Ariella Newheart

Awesome, Parimi Alca and @ariella-newheart!! Great job! 🙂

Good work, Meraki. If only life were not soooooo crazy……[Read more]

@wordsmith *nods*

@ariella-newheart *nods again*

🙂

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@wordsmith Anytime! Thanks for tagging me; I’m always happy to help. 😊

My writing is going okay! I’m currently in the middle of planning my edits, after getting feedback from a professional editor. Hopefully November will see me editing away and by next year I’ll be finished pretty much all the edits I can do.

@ariella-newheart Yay! Best…[Read more]

@ariella-newheart Thank you! That made fixing it much easier 🙂

@ariella-newheart YOU WON! *throws confetti over you* Great job, girl!

@anne_the_noob14 – Lol, if you liked her I can’t imagine what you’d think of my MC. 😛 But it’s not her fault. She’s a good person, and doing what she thinks is right. Remember, her only role model for the past six years was the most evil man on the planet, who’s been lying to her and manipulating her, so…yeah. xD

The more we go on, the more I…[Read more]

Congrats, Parimi Alca! And great job, @ariella-newheart!

*sheepish smile* Sorry I’m late. Here are the results!

Parimi Alca: 23,265
Knaphollow: 10,009
New Wessex: 8,007
Erekdale: 7,311
Meraki: 2,317
Rillumen: 987
Avensbeck: 279

And the individual award goes to @ariella-newheart with 8320 words!

Guildmasters: @maddiejay @faith_blum @karthmin @jane-maree @j-a-penrose

My guys: @piperbee @gabriellepollac…[Read more]

@ariella-newheart @wordsmith

Thanks for tagging me, Buddy!

It is okay to switch between omniscient third, and close/limited third, but it’s best and most effective to split it very clearly from the main text, otherwise the POV won’t feel as genuine for the rest of the chapter.

I’d recommend making a short interlude/aside ‘chapter’ for these…[Read more]

@wordsmith 😀

Yesssss…. SO much better than the tv series…

@ariella-newheart Thanks!! *grabs a handful of Milky Ways and Kit-Kats*

(I agree with Buddy on the point of Caedon wouldn’t refer to his father as anything besides “father.” That bugged me a little as I read it.)

@ariella-newheart Oh, whoops! Yeah, my bad! Okies!

(by the way.. This has literally nothing to do with this thread, or even this site, but I’ve got a costume party/dance to go to on Nov 16th. People are supposed to dress up as their favorite character from a movie. I have a couple ideas, but none that I really like. Anybody have ideas I could use??)

@ariella-newheart

🙂 So glad to be of service…

Now… I’m pretty sure that tactic makes the story omniscient… because an omniscient narrator looks in on the mind of the character, from the outside. This means he can actually do it with any character, though… this is hard to balance. An omniscient narrator can stick with primarily one…[Read more]

@anne_the_noob14… *bows* I am glad to be of the service of making my point clear. I hope nothing else was to be expected. 😉

@ariella-newheart… Quite so. To expect the unexpected all the time is a losing battle. One that cannot be won, and thus must let slide be. We prepare what we can and trust God that He has us ready forefather He gives…[Read more]

@steward-of-the-pen Yes! 😀

Ok cool.

Omw I love it! I love her reaction to the humans and everything 😀 😀

@christlover Thanks! 🙂

@ariella-newheart Thanks! Yay!

Ooh… I like it!! And if Caedon can calm Runawin down, that’s awesome!

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Lucas stood facing the door, dagger held ready though he hoped he wouldn’t need to use it.…[Read more]

@elisha-starquill

I am going to switch up a couple of aspects of the fight between Racleva and Theseus so that it better matches his training. Just for future reference, do you want Racleva to be more of a redemption arc character or is she a hard-core villain? (Those are my own made up terms, if y’all know the correct ones they would be very…[Read more]

@ariella-newheart @wordsmith

Ah yes… Part of my WIP… This, Buddy, wraps back around to our conversation yesterday about the novel outlining… Last night I actually started writing it. The outline, that is. I’m going to see if I can make the plans for a short story I was thinking about into a longer piece. Novel-sized. *shrugs* I won’t paste…[Read more]

@ariella-newheart Yay!! More Caedon! I love that snippet! But it’s so sad…. *cries* *wants to hug poor Caedon and give him cookies*

Are we having candy?? May I have some? *reaches hesitantly towards the bag of Hershey’s candy bars at your feet*

@ariella-newheart That would be great 🙂 Thanks! Between college and riding lessons, my brain is pretty bleh right now, so I’m probably reading right past all the typos anyways.

@ariella-newheart Thanks for the feedback!

*goes to hunt down typos*