Cathy

Wh- Noy. Again.

The thought came from the solemn man who had switched his thinking to another language. The increasingly annoying one with the air of mystery swirling around him. Malvat ran his tongue over his teeth, doing his best to pretend like he hadn’t heard.

“There are probably better ways to die,” Alessio muttered. Louder he said, “Wel…[Read more]

@jasmine,

Yes! Wow, you guessed that quickly. I guess I’ll have to work on my riddle-making skills, Lol.

Nope, the riddle was really good!! I just happened to have wind on my mind. 😛

@rose-colored-fancy & @this-is-not-an-alien,

Great posts, you guys! 😀

@this-is-not-an-alien

Wow, thank you so much!

@skylarynn

Awwww poor wyvern. *hopes it doesn’t get killed or whatever*

@emma-walker

*sighs contentedly* Thank you. I needed that. I’ve been having kind of a stressful afternoon, and your new segment was very calming to read. Thank you.

@this-is-not-an-alien thanks!

@this-is-not-an-alien

In what I am thinking right now, he is going to probably be a bad guy…he is from a different world and comes to earth, finds her, and takes her back (her being there happens in the second part I put) she will meet him but not remember who he is…we find he’s a villain and voila i don’t know the rest

@this-is-not-an-alien

Yes, I really wanna question assumptions people make about what kind of people are ‘mature’ or ‘immature’ and what’s the definition of each term there. And yeah, I can tell you depression–or any strong emotion like that–can make you totally or selectively oblivious.

You’re doing a good job of that! I don’t take anything Ehud…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

Thank you so much!  Though I must say, scrumptious is a new one.  I usually get told it’s vivid or descriptive.  And since you said something, here’s more!

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It was a dark mottled grey lurking in the shadow of the donjon.  One leathery wing was unfurled in the sunlight.  In size it was perhaps smaller than expected, thou…[Read more]

When Alessio pivoted toward the doorway Nithel jumped to his feet.

He grabbed the bag the Son of Aden had been told to pick up, before he disappeared. Shoving dried fruits in as well as the potatoes, he ran his dry tongue over his teeth.

Brendin was following Alessio, and the woman was giving the giant lizard a remark. We are going to destroy…[Read more]

@skylarynn

Aw, that’s too bad! I hope life calms down a bit for you.

@this-is-not-an-alien @hannahrenner

I guess that just leaves me then*gulp*

Dominic inched forward into the room with a black and white checkered floor. His mind spun as he was thinking about everything that had just happened, so quickly. He made his way to the far end of…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

OF COURSE WE’VE MISSED YOU!!

@Everyone:

Okay, good to know! (About your critiquing preferences)

@melancholicwriter

Okay, critique. Um, you never mentioned where the main character and the other guy are, or what the main character’s name is, or anything for readers to go on. Do you get into that later, since this is a…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien @hannahrenner @erynne

Sorry for the absence, my world’s been a bit tumultuous of late and I haven’t had much opportunity to catch up on this story.  Since there’s no sign of the tumult lessening anytime soon, I’m going to gracefully bow my way out of this story (but I’ll try to keep an eye on it).  Hopefully I can return s…[Read more]

( @kimlikesart @this-is-not-an-alien @joelle-stone sorry for the delay, I got really into writing my own story again and forgot about this one)

“How do you control your fire?” Alessio asked finally.

Brendin thought a moment, glancing down at where the black mark was hidden just under his sleeve.  He hadn’t always carried the syne, he knew…[Read more]

How are you all doing?

@joelle-stone @skylarynn @this-is-not-an-alien

Nithel wanted to be near Alessio, but there were things he couldn’t give him. And eavesdropping on conversations was not something he wished to do.

Nithel looked away while Alessio and Brendin spoke. Thinking. Considering. Going over the moments before he had stepped through the door of Amit’s shop… and fell through stone. He went over all of…[Read more]

@joelle-stone @this-is-not-an-alien

Alright, let’s try this again

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Ada Warin was beautiful in a wild, hunted way, almost as if she were a faerie fawn in the guise of a girl.  Her narrow face was sharp and fearful.  Trepidatious.  It was framed with waist-length knotted brown curls that tangled in the lightest breeze, and shaped by high an…[Read more]

@jasmine

Exactly! The way my my friend and I made the story, her character was the smart one, and my character was the strong one so they complemented each other as a team.

Awesome! I can totally see how that would work!

Ok, also, did you find your riddle online or make it up? I’m very inexperienced at riddle making, do you think you could give m…

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Oh is the passenger Karayan?

@this-is-not-an-alien If you must know the passenger is Fyrian, the pyromaniacal nature spirit.