Andrew Schmidt

@kari-karast I’m so glad it helped her. I’ll be praying for her.

@parker Thanks. I hope things get un-crazy for you soon. Praying.  🙂

@andrew Thanks! Your poem was cool. Keep writing! 🙂

@dakota

I love it!!!!!

@andrew

Cool!!

@parker  @evelyn @andrew   @libby  @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt  @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist   @katthewriter  @e-b-raulands  ( please tag some others who think might like this)

This one was a spontaneous inspiration. The phrase ‘facing the God I know’ hit me and I couldn’t shake it. So here is one of my newest ones. As…[Read more]

@andrew

ACK. SORRY. I never realized… you didn’t know… *facebricks*

Sage and Amaya aren’t in the caves, they’re at a boarding house at a different place.

@andrew  @kari-karast  Can my character just appear out of nowhere or is there a better place for her to go?

Thanks guys! @evelyn   @andrew  @jenwriter17

@andrew

In a minute, yeah. Just lemme traumatize Karim real quick first.

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Karim took a deep breath. He could do this. He wouldn’t let his fear get in the way. He rushed at the lizard, pushing his fear to the corners of his mind, and swung his staff at it. The electrified weapon hit the creature’s leg. It hissed sharply and drew the…[Read more]

@andrew This is awesome! I would agree though, I think the sisters needs some sort of definition. I was a little bit, okay maybe a lot bit confused. Maybe like someone else on here said, give them names in her own head.

@andrew

Oooh, its getting intriguing!

@andrew @kari-karast

“Okay… What just happened there?” Aleck shivered and tugged at the door. “Rats! We’re stuck in here! Lets get through this thing as fast as we can.” The room had dim lighting. “How do we get out of here?” He grabbed at the map. And a horrible ripping sound was heard, as the flimsy piece of paper was torn in two. “Oh, uh…[Read more]

@andrew

Oo, I do not have time to read this right now, but I will if I have a chance. Thanks for tagging me!

@andrew

Yes. Got it!!

It made way more sense than if any of the other characters had done it, but it was still just a little like, “wait, what?” to me. That’s all. 🙂

@andrew

🙂

Oh! I just looked back and it actually wasn’t in dialogue. *facebricks* Whoops! I thought it was in dialogue. But it’s when Nicholas is looking out on the town and thinking about how he should be the one to rule it.

Chloe’s dialogue? Nah, I think it’s fine.

@andrew

🙂

I think that’s a pretty good distinction, but maybe have Chloe give them names inside her head? Like she calls the blond one Blondie or something… does that make sense?

@andrew

Ooh, intriguing!!

And I’m so sorry for not getting back to you sooner with the answers to your questions!! I’ll do them for this piece! (Also, sorry if I sound harsh, I don’t mean to be. I actually really like the story so far!!)

1. Well… there were a couple of places I noticed. Like, in the section about Eric building the house. The…[Read more]

@parker  @evelyn @andrew   @libby  @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt  @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist   @katthewriter  @e-b-raulands  ( please tag some others who think might like this)

This one I wrote in a April several years ago. But I still enjoy it. I hope you do too.

Springtime

Today is a beautiful April day

A s…[Read more]

@andrew, totally clear, and I think its great so far!

@evelyn Ooh, confetti? *throws some more* 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉

@briannastorm Your secret is safe with me (but not with Aberdeen—he’ll tell everyone 🦖😅).

@jessi-rae Perhaps. 😉 You’ll have to wait and see.

@karthmin Thank you! 😜 Your character  was  fun to write (especially with all the SE staff has told me about you 😆).

@andrew Thank you! I can’t w…[Read more]