Livi Ryddle

@anne_the_noob14

Aww, yeah, that would be cold for there, I guess…sounds like nice fall weather to me, lol! I was born in AK, so it must run in my blood. 😀

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Great job!! 😃 This is an awesome…[Read more]

@writercatherine Oh, sorry. I had to put my bird to bed in the meantime. xD

@cassie-hartfinh Aw, thanks for the encouragement! I doubt I could have ever come up with it, though, if @anne_the_noob14 hadn’t inspired me with the first idea of a sarcastic horse (thank you, Anne!) I couldn’t pull this off without you guys, so thanks to all! (Including…[Read more]

Hey Parimis!

The entry is completed and @j-a-penrose has asked me to let you know that she will be submitting it shortly (she’s having technical difficulties getting on the forum). Stellar work, everyone! Thank you all for the effort you put into making this entry great. It was fun working with y’all, as always!

And now we await the results……[Read more]

@anne_the_noob14

*hyperventilates* YOU HAVE A CHARACTER NAMED KIEL. *fangirling*

All right, the first draft is in the doc! Edit away, Parimis!

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@pookiemonster: I know its so good!!!

@anne_the_noob14: Actually, I was testing Ethan XD I know you know the answer! (obviously!!!)

*finally pops back in after a super long week of high school*

@steward-of-the-pen @cassie-hartfinh @anne_the_noob14 @ariella-newheart @pursuewisdom This sounds amazing! I’m going to be busy today but I’m going to just pop in the document and see if I can make any suggestions 😉

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Woah! Cool ideas guys! This could work!

And goodness me. I forgot to make the doc. XD HERE IT IS FOR REAL

Faith Blum is our lovely judge this time around. She’s an Ex-Meraki and is the Guildmaster of Avensbeck.

Go ahead! If anyone else has ideas, just say so!

@anne_the_noob14 Hmm… not really. I just use a old fashioned baby name book most of the time. 😉

Or I just search good ole google “OLD MEDIEVAL NAMES FOR GUYS” … something like that. 😛

@steward-of-the-pen I second @anne_the_noob14 ‘s idea. Crash that evil princess’ party!!

@kari-karast: “NO. I was 2 weeks from 14 last time!!” oh… hehe, ya I may have forgot about that XD

“If it’s girls in like ‘normal’ skirts that annoys me too. I mean, they’re what? 6 inches long??? *groans* Ugh. I don’t see why they’d want to wear those AT ALL.” Ok ya, I was thinking of said skirts and thus, that annoyance level XD

“(Also, you…[Read more]

@anne_the_noob14

You’re doing wonderful! *thumbs up*

Ack! Not Shakespeare!! *runs off and hides before I start speaking Shakespearean English*

But aside from that, the answer is… DO NOT TO KILL HIM.

And @theinconceivable1 has started a revolution before… this is nothing. XD

@anne_the_noob14 glad to hear I’m not the only one with a backlog of unfinished stories haha. Your WIP sounds awesome! Some people don’t like cliche stories, but I think that, if done right, they can be great. Besides, it sounds like you’re adding some things to make it fresh, with the t-rexes and the Italian-speaking leprechauns and all. It…[Read more]

@cassie-hartfinh @ariella-newheart @anne_the_noob14

Aw, glad you like it. xD I’m happy to whip up first draft if everyone is good with this idea. Do you guys want to throw out some suggestions? The part of the story I don’t have worked out in my mind is the middle where the horse is trying to prevent the prince from rescuing the princess. Any…[Read more]

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So…are we in agreement for the story then? When do we start writing? Who writes the first draft? I vote Steward. She’s got a great writing voice. Plus her idea is the bomb.

@ethan-mitchell: Ah well tis a pleasure to meet you eathen but, you see, there is only one question whos awnser I truly must know *lets the dramatic sentence build the tension* “who are you?” (hehe, @anne_the_noob14 gets it!) but really, are you a fan of the greatest movie to ever exist (aka the princess bride) or not?!?

@anne_the_noob14 Oh my goodness, I love this story and the variety of character names you used! Plus the dialogue is fantastic, and so is the concept. I concur with what Darth Pen said about weaving in character descriptions. Otherwise, I have but one question: is Bart the only guy in the whole book?! (besides the bullies, but I don’t think they count) 😛

@anne_the_noob14 @steward-of-the-pen @cassie-hartfinh Great ideas! I already love Charlie the horse. Sarcastic characters are some of my favorites, both to read and write. (Also, I think it’s cool that you take horse riding lessons, Darth Pen!)

I had to look up a few old KP articles for advice about cliched endings. For instance, this one says…[Read more]

@anne_the_noob14

Hey! If When I eventually get beta readers I’ll tag you! 😀

Ah. It makes a lot more sense now. Molagnanise Mountain, eh? Cool! (He better end up with Hazel especially with all that trouble you’re putting him through! 😉 ) I don’t think any questions… nope! I’m good. 🙂