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“Exactly. That still leaves me wondering what these pieces say. They clearly look like they go together, but there are still pieces missing.” Finn said trying to connect the sides.

Julian was now insight also, carrying onions and even berries.

Ahhhh what?? That actually fits his character really well but it’s also kinda funny XD

Dude I was reading some stuff I wrote where Kallun was a side character and dudeeeeeee Kallun plays the cello!!!!  XD

Pia nodded. “Right. We should all try to change something that the war brought to us. We can’t be enemies right now, because other people are getting hurt. We need to stop the true enemy.”

Kallun came walking back with an armload of fish.

“Yeah, there was a war between our country and Kallun’s. When the countries were first founded, they had an alliance through marriage becoming one country, but it didn’t work out and they went at war with each other and split into two countries. Something about our country not trusting the magic of the others.” Finn explained.

“That’s why we were…[Read more]

Thankfully, Arsene had shifted part of his body to avoid cutting major stab wounds. However, the van was, well, totaled. Currently, the boy was holding a knife at Arsene, demanding. “Where is my friend?!”
“Your friend,” Arsene asked, “I don’t have any idea who you are talking about.”
While this was true, the boy didn’t seem to believe him. Wh…[Read more]

Oh, idk if I mentioned this before, but Halmar has gotten himself a place as a deuteragonist instead of a side character XD It’s going to be dual POV now, because they have opposite views on the theme!

Halmar

“The room just ahead is a room of mirrors, though be careful. The mirrors have a way of revealing your soul. To escape the room, you m…[Read more]

@jared-williams

that was awesome. =) I like your characters.  I will write Ku’s dream later, but just a short fun ditty in response to Mori. ;p

Lol thank you!!! That was immensely fun to write. I’m glad you like them!!!

This castle was some sort of demented.

THIS MADE ME LAUGH SO HARD 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

not sure if that fits with your characters ability or n…

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@jared-williams

I’d be happy to beta read for you.

@denali-christianson

that was awesome. =) I like your characters.  I will write Ku’s dream later, but just a short fun ditty in response to Mori. ;p

Abirami

So bored.

I was lying on my back again, waiting for Ku to wake up. A while ago, Enydd had woken up and walked around a bit, asked me what next, but she had gone off somewhere…[Read more]

@kimlikesart

Sorry, I didn’t see your post. I only got on late last night and didn’t refresh the page. I apologize for any trouble I may have caused. Do not accept my last post as an event that occurred in Character Castle 2.5. Continue with what you have written. I’ll try to see if I can get Sherlock to bump into Nithel, but you will be in…[Read more]

@everyone

HIIIIII I’ll respond to y’all like tomorrow when I actually have time. XD

For now, Niarok is insisting that I get him back to dad status. So here goes…

Niarok

This felt strangely familiar.

Painfully familiar.

The smell of smoke was almost enough to send him into a flashback.

Too bad he’d picked up Yila’s habit of p…[Read more]

Sherlock witness everything, as he chased after Arsene. Most of all, he saw how Baron had tried to kill his brother. Drawing his handgun, Sherlock activated the targeting beam.
“Jacob Baron, get down on the floor this very instant!”
Baron tried to run, cackling madly. However, as he walked, a man, who was standing in the same path, tripped Bar…[Read more]

aw, thank you,

@skylarynn

this came from my work in progress. I actually just finished writing it yesterday (yay!!!) but it still needs some ironing out… but I will be asking for beta readers here soon. =) Oh, it would be wonderful if I could get it published though!

The world swirled. Nithel’s stomach flipped and he appeared in another room. Giant. With bright walls, almost appearing to be made of ivory or alabaster. The floor was smooth, with golden designs twirling through it, as if they had been melted into the floor. He blinked rapidly at the sudden light, and the despairing fog did not leave his mind. Was…[Read more]

@jared-williams

Hey Jared, it’s up to you, but if I was writing it, I would make the little boy’s speech more clear. Especially stuff like ‘wahnts yau.’ That’s just too unreadable. I’ve found that a better way of showing speech impediments is by using improper grammar, badly worded sentences, and made up contractions.

OKAY EVERYBODY! @ragnarok @hannahrenner @this-is-not-an-alien *claps hands*
Not to toot the same old horn, but we need to lay some ground rules for the character castle to keep the craziness down, and to help everyone understand what’s happening.

These are the original rules, slightly modified~

Welcome to the Character Castle! This is where you…

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@everyone I’m doing an online cleanse (of sorts),  so I don’t know if I’ll be able to keep up. Feel free to use Isella, and I’ll try to write some, but I have an inkling that I’ll be short on time from now on, so if it gets too problematic you can kick her out, or I’ll remove her. Keep being awesome!

@jared-williams

That was fantastic, where is your book and when can I buy it?

@jared-williams

Please let me know if it is hard to understand him and whether or not his intonation make sense or if anything contradicts my description of him…

I found it easy to read Hadwin’s dialogue; honestly it was fun because I don’t usually get to read phonetic speech.  I don’t think you contradicted yourself, and the scene was pretty en…[Read more]