Beth Darlene

Kallun’s eyes never left the shadowed figure. “It’s okay.” He whispered, “I think.” He stepped towards the figure, “Please come out.”

the figure hesitated for a moment before closing the space between them. The person was wearing a mixture of gray and beige robes with some lightweight sand-colored armor. Kallun reached up and took off the helmet…[Read more]

Ellie tried to walk forward, but Julian had his arm in front of her. She scowled and pushed it away then stood next to Kallun. “Kallun?”

LEAVE MY BABY, AYDIN ALONE!!!!!! *Also me: torturing my baby Alessio…*

Pft, I can’t even remember what it was before Camvir-something-blahblah, I can’t wait to see what it’ll be by the end of the year, probably something completely different and it’ll be all my fault *I’m so happy!* 😇

LOL IT SHOULD SERVE YOU RIGHT FOR BEING SO…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

FYI, Cavirmablablah, I AM GETTING TO IT AND I HAVE STARTED TTD 2 WHILE I’M BETA READING FOR SOMEONE WHO’S PUBLISHING FEBUARY!!!!!!

It’s fine, take as many years as you would like. 🙂

@rose-colored-fancy

What’s the piece of feedback that surprised you the most?

To be perfectly honest with you, I just kinda assume that my wri…[Read more]

@noah-cochran

I’m afraid to say that the feedback is all over the place. xD Some of my betas really liked a couple of the characters, and others thought those characters had serious problems (and vice versa).

I suppose the most common agreement is that the fight scenes to be edited and shortened (though one of my beta’s likes them a sur…

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FYI, Cavirmablablah, I AM GETTING TO IT AND I HAVE STARTED TTD 2 WHILE I’M BETA READING FOR SOMEONE WHO’S PUBLISHING FEBUARY!!!!!!

Don’t worry, I’ll have it by the end of this century, ok 😁

Now excuse me while I yell at @rose-colored-fancy for her horrifying display of efficiency and absolutely ridiculously high wordcount, THAT SHOULD BE…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

How are you finding the feedback? Are you spotting any patterns or is everyone violently disagreeing?

I’m afraid to say that the feedback is all over the place. xD Some of my betas really liked a couple of the characters, and others thought those characters had serious problems (and vice versa).

I suppose the most common…[Read more]

@noah-cochran

Hey Rose, I’m doing alright. The weather is frigid in Missouri, so I assume that the Netherlands is covered in ice.   School started, and college starts soon, so I solemnly await busyness.

How about you?
Pretty good! We had a couple really icy days already, but now we’ve returned to the natural Dutch state. Mud. Lots of it. Rai…[Read more]

Hey, y’all! I’d love to do it!

So, another thing, I had the idea of Esben being resurrected. So you know the scene in the last book where Esben/bear comes into the hall and Leeli is singing to him? Then Artham hears it from across the ocean and tells Esben to sing the song. Anyway, what if when they’re resurrecting Janner, Leeli sings and it goes…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

Hey Rose, I’m doing alright. The weather is frigid in Missouri, so I assume that the Netherlands is covered in ice. 😉 School started, and college starts soon, so I solemnly await busyness.

How about you?

Four of my other beta readers have given me feedback, and the other four may or may not finish within the next few…[Read more]

Ooh, I forgot about this role-play. Welcome @valkyrie-falk

@valkyrie-falk

about the characters, you can be Thorn if you so desire. It’s really just what you want

@valkyrie-falk

Hey! Glad to see another Wingfeather enthusiast.

Idk why but most of the people originally in the RP have fallen off the face of the earth. I’m sure if you want to you can get some of the remaining people to revive it.
@joelle-stone and I are probably more active than most now, but some others will pop up now and then.

Feel f…[Read more]

If it’s okay, I’d like to play Thorn.

And, weird thought, (and we don’t have to go with this,) But does anyone remember Armulyn the bard? If so, I was thinking (When I read the books,) That he was Esben and Artham’s younger brother. The song master. But if that doesn’t work with the story, that’s fine.

Hi! I’m new to Story Embers. Is it okay if I join in?

“A.. snake.” Kallun muttered, watching the form.
The shadow laughed.

@crazywriter,

No problem.

It’s been kinda rough, but not as bad as I expected. What about you? Are you guys doing Crazy Writing Week?

Julian still gripped onto his sword but held his other arm out in front of the princess. “What is it?” he asked Kallun