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Wingiby Iggiby replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
Wow. Thanks for your feedback! It’s very helpful. For most of your questions, I can only say that it’s a simplified version. The real version has more details and much more flowery language.
Oh, I see! Thank you! And whoa, your real version must be super long! 😀
So, the rebellious pieces are Ice, Fire, and Water. Riure was saying that the leaders were the rebellious pieces there. 🙂 As for the Guardians and Kening, I cut out a part about them for condensing purposes. 😉
Oh, I totally get it now! Thank you! And I’m glad you didn’t forget about the Guardians, ha ha, cause they were interesting 😉
My deepest thanks for your feedback! This is one of the hardest parts of my book.
You’re totally welcome! 😀
(Also, I loved the part about bringing pillows and ice cream and blankets and, funniest of all, “Go Hero” and “Die Villain” signs. You made my day. XD)
Ha ha, thank you!! I love to make peoples’ days.
Wingiby!! *bowls you over with a hug*
*Recovers from hug* THWAP!!!!!!!
Ooooh! *takes “Die Villain!” sign and playfully whacks Konyar with it.*Konyar grabs another “Go Hero!” sign, and a lightsaber-like fight ensues with the signs. *Makes mistake of whacking Rilyn with the sign, and she turns into dragon forms, grabs the sign, and snaps it in half with a raised brow. *Gets message and scampers off to eat candy and ice cream with Wingiby*
Love it!!!! 😀 “Lightsaber-like fight,” lol
Hmmm… Good point. I’d nearly forgotten about the worst fear thing. I agree with @jasmine that’d it probably work well if they all had their worst fears in their dreams, but I’m good with whatever!!
Ok, looks like we’re doing dreams! *rubs hands together and finds panel on keyboard labeled “TORMENT,” then finds button stamped with “DREAM.”
Thank you! It’s actually a joke since it’s Turkish for ‘king’. Yes, I named him king King. I thought that was funny XD
Ok, that is a totally awesome name! I love the idea of “King King.”
That’s awesome! XD *Sits down beside you and grabs a spoon for the ice-cream*
I just love how y’all join in with me 🙂
And that was a wonderful worst fear!! (well, the fear isn’t wonderful, but you get what I mean) It was very unique and shows more of Liorah!! And I love what she said to Ehud 🙂
“You can still help us.”
That sent chills up my spine! Awesome job!
That look Wylo gave Ehud is exactly what he would have done! And please, DO NOT TORMENT POOR EHUD ANY MORE!!!! He has gone through so much!!! 🙁 We cannot harm him anymore!!!!! It is so sad!!! Now I am so sad!!!! *goes off to weep*
And I loved your last post, btw.
@everyone
Since we are doing this, let me try:
Me: *sitting and typing.*
Kiark: *looks over my shoulder.*
Me: *frantically closes out of page and google searches a definition for a word.*
Kiark: *still hovering* What are you writing about?
Me: Nothing! *I have been staring at the definition for too long*
Kiark: *clicks into my doc before I can stop him and gives me murderous look* What are you doing?!
Me: *blank*
Kiark: Let me make your worst dream come true. *draws sword*
Me: *slams computer shut to trap him inside the doc.* I will never. do. that. again!










