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@anne_the_noob14

Thank you 😀  And I like yours as well — us fumbling human beings are often concerned and worried when there is absolutely no logical reason to be.

Have you heard the song “Good Directions?” Thank God for good directions…. and turnip greens! 😛

@joelle-stone

Hey, yeah! Come’on! And, like Cathy stated, cool pic! *pause*…[Read more]

@mischievous-thwapling

Thank you! That name is really cool 😉 And yeah, Ahab is pretty fed up with this whole crowd, XD

How ’bout we do booby trap room, and once they get out of that, they get into the fountain room?! That way we can do both and see how they all react! This is going to be interesting…

@this-is-not-an-alien

Oh, don’t feel…[Read more]

@joelle-stone

Aleena sounds like an AWESOME judge! I can literally see her in my head, LOL, which is sorta weird. I can also almost hear her sarcastic voice, just because I imagine her that way. Strange. Hm.

And– I was going to say more but I gtg. I’ll fill ya’ll in later with my numerous and confusing thoughts! 😛

@joelle-stone

Thanks! 😀

Contacting the Blurter now….

Okay, she says thank you so much! She is so thankful that you and Mel and Rose are willing to do a bunch of the developing because while she likes to do it, and work it out in her head, she has not the patience to type it all out.

@mischievous-thwapling

That is not a terrible idea at all!! I was actually thinking next to the same thing, so yeah. 😀 I don’t really feel like coming up with yet another backstory or stuff, so I think that will work fine. 😉

@crazywriter

Yes! The machine should get broken. And maybe my brain is backfiring this afternoon or something, but who…[Read more]

Ahab narrowed his eyes at the small crowd. He had almost laughed when Gnat — or Allen now, he supposed — said he was a cadet. Erin — the snotty lady — was no less snobbish than ever, and the Monkey/Couch Potato — Ehud — was just as fretful. Calixta had given her name, and now they all looked at him expectantly.

“The name’s Ahab.”

He had t…[Read more]

@mischievous-thwapling

Oh yeah, Googles got pretty much everything you want, LOL 😛 It looks like the perfect Thwap habitat!

And I like Colma’s alias! Do you say it the way it’s written?

Ok….. I just posted twice. Dear me. Sorry about that! And not all of the tags worked either… *sigh*

@winter_rose

BACKSTORY OF ANDOR

Andor was born on the planet of Mortar, to a wealthy family much renowned in that region for their kindness and generosity. He grew up among servants and lush gardens and fancy rooms. He grew up with his every need met on the double, and he had dozens of friends. He had everything a boy could wish for — and more. His parents…[Read more]

@melodyjoy   @joelle-stone   @winter-rose

This is Andor’s backstory revised. Let me know your thoughts! 😉

BACKSTORY OF ANDOR

Andor was born on the planet of Mortar, to a wealthy family much renowned in that region for their kindness and generosity. He grew up among servants and lush gardens and fancy rooms. He grew up with his every need met…[Read more]

@winter_rose

Oh yeah! I think that black crystal gun thingy sounds great! They could also have stun-guns or something.

Oooo! Those are some great names! Void Hunters sounds really cool, as do the others, but I think the Elite Police or that one would work best. Andor doesn’t think he’s doing wrong by sending them out, so having a scary name…[Read more]

@mischievous-thwapling

Thank you! 😀 And I LOVE your profile pic!!! Where is it? I’m assuming somewhere in the Western United States, but I’m not sure.

@this-is-not-an-alien

Do you feel as bad for your character as I do right now?!

@winter_rose

Ok, I just realized that in my last post, I kept repeating things but with different words. Yeah. I have a bad habit of doing that, especially when typing. It makes it confusing! So sorry about that. 😉 I will keep a tab on my repetition and start being concise and right to the point.

I am now being concise and right to the…[Read more]

@writergirl101

Thank you! I do have to say that if I had set out to write something like this on my own, it probably wouldn’t have turned out good at all. It really helps when a whole bunch of people brainstorm and work together. They point out things you never noticed, come up with ideas, and can do a lot of the world-building, developing, etc.…[Read more]

I hope I didn’t post to much stuff happening, I guess I just wanted to get them all out of the room. 😀

Ahab gave the girl a bit of a boost as she clambered into the hole after Mr. Monkey, who apparently had gotten hold of his inherited climbing skills. Gnat was nowhere to be seen, but that was of no consequence considering he could hardly be seen anyway. Ahab was just glad the girl had permitted his assistance without much trouble and a way out was…[Read more]

@melodyjoy

Menace64 is a good name. IS that for the rebellion group?

Yup! 😉

We need to develop these, right? Like how they are played, rules, how you get eliminated, etc?

Esshh…. MORE DEVELOPING!!!! Maybe we could each take a couple and work out the rules for those?

 8×4 is not 64. It’s 32.

Isn’t this a prime example of how careless I can be…[Read more]