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omi replied to the topic Lonely Sonnet in the forum Poets 5 years, 2 months ago
@dakota Thank you!! I’ll try to post more of my other works here as much as I can 😀
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Dakota replied to the topic Lonely Sonnet in the forum Poets 5 years, 2 months ago
@omi This is just lovely!! I don’t see anything I would change in it. Good work. 🙂
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omi replied to the topic Lonely Sonnet in the forum Poets 5 years, 2 months ago
Thanks so much!! Is there anything I can do to improve more? I’m willing to learn anything to improve in my craft. 🙂 @kimlikesart
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Kimmi replied to the topic Lonely Sonnet in the forum Poets 5 years, 2 months ago
That was beautiful @omi .
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omi started the topic Lonely Sonnet in the forum Poets 5 years, 2 months ago
Hello! I’ve been writing some poems and it’s my first time to share some of them. Here’s one that I’d love to share. This is my first time and attempt to write a sonnet and I hope I can learn and improve in the future. 🙂
Lonely Sonnet
The moonlight brushed up across his pale face
As his trembling soul could not recover
He dreamt about…[Read more]
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omi joined the group Poets 5 years, 2 months ago
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sparrowhawke replied to the topic Poetry Critique Wanted in the forum Poets 5 years, 3 months ago
Thank you @Dakota!
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Dakota replied to the topic Poetry Critique Wanted in the forum Poets 5 years, 3 months ago
@sparrowhawke I really enjoyed reading them all! Hope you win the contest. 🙂
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sparrowhawke started the topic Poetry Critique Wanted in the forum Poets 5 years, 3 months ago
Hi guys,
I just finished a mini collection of five poems inspired by The Scarlet Letter. I am submitting it to a young authors contest for my homeschool group, but the contest isn’t that intense or anything (as far as I know, only a few other people have signed up). Still, I would like to get some feedback on it. I mainly want to know if the…[Read more]
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Catholic Creed joined the group Poets 5 years, 3 months ago
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Kylie S. Pierce replied to the topic The Party Tree in the forum Poets 5 years, 3 months ago
That was really good! I enjoyed it a lot, and I say that you have a knack for writing poetry. The fact that it was based on something on LotR helped too. 🙂
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Thank you, Kylie! That means a lot! I actually got it published on Kingdom Pen last month: https://kingdompen.org/the-party-tree-a-poem/
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Tudor Turcu posted an update in the group Historical Fiction Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
Hello, historical fiction community. I’m Tudor, I live in Germany, and I’ve always had a passion for history, especially American history (Revolutionary War, California Gold Rush, Civil War, Wild West, Indian Wars, you name it). The old KJV language has been a major influence on my writing style (reading the Bible in English has been a great way…[Read more]
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Tudor Turcu joined the group Historical Fiction Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
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Katherine Baker joined the group Poets 5 years, 3 months ago
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Cassandra Blenkin started the topic Hello there! in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 5 years, 4 months ago
Greetings, writers of the Historical fashion! I am happy to meet you all here in a place of common interest.
A bit about myself: I emmensly enjoy Historical fiction, specifically that which occurs in ancient Rome. My favourite book is The Eagle of the Ninth by Rosemary Sutcliff, a historical novel taking place in Roman Briton. I have a deep…[Read more]
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Cassandra Blenkin joined the group Historical Fiction Writers 5 years, 4 months ago
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claire replied to the topic Help with historical mystery fiction in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 5 years, 4 months ago
Yay, I’m so glad my suggestion helped! 🙂 And yes, I would definitely want to keep reading! (I’ve read a lot of books from that time period too, so I can totally relate with it becoming your style 😉 ) I saw that you mentioned The Hidden Hand in your introduction thread. It’s one of my favorites too! Your book so far reminds me a lot of…[Read more]
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katie02 replied to the topic Help with historical mystery fiction in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 5 years, 4 months ago
Oh, and I forgot to mention that I do read a lot of books written in the 1800s and early 1900s, and that’s kind of become my style. 🙂 I don’t know if it’s annoying to most modern day readers, but I was hoping since the book was set in that historical era, that people’d be okay with it.
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katie02 replied to the topic Help with historical mystery fiction in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 5 years, 4 months ago
@claire-h WOW, thanks so much! This was super helpful.
I think one of my problems was that the Frys where so entertaining that I didn’t want to make light of the guy being shot and missing, and I overcompensated on the melodrama, whoops. I toned them both down a little now. I do want the story to be somewhat realistic, although I do have a fairly…[Read more]
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claire replied to the topic Help with historical mystery fiction in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 5 years, 4 months ago
Thank you for sharing your work! I know it takes a lot of courage sometimes. 🙂 I really enjoyed this snippet! Great job with the characters …and the mysterious happenings. Mr. and Mrs. Bill Fry are so entertaining. XD So here are the few thoughts I had:
First off, this story reads like it was written in the 1800s. Have you read a lot…[Read more]
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