Character Castle 2.0
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November 24, 2020 at 11:27 pm #122044
“Yes, I am. Kami Seim.” The guy sounded imperious, and Riure stifled another laugh.
Someone took her hand and tried to lead her away. After hesitating, Riure submitted. Sadiq growled slightly and Riure grasped her scruff for reassurance – for her or her dog, she wasn’t sure.
“Yep, he’s a psychopath,” the person whispered. Male. High voice. Oh, that one! Riure remembered hearing him. She snorted quietly, trying to control her giggles. “I’m Ehud, by the way,” Ehud added.
“Riure, daughter of Hendry,” Riure replied. She patted Sadiq’s head. “This is my guide dog, Sadiq. Where do you come from, if you don’t mind me asking?”
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Joelle Stone.
November 25, 2020 at 9:07 pm #122051âAh, excellent question,â The younger one blurted âI have no idea!â
Gwendolen ‘s grip on the bow loosened slightly. Confusion clouded her mind.
âAre you the king?â A woman asked.                âYes, I am. Kami Seim.â Said the older one.
“Well if your the king” Gwendolen said “than you would know where I am.” She drew back her arrow and pointed it at Kami’s head.
They must have captured her. He must be working with the assassin advisors. Was this the Prince of Themscira? She didn’t think so. But right now she didn’t know what to think.
Beautiful things don't ask for attention
November 25, 2020 at 9:20 pm #122052âRiure, daughter of Hendry,â the giggly girl replied âThis is my guide dog, Sadiq. Where do you come from, if you donât mind me asking?â She had a catchy laugh that fascinated him but he knew he wasnât supposed to try and imitate somebodyâs mannerisms in front of them and he was trying to control himself.
âIâm from Anakara, thatâs one of the sky islands, where I live is the around the capitol but itâs super high security cos of the war,â he said, trying to pet Sadiq without getting bit. âIn fact you gotta spend almost a month prepping before you can breakââŠerhmâŠâ
Biting his lip Ehud turned crimson and swore he wouldnât say another word again. He really shouldnât have said anything, he just made another enemy in a matter of minutes. It was really rude of him, psychopath or not.
âOh,â He bobbed forward to examine her face because she had foggy eyes. He couldnât imagine losing any of his five senses, each bit made the world vivid and exciting. So he took both her hands carefully. âCan I show you around and describe everything for you?â
@joelle-stone
I like Riure, sheâs cute!To be a light to the world you must shine in the darkness.
November 25, 2020 at 10:03 pm #122054Ahh, my sincerest apologies for being completely absent. I’m back now, though, and I’ve read all I missed. (Can I just say how much I love the interactions that are taking place??)
Wow, I thought her simply looked cool, but now that I know how to say it, I love it even more!!
@everyone
Okee dokee, meet my beloveds đ
Konyar (KONE-yar)
 Gender: Male
Dragon Form Appearance: His hide is dappled with the extremely dark forest-green, dark tawny colored splashes, and lustrous black patches. He has a gold-ringlet-pierced ear. His face is long and narrow.
Eyes: oneâs amber colored, the other green.
Human form: Sandy blonde hair; same eyes; lanky frame.
Stance/posture in human form: Relaxed.
(Thereâs a reason for his bit of a wild look–but I wonât get into thatâŠ)
Rilyn (RIE-lin) (I’m still figuring out her name, so I might change it)
Gender: Female
Dragon Form: light grey scales with a darker shade mottled throughout.
Eyes: reddish-orangish-amberish.
Human form: unruly, messy, messy black hair; again, same eyes.
Stance/posture in human form: slouched and awkward, with her feet planted apart like sheâs afraid thereâs about to be an earthquake. (Itâs cause sheâs so unused to being in human form)
"I threw stones at the stars, but the whole sky fell."
November 25, 2020 at 10:08 pm #122056Cool! Let me write that down…
Beautiful things don't ask for attention
November 25, 2020 at 10:09 pm #122058Lol, that’s actually a really smart idea. I should start doing that.
"I threw stones at the stars, but the whole sky fell."
November 25, 2020 at 10:15 pm #122059Honestly, I forget who is who if I don’t write it down and add little cartoons of there faces.đ
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Jasmine.
Beautiful things don't ask for attention
November 25, 2020 at 10:21 pm #122061That’s the best! XD
"I threw stones at the stars, but the whole sky fell."
November 25, 2020 at 10:39 pm #122065âI canât believe I failed,â Rilyn groaned as she and Konyar stalked through the tunnel.
Konyar glanced at her. âDonât worry. The transforming test is probably the hardest one to pass.â
âBut you passed without batting an eye,â she grumbled.
Konyar grinned.âWell, maybe Iâm just exceptional at turning into a human. And I could tutor you if you want.. Give you a little help on the side.â
Rilyn feigned a hurt expression. âAre you saying I need extra help?â
Konyar opened his mouth before snapping it shut again.âMaybe?ââWell, at least Iâm a better-looking human,â Rilyn retorted.
âNo, you are not. Iâm really good-looking, much more than you. Both human and dragon form,â Konyar teased.
Rilyn began to respond, she never finished. Konyar felt icy wind roaring past his ears as he plummeted through pitch-blackness. He almost thought he could hear Rilyn yelling beside him, and he twisted around, reaching out for her. Abruptly, he landed with a thud on solid ground. Konyar pulled himself to his feet and paused, swiveling his head around, wrinkling his snout. âWhereâre we?â
Rilyn opened her mouth to respond, but slowly looked around instead. They were enclosed by a lush forest, and it looked like a garden bloomed beyond the ring of trees.
Konyar met Rilynâs wide-eyed gaze and noticed her ears flicking down. âWait a moment,â Rilyn said suddenly. She shot into the air, dodged the trees, then disappeared behind their shaggy branches.
Konyar heard a loud, âOw!â He grinned as she landed again, folding her wings and scowling. âWhatâd you find?â he asked, still gazing about the forest.
âPain,â she responded. âThereâs some kinda shield up there. Itâs clear, and I ran into it.â
Faint sounds drifted to them. Both of their ears pricked up as their eyes snapped in the direction it wafted from. When they approached the clearingâs edge, they halted and peered through the bushes. A group of fluffy-headed, twig shaped creatures yapped to each other inside. A new one with a dog appeared, and yet another human emerged from the trees on the other side with a bow.
Konyar squinted closer. âTheyâre kinda cute,â he noted. âWhat if they know the way out of…wherever we are?â he asked.
âYeah, or maybe they trapped us here purposely,â Rilyn growled.
âEither way,â Konyar insisted, âI bet I could convince them to show us outâŠâ
They debated the prospect in hushed tones for a few minutes. Konyar closed his eyes, ignoring Rilyn, and experienced a prickling sensation flooding his limbs before the tingling melted into stabs of pain.
Konyar peeled open an eye and looked down at his fleshy hands, flexing them.. He grinned at Rilyn, waved, and pushed through the bushes into the clearing. Heads turned to glance at him.
âHey, huma–guys.â He cleared his throat. He had been about to ask where he and Rilyn were, but one of the humans had admitted they didnât know where they were before Konyar stepped through.âWe donât mean any harm,â he said, glancing at the weapons several wielded. âWeâre just trying to get back home. Howâd we get here?â
âWe?â one repeated. âI only see one of you.â
Konyar glanced at the bushes. âRilyn,â he called. âPlease come out.â
A muffled no greeted him. Konyar had no doubt that Rilyn was burying her snout under her wing. He laughed nervously. âOne…one moment, please.âHe hurried back into the bushes and tugged on her foreleg, cringing slightly at the weird sensation of fingers closing around scales.
Rilyn raised her head. âKonyar,â she hissed. âyou know I just failed the test! I canât turn into a human like you. At least not yet.â
âYou have to,â he whispered back. âThey might not trust us otherwise and think Iâm lying! Plus, theyâd be really freaked by a dragon.â He coached Rilyn through the process, and she melted into a human before his eyes. She swayed, and Konyar grabbed her arm to steady her. Then they pushed through into the clearing. Konyar gulped, prepared to talk his way out of any situation theyâd just walked into.
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Tagging anyone
"I threw stones at the stars, but the whole sky fell."
November 25, 2020 at 10:41 pm #122066Sorry again for the length, but I had to have them realize they can’t fly out and that they need to talk to the other characters đ Future posts shall be much shorter
"I threw stones at the stars, but the whole sky fell."
November 26, 2020 at 9:25 pm #122073âHey humaâguys.â At the sound of the newcomers, Rosario turned and quirked an eyebrow when only one peeked out. He looked almost as nervous as Ehud when he has to talk to new people. âWe donât mean any harm. Weâre just trying to get back home. Howâd we get here?â
Rosario could hear somebody else behind him so she cocked her head at the bushes.
âWe?â she shrugged her folded arms âI only see one of you.â
âRilyn,â the guy whispered furtively âplease come out.â
For a couple minutes there was a hushed argument which apparently the other person lost because she crept forward like someone dragged out of Hades, coal hair blowing over every direction of her face and stunning gold-red eyes. She had potential, with a little work she was pretty enough to catch some male eyes. Now was Rosarioâs chance to melt back into the background so she did slipping toward the arrogant man who would need some softening. She smiled sweetly and dipped her head to him.
âI donât mean to be too forward, senor, but you strike me a very powerful man.â She flipped her hair with her most practiced carelessness. Everyone needed to be on her side, every asset she can get is one less enemy. Of course he disgusts her but sheâs kissed up to a lot of pigs before, sheâll do what it takes. Rosario caught him whispering to Ehud and that blind girl and Ehud seemed unnerved by whatever he said. So she need to gauge him and how to take him down.`Tagging @millennium, or anyone who wants to jump in XD
To be a light to the world you must shine in the darkness.
November 26, 2020 at 9:26 pm #122074âHey look-er, umâŠâ Ehud cringed and gave her an apologetic look before realizing she wouldnât catch nonverbal cues. âIâm so sorryâŠum, well, two more people just appeared, a girl and boy. Man, I was hoping for a dragon.â
Riure laughed and Ehud reddened, grinning sheepishly. He didnât know what to do with her. She was so cute and delicate and frail and currently the youngest member of theirâŠwhatever. Therefore, he would protect (spoil) her no matter what.
Ehud didnât want to offend anybody. It was only a matter of time before he let her down and/or she realized just how incompetent he was. He shouldnât have said anything to Kami, he felt so guilty even though he knew it was irrational.
âDo you want to go to them?â He was still holding her hands, ready to guide her through to anybody she wanted to talk to. He was gonna feel sick with guilt. Stupid roller-coaster emotions.`To be a light to the world you must shine in the darkness.
November 27, 2020 at 12:57 pm #122098Man, I was hoping for a dragon.â
Lol. Don’t worry, Ehud will get his dragon soon.. *laughs evilly*Â Ehud is so sweet, btw! How he wants to describe things to Riure and introduce her to the other newcomers..
"I threw stones at the stars, but the whole sky fell."
November 27, 2020 at 5:12 pm #122106“Hey look – er, um,” Ehud trailed off, then burst forth with a frantic apology. “I’m so sorry! Um, two more people just appeared, a girl and a boy. Man, I was hoping for a dragon.”
Riure couldn’t hold back a laugh. Ehud was pretty funny. She liked him. He reminded her of Kishna, in a way.
“Do you want to go to them?”
Riure shrugged, taking one hand from his and making sure Sadiq was still there – which, of course, she was. The dog seemed distracted though. Perhaps she was seeing something she didn’t like. For the thousandth time Riure wished she could actually see through her dog’s eyes. Ah, well, best make do with what she had. “Sure,” she replied lightly. “Although…” Something seemed off. All of her nerves were suddenly tensed. She cocked her head, listening. Oh. The boy’s tone of voice. He’d been scared, or nervous. Yep, definitely had to meet them now. “Nevermind. Race you?”
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November 28, 2020 at 9:14 pm #122122@mischievous-thwapling
Aw thanks! He really is one of my sweeter characters I really enjoy writing him. I loved that with Konyar trying to convince Rilyn to come out, that was so funny!Riure dropped a hand to check on her dog so Ehud immediately stopped trying to pet it.
âSure, althoughâŠâ She tilted her head at him oddly for a second. âNevermind. Race you?â
âUhâŠrace?â Without a definitive sense of directionâŠHe wasnât quite sure how sheâdâŠand anyway, it couldnât be a fair race Ehudâs spend his whole life outrunning; gangs, angry people, government agents etc. Riure bent over and whispered something to her dog who jumped after the people barking.
âWhat are youâŠ?â
âGo!â She dashed after the sound of her dog giggling uncontrollably.
âWha-hey!â He burst out laughing and chased her. The two new people werenât far away and Riure skidded to a stop ahead of him in seconds. Ehud knocked into the new guy with the mismatched eyes who jerked back awkwardly. Still laughing despite his best efforts, Ehud tumbled backwards and grinned sheepishly before enthusiastically throwing the blind girlâs hands in the air.
âYou won! Heh, youâre pretty fast, erhmâŠsorry?â Ehud glanced up at the person he bowled over and tried unsuccessfully to stifle his laughter. It was pretty much impossible because Riure was still laughing and her laughter tickled.
âThis is, this is Riure,â he jostled her shoulder playfully âand Iâm Ehud!â
@joelle-stone, I wasnât quite sure how sheâd race him so I went with the first thing that came to me, I can edit real easy if ya want tho đTo be a light to the world you must shine in the darkness.
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