Brooke

AHSOKA TANO

I stretch my arms and legs as I step out of the carbonite. My skin is clammy, and my eyesight is blurry, but I can still see Anakin Skywalker emerge from his carbon-freezing block beside me, enveloped in a cloud of steam. I smile to myself as I work my arms to get the blood moving. He won’t be happy.

“Hey, Snips,” my master says…[Read more]

Link didn’t work, arrggg! Just look up “Ahsoka,” and find a picture where she has two green lightsabers. That should be the one. 😉

@kylie-wingfeather

Ahh!!! You’re back!!! I didn’t need to send cloven, fangs, and dragons after you after all!!!

LOL! 😛

Aw, thanks! And I’ll certainly check out the WS RP when I get a chance, ha ha 😉

@winter_rose

Yeah, you can definitely bring Ahsoka in! I have a little part about Luke in the castle posted earlier, but let’s just pretend that…

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KIARK

The ground was cold, clammy cold, and damp. I could feel it seeping through my tunic. My muscles were cramped, and I cracked my neck as I slowly sat up to get my bearings.

All I saw was black.

I leapt to my feet, my heart suddenly going like a racehorse’s. “Great Klyde,” I whispered hoarsely, staring all around me. It was so dark, so bla…[Read more]

@kylie-wingfeather  @winter_rose

*peeks head around corner*

Oooo, this looks like a ton of fun! Great idea, Kylie! May I join? I have no knowledge whatsoever when it comes to Harry Potter, except that he is a boy with large glasses and goes to a school for wizards, so I may need some filling in there, or I can just learn as we go along! 😉 I…[Read more]

@joelle-stone

Wow. Thanks for your feedback! It’s very helpful. For most of your questions, I can only say that it’s a simplified version. The real version has more details and much more flowery language.

Oh, I see! Thank you! And whoa, your real version must be super long! 😀

So, the rebellious pieces are Ice, Fire, and Water. Riure was sayin…

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Ok, I’m back after just about forever!!!!! 😀

@this-is-not-an-alien

That was an awesome explanation and really helped explain why Ehud does things the way he does! You really know your characters personally! 😀

Also, your guess got several things right! 😛 How did you make it? 😀

And I love Ehud’s enthusiasm for…[Read more]

@mischievous-thwapling

haha, thanks. I suppose that’s part of my “job,” being a writer and all.

Well, now you know you’re doing something right, lol

OH OHH!!! That’s so cool! *glances at Wylo, new respect for him welling up inside*

Ha ha! Thank you! I like coming up with quotes for each of my characters; something that defines what they believe…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

Thank you! I’m glad you liked my character rant, lol. And villains’ character arcs are some of the most interesting!

Ha ha, don’t worry about it! All the characters get confusing for everyone at some point, XD

Btw, I love Rosario’s little light thing! Ehud is only an idiot in some areas, ha ha. He’s actually very…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

You asked Rose why Darth Vader was one of her most favorite Star Wars characters, but it was actually me who said it, ha ha ;). I think you just got confused what with all the block-quoting, XD Anyhow…. you gave me permission to get started (THANK YOU!!), so here goes nothing (if you drop down dead, I told you so :P):

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@rose-colored-fancy

I really like how you’re writing Kiark! I can see how he’s trying and struggling. It’s really fun to read! I hope he gets better though…

Thank you! I’m glad I’m not completely boring you 😛 Part of the reason for all the monologue is me trying to figure him out. And yes, he does turn over a new leaf (which I am persona…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

Thank you! I also struggle with worldview, and I actually didn’t plan any of this. It’s actually quite funny, I had no idea what Liorah was like until I began to write. Then, she just took shape in the second chapter and ran away with the story XD

That is so awesome! I love when characters do that! Like Kiark, I didn’t rea…[Read more]