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  • Wingiby Iggiby replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago

    @joelle-stone

    Wow. Thanks for your feedback! It’s very helpful. For most of your questions, I can only say that it’s a simplified version. The real version has more details and much more flowery language.

    Oh, I see! Thank you! And whoa, your real version must be super long! 😀

    So, the rebellious pieces are Ice, Fire, and Water. Riure was saying that the leaders were the rebellious pieces there. 🙂 As for the Guardians and Kening, I cut out a part about them for condensing purposes. 😉

    Oh, I totally get it now! Thank you! And I’m glad you didn’t forget about the Guardians, ha ha, cause they were interesting 😉

    My deepest thanks for your feedback! This is one of the hardest parts of my book.

    You’re totally welcome! 😀

    (Also, I loved the part about bringing pillows and ice cream and blankets and, funniest of all, “Go Hero” and “Die Villain” signs. You made my day. XD)

    Ha ha, thank you!! I love to make peoples’ days.

    @mischievous-thwapling

    Wingiby!! *bowls you over with a hug*

    *Recovers from hug* THWAP!!!!!!!

    Ooooh! *takes “Die Villain!” sign and playfully whacks Konyar with it.*Konyar grabs another “Go Hero!” sign, and a lightsaber-like fight ensues with the signs. *Makes mistake of whacking Rilyn with the sign, and she turns into dragon forms, grabs the sign, and snaps it in half with a raised brow. *Gets message and scampers off to eat candy and ice cream with Wingiby*

    Love it!!!! 😀 “Lightsaber-like fight,” lol

    Hmmm… Good point. I’d nearly forgotten about the worst fear thing. I agree with @jasmine that’d it probably work well if they all had their worst fears in their dreams, but I’m good with whatever!!

    Ok, looks like we’re doing dreams! *rubs hands together and finds panel on keyboard labeled “TORMENT,” then finds button stamped with “DREAM.”

    @rose-colored-fancy

    Thank you! It’s actually a joke since it’s Turkish for ‘king’. Yes, I named him king King. I thought that was funny XD

    Ok, that is a totally awesome name! I love the idea of “King King.”

    That’s awesome! XD *Sits down beside you and grabs a spoon for the ice-cream*

    I just love how y’all join in with me 🙂

    And that was a wonderful worst fear!! (well, the fear isn’t wonderful, but you get what I mean) It was very unique and shows more of Liorah!! And I love what she said to Ehud 🙂

    @jasmine

    “You can still help us.”

    That sent chills up my spine! Awesome job!

    @this-is-not-an-alien

    That look Wylo gave Ehud is exactly what he would have done! And please, DO NOT TORMENT POOR EHUD ANY MORE!!!! He has gone through so much!!! 🙁 We cannot harm him anymore!!!!! It is so sad!!! Now I am so sad!!!! *goes off to weep*

    And I loved your last post, btw.

    @everyone

    Since we are doing this, let me try:

    Me: *sitting and typing.*

    Kiark: *looks over my shoulder.*

    Me: *frantically closes out of page and google searches a definition for a word.*

    Kiark: *still hovering* What are you writing about?

    Me: Nothing! *I have been staring at the definition for too long*

    Kiark: *clicks into my doc before I can stop him and gives me murderous look* What are you doing?!

    Me: *blank*

    Kiark: Let me make your worst dream come true. *draws sword*

    Me: *slams computer shut to trap him inside the doc.* I will never. do. that. again!

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