Andrew Schmidt

@nuetrobolt @kari-karast @anne-of-lothlorien @naiya-dyani @e-b-raulands @everyone

Alright, next chapter out!

Read on and critique if you wish. However, if for some reason any of these scenes you happen to find a little dark or violent (which I hope aren’t), please share your thoughts on them. Thanks and enjoy!

CHAPTER TEN:

The maze was a…[Read more]

@Dakota, nice poems there… 😀 I like them.

@Dakota

I chose to have the several kinds of flowers to show all the variety and differences between each other, as well as friendships to others that are different. That’s kind of where I’m coming from… Thank you for reading! 😀

@Dakota, alright, here’s the next poem in Botanical Tales – The Daisy, the Poppy, and the Lily – but perhaps the last in this various flower-dominated collection. I know it’s only a collections of four poems so far, but, just letting you know. Anyway, here goes this odd poem!

The Daisy, the Poppy, the Lily…

Chat ever quite silly.

All r…[Read more]

@Dakota, awesome work!

@Dakota, thanks!

@Dakota, alright, here’s the next poem! There are a few rhyming sentences… but it’s kind of more free verse, so every single line won’t actually rhyme. Well, anyway, here goes! Enjoy!

Strange Little Orchid:

The Orchid is quite strange.

She is the weirdest,

The spookiest,

The oddest,

The most misunderstood of all.

Her white and pink…[Read more]

@nuetrobolt, thanks. 😀

I hope this story doesn’t take too much more time until it’s done. It’s getting to the end.

And it really doesn’t seem this long, but… I just realized I’ve been writing this story for about a year. I started it sometime in January, 2019. And now it is 2020 already! I’ll try not drag the story out too long. Time passes…[Read more]

Sorry. Yesterday, I realized a mistake in one of the scenes in need of correction. When Zoe stabbed the vampire, I just realized that wasn’t the proper way to kill a vampire; you have to pierce its heart with a wooden stick. So, if you noticed that mistake or not, I will definitely edit that scene… so, just letting you know. Thanks.

@kari-karast @nuetrobolt @anne-of-lothlorien @naiya-dyani @e-b-raulands @everyone

Okay, the next chapter is written! I hope the character aren’t too melodramatic…. Feel free to critique! Thanks everyone.

CHAPTER NINE:

The lush grass shimmered in sunlight. The gentle breeze tugged at her hair. From her window, she gazed upon the colorful…[Read more]

@Dakota and @vic

Good work, both of you!

@Dakota, thanks!!!! 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀

@Dakota, well, here’s another poem. Its name is Sunflower of Valor. Feel free to critique!

Sprouting amongst the garden is a Sunflower.

Legends claim that he is taller than a tower.

His petals are bright, happy, and yellow.

 He bellows in a friendly voice “Hello!”

To each little and tender flower;

Never doeth he grow sour.

The Sunf…[Read more]

@Dakota: wow, I like it! A great poem once more!

My next poem I am writing is about a Sunflower – the second poem of Botanical Tales, (but I might end of changing that title for the collection of poems). Also, the poem collection-to-be, Botanical Tales, sorta kind of takes place in the same world… so, you may meet certain flowers and so forth…[Read more]

@Dakota, thank you so much! 😀

@nuetrobolt, you’re welcome!

@Dakota, well, I guess the tale about the Rose and talking flowers turned out as a poem… I don’t have a name for it yet, though. And please tell me if you think this is too long. Anyway, enjoy!

Once there bloomed a Rose.

Her petals are beautiful and scarlet.

As the lovely garden grows,

The flowers sing cheerfully.

High, high, high in a…[Read more]

@nuetrobolt @naiya-dyani

Thank you for reading, you writers!

@kari-karast @nuetrobolt @anne-of-lothlorien @e-b-raulands @naiya-dyani @all-you-other-amazing-writers

Okay, finally! Sorry if I kept you waiting for a while, but with school and all, I’ve been a little busy. But anyway, Chapter 8 is out!

Also, side note: I know somewhere on this thread where I had talked about the theme being on the lines of…[Read more]

@Dakota, I really like the description, especially that one line… “Glistening gems of rainbow and sunlight”

@naiya-dyani, and nice poem as well! Good job.

Thank y’all for your poems! 😀