue! *hands you one, wraps you in a blanket, and gives you tea*
And thanks! 😀
@joelle-stone Hehehe >:D
And yay! 😀
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Claire replied to the topic Concept Feedback in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 6 months ago
Yes, I got that email too! A very helpful idea… And I can totally relate about things getting too cliché. It’s so easy to fall into the common “groove” of a genre.
I like how you are trying to brainstorm fresh ideas to change things up. It seems like concepts always sound more cliché than the fully fleshed out idea, so I’m sure y…[Read more]
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Concept Feedback in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 6 months ago
Will do, thanks! 🙂
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
@beth20 🙂 Sounds good!
@kimlikesart Thank you!
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Kimmi replied to the topic Grief in the forum Poets 5 years, 6 months ago
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
Note: ignore that I said the feather was white. Pretend I said it was mottled brown instead.
Also I just realized that it sounded like Dharin was wearing literally JUST his vest. That’s not what I meant XD He’s wearing pants. But he isn’t wearing any SHIRT besides the vest.
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Dharin tucked the feather carefully in his belt, and stood up,…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
Dharin fell through the mist, landing with a thump on a stone floor. Looking around, he recognized the library with the mirror. Though there were more than one now. He was about to get up when someone fell from the mist on the ceiling, landing right on top of him with an “oof.”
Lytt jumped up, stammering an apology. “I’m so sorry, I didn’t…[Read more]
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Concept Feedback in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 6 months ago
Cliches are something I really really really struggle with, so thanks for the warning (and the feedback)! 🙂
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
Sorry! I forgot to tag you guys on the Chronicle. (:
@beth20 @joelle-stone @rusted-knight @this-is-not-an-alien @anne_the_noob14
Merry Christmas!!!
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
Basically, yeah! @this-is-not-an-alien stuck us all back together, and I wanted Lytt to go, so I figured that was the best way. 🙂 Nice post, BTW! And, hope I’m not being pesky, but which would you prefer to come in: Asor or Virtus? 😉
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
Nithel hesitated, pausing. The man was just staring at him. Had Nithel done something wrong? He probably did. Gabrel always found something. Was it how he walked? He hadn’t said anything yet, so it couldn’t be that. Maybe he should’ve given back the greeting…
Then the man nodded to him.
Why did he do that! Nithel’s chest went on overload. The…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
@kimlikesart @beth20 @joelle-stone
Thank you so much guys!
@kimlikesart
YOU DO SIXTEEN PERSONALITIES TOO!!! YES! I’m ENFP, btw. INFJ are like the super mystic personality-type and ENFP sometimes revert to their “inferior functions” when they’re depressed so they’ll end up testing as INFJs sometimes. You INFJs are just so layered!…[Read more] -
Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
Nithel’s eyes narrowed on the wet man, just a bit. He bowed? Egad, what did he do that for? Nithel was no royalty...
What country bowed? The Twin States? Chesed? His mind couldn’t remember the other places that existed. He was so new to the world...
He almost raised his hand in greeting to the fellow, but didn’t, jumping inside as more and more…[Read more]
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
Ooh, I repeat what literally everyone else is saying: Great story and character!! Eliakim… that’s a Bible name, right? Cool! Your book sounds very complex and I’m also very tempted to ask you to tell me what those spoilers were about, but I know how hard it is for a writer to resist that temptation, so I won’t tempt you.…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
Nithel’s chest thudded, and he tumbled. Falling again. He growled, trying to grab hold of something, but there was nothing.
He landed with a thud. The ground not like a bed this time. A stone jabbing his back. His teeth gritted, and he growled, eyes blinking several times.
He looked to the ceiling. There was no ceiling, then there was.
Zounds.…[Read more]
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
Yeah, sure! 🙂
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
There’s been some posts in the RP-ing thread. Cathy gave us a boost. 😉
You’re so fine! I thought we were dying; you may have just given us life-saving CPR! 😛
Also, if you’d like to join… I mean… we’ve got spots… and it’d be cool to have another person… 🙂
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Gracie replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
When the youth held out his hand Nithel didn’t know what to do. Was it some sort of greeting?
Pretend he knew what to do? No. That would be lying.
He didn’t move closer, keeping several feet or yards between them. Nithel lifted his raes hand, like one about to take an oath, and nodded to him. “Jaylin; calm, or inner strength. I am Nithel son…[Read more]
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
Ha, thank you, that was just what we needed. I’m good with it if everyone else is…
@anne_the_noob14 @kimlikesart @rusted-knight @beth20 @whoever-I’m-missing
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