Trallion

@jared-williams

ah. sorry, rose-colored-fancy, didn’t see your post till after I posted mine.

Don’t worry, same here 🙂 I like your idea better though! We can go with that one, I didn’t have anything planned beyond “Get the characters moving again”

ah. sorry, @rose-colored-fancy, didn’t see your post till after I posted mine.

but for those new on here, here is a photo of Abirami without his robe on, and below that is Ku’Aya. Both are generic but close renditions of what they look like.

Whoa… hang on I think I got confused XD Enydd, Avin, and Abirami are already with the others, Just ignore that bit XD

oomph…. yeah. Lol. Abirami saved you guys. lol… so, my post, I was shooting ice at the bugs to keep them at bay, then I transformed into a large worm, swallowed you guys up in the water and then transported you safely into the room everyone else was and spat you out, froze the hole I had made in the wall closed so the insects couldn’t get…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

Ophelia

“No problem! I can change my dreams!!” The boy blurted. He had a sheepish, awkward grin.

He tilted his head like an inquisitive bird and added,

“Well…I can change where I go in dreams like when dreams have like this plotted out path you’re supposed to go but I can go anywhere I want!! But if I try to change to…[Read more]

@emily-waldorf

Haha, thanks!! He’s one of my favorite POVs to write he’s just so adorable!

I’m hoping to start writing his comic sometime soon this year, I have a newsletter for it but I am not a reliable updater XDDD

@this-is-not-an-alien I love Ehud. He’s so awkward and lovable and dwaa!

*ginormous grin* Grosssss!

I’ll take ten!!!

“Ooh, I do!” A perky voice replied. “I don’t even understand it the second time but sometimes I know what’s coming!”

She said. She looked like a girl who had just stumbled out of an anime academy. Ehud instantly felt a connection, they were the same brand of weird, it was stunning and epic! After…[Read more]

“You remind me of someone I used to know…” Someone spoke, not loudly, but not in a whisper. “Nathair, at your service.”

Nithel glanced over his shoulder, brows quirked. Is he speaking to me? ‘Snake’ or ‘Serpent’ was looking at Nithel; Nithel wondered about the parents, that would name their child such. Nithel nodded to him, slowly. “Nithel,…[Read more]

Avin

He watched Enydd dive into the stream before following. He’d not been swimming for more than a few seconds before he began to collide with huge pieces of ice. One crashed against his shoulder, and he dodged away from another coming at his head. Through a blur, he thought he saw a shape swimming in the stream, spewing the ice into the dim…[Read more]

The blind one was grumbling about glass in his foot and threatening to pick a mirror at random.

His bleeding foot looked painful. (*Me: Go figure.*)

He’d observed that sometimes other people wince when someone else is in pain, even if they don’t know them too well. But, he’s never experienced that, it just fascinated him.

That boy Alessio alway…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

How much ya paying

No pay – this would legit be a free thing I put out on the internet for funzies.

You do remember you should do things for fun, right?

Right?!

Anyway, it’s a loooooong way in the future. If at all. Just seems like it would be fun. 🤷‍♀️

Ophelia

We were being attacked by a swarm of bugs. This was glorious, it was like something out of a dream or a storybook. I grinned.

Okay, so we were supposed to get up to that door. I paused to take off my shoes. I trusted my feet more than my shoes. I shoved them in my purse and swung it around to my back so they wouldn’t fall out.

Alaric…[Read more]

@jared-williams

That was a fun post! I think I might change Cal’s part in it, as she definitely wouldn’t let Abirami help her XD But it doesn’t really change anything about the story, so that’s not an issue!

Also I think you might have confused two characters! Cal has blue hair, @calidris ‘ Kit is the one with pink…[Read more]

@k-a-grey

Thank you so much for the critique!

Ah, yes- good point. I’ve been guilty of abrupt resolutions before. XD In fact, in just about all my recent short stories. xP

So that was really good advice, thanks! God bless you! ;D

@kingdomfire7  Hey now, don’t put yourself or your story down!  I did read it, but since I don’t really consider myself a fantasy writer, I wasn’t able to comment unless I joined the group. That being said, I’m willing to offer some critique if you’d care to hear it!

First off, I really enjoyed this story!  I like the title “From Earth You Ca…[Read more]

@kimlikesart

❤️You need emoji coffee and cake 🙂✌️❤️

☕☕☕🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🥧🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂☕☕☕

Pretty good, I’m at the end of my second semester now and my next semester’s more in-person. That’ll be a little crazy but we’ll figure it out!

I wanna room with one of my friends irl coz she and I both want our own place and she’s planning to find an apartment that’s in…[Read more]

*scuttles out of cave in great agitation dramatically abandoning an outline in a fit*

*notices blinking red alarm light*

*checks it out*

“forum update from” *checks date* “three days ago?! HOW?”

@noah-cochran

Wow, three books in one book? Is it gonna be 200k+ words? If so, fantastic! (I have a great liking for long books that aren’t C…

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