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Katja R replied to the topic Part of a story in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 1 month ago
It’s pretty good! The only thing I was wondering is that it almost sounded as if she was gonna jump of and kill herself. Like is she thinking about committing suicide? Maybe that is what you were trying to tell and I’m just weird enough to not understand, but yeah.
-Katja
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Kristianne Hassman replied to the topic Part of a story in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 1 month ago
It makes sense to me, although I’d have to know the context to say for sure. I like it! Now I want to know more about Raven, lol!
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Katja R replied to the topic The Four Rebels chapter 3 in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 1 month ago
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Yeah!
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Katja R posted a new activity comment 6 years, 1 month ago
@beth20
I’m on a computer. Lol. I think I kinda understand what you’re saying, but if someone tags me then I can just read what they said in the email. 😀-
Yeah, if that’s easier than do that lol! 🙂
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Katja R replied to the topic The Four Rebels chapter 3 in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 1 month ago
Lol. No, I thought you were saying I said something weird. Haha. I had let Josiah know about the glitches, but he might not have had a chance to look at it yet.
-Katja
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Oh haha! Okay yeah, I tagged Josiah in something a long time ago and it says he’s been online since but he still hasn’t responded so… not sure what that means lol!
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Katja R replied to the topic Character Name Discussion in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 1 month ago
I will take a peek and let you know if I come up with anything. And I can’t see your post unless I look at my email. So yeah, I’ll do my best to come up with something.
-Katja
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@katja-r
Yeah, the way I’m doing it is, I’m going to the Fantasy Group then I’m going to Home instead of Forum and it has the latest things that were posted. Are you on a phone or a laptop? I’m on a laptop so it might be different for different devices. Then you can either comment on the post right there or go to the Topic and post another post…[Read more]-
Oh and thank you haha!
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@beth20
I’m on a computer. Lol. I think I kinda understand what you’re saying, but if someone tags me then I can just read what they said in the email. 😀-
Yeah, if that’s easier than do that lol! 🙂
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Katja R replied to the topic The Four Rebels chapter 3 in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 1 month ago
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No lol! What I said was weird haha! I said, “All the posts in the Fantasy Group I am having trouble with.” And it was just an odd way to put it haha. Unless that’s not what you were talking about? haha
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Kristianne Hassman replied to the topic Ninjanaria Chapter Two: Magic? in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 1 month ago
I like it! I’m really getting into the story now 🙂 Just one thing: the point of view changes are confusing, especially toward the beginning. It’s best if you stick with just one point of view per chapter and if you want to change a point of view in a chapter, make sure to indicate it with something like  ***  between sections. You don…[Read more]
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Selah replied to the topic Christian Movies in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 1 month ago
*walks in late* Hi, ya’ll! XD Pretty cool how many of the best movies you guys have already mentioned. 🙂
I agree, the Kendrick Bros movies are amazing. I’ve seen all of them except for part of Fireproof, and they only get better as they keep making them. Super awesome!
Oh, I absolutely love Beyond the Mask. One of…[Read more]
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Naiya Dyani replied to the topic Christian Movies in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 1 month ago
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Arindown replied to the topic Character Name Discussion in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 1 month ago
Yeah, I think I agree. Macalester is cool. I might tweak it just a bit to make it easier like you suggested. Thanks.
If I ever have any name problems, I know where to come.😄
IÂ totally understand about kinda “skipping over” long names in stories. Not to put anyone down, but I once read a book where one of the main characters…[Read more]
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Katja R replied to the topic The Four Rebels chapter 3 in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 1 month ago
Thanks for pointing those things out. Originally I had written this chapter in present tense and then after I wrote it I changed it to past. So, yeah, I probably missed a few things.
Yeah, I didn’t really like the part about him going inside. I’m going to fix in eventually.
I’ll see what I can do.
Sure, I’ll change that…[Read more]
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Katja R replied to the topic Character Name Discussion in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 1 month ago
Lol. I actually thought Macalester was easier to remember and pronounce, but I’m kinda used to unique names. (I mean my name is different (; ) But it’s up to you Grace. I don’t really have an argument for Macalester other than that I think it sounds good with Damien. Sometimes I change the name a bit, so even if you did Damien…[Read more]
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Melody replied to the topic Christian Movies in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 1 month ago
That is very good that your family is strict on what kind of movies you watch. If everybody had good standards on movies, I doubt are world would be as “dark” as it is.
I have never seen the God’s not dead movies.
Yes, a lot of Christian movies are a cringy and some of the acting isn’t always good…[Read more]
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Christian Movies in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 1 month ago
Thanks for tagging me to this! I’m always up for helpful discussions. But to set the tone- I’ve basically never seen anything but Christian movies. I haven’t seen Lord of the Rings or Narnia. Or any of the other ones you all are talking about as far as non-christian.
I’ve always wanted to write movies too!!!! 🙂
I’ve heard of…[Read more]
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Katja R replied to the topic The Four Rebels chapter 3 in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 1 month ago
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Katja R replied to the topic Christian Movies in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 1 month ago
I understand that a lot of Christian movies are cringy and not very fun to watch. Some of us, or at least I’ll come out and say it, want to write movies. I absolutely HATE watching “Christian” movies that are not very helpful and not exciting. So I get what you are saying and I do not want to write movies that way. If you want to see the…[Read more]
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Katja R replied to the topic The Four Rebels chapter 3 in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 1 month ago
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I haven’t yet but I’m gonna do that in a sec I saw that you posted it!
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Katja R replied to the topic The Four Rebels chapter 2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 1 month ago
Good! I’ll try to make that more clear. I think the biggest thing for me is that I don’t know how to really describe the weapon that well. I will try to work on that.
I wouldn’t have usually put chapter names or titles (it takes me to long.) but I thought it might help to make this book more understandable.
-Katja
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Katja R replied to the topic Ninjanaria chapter one in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 1 month ago
Sorry, you were to late. I already put it on my intro page. I still can’t view the second page….but I can leave a comment. I tried doing what you said as well. Still didn’t work.
-Katja
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Okay lol!
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