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Brooke replied to the topic Hello! Is anybody in the mood to critique a short story? 😀 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 2 months ago
Checking to see if this will post . . . .
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 2 months ago
@mischievous-thwapling a lot, I think 🙂 I don’t know if I’ve introduced myself, but I’m calidris, and I’m semi-new here lol. Would you like a run down of the situation?
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Mischievous Thwapling replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 2 months ago
AHHHH I LOVE YOUR NEW PROFILE PIC – I’M ASSUMING YOU DREW IT? WHO’S IT OF???????
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Mischievous Thwapling replied to the topic City Seekers (Seekers of Londima) in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 2 months ago
Ian leaned against a rough tree trunk, studying the newcomers in his small camp. As he watched them in the flickering campfire light, he could’ve sworn the ice-blue-eyed girl was gazing at him back.
But after a moment she was jumping to her feet and running over to the pointy-eared fellow, the one who talked all elegantly and mysteriously.
Ian’s…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Villains’ Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 2 months ago
Meira blinked at the new stranger, watching everything that happened. Interesting to note the feathery adorable monster that bites everything is called ‘a goose’. She kinda tilts onto her spear as the silver-haired man buried his face in his knees. Now, Meira is a momfriend. A really baaad momfriend. The kind of momfriend that would coo over a sup…[Read more]
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Mischievous Thwapling replied to the topic City Seekers (Seekers of Londima) in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 2 months ago
I’M BAAAAAACCCCKKKKKKKKKKK –
for the most part*strokes chin and reads posts* Interesting, interesting… SHAPESHIFTERS!
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Mischievous Thwapling replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 2 months ago
GUYS I’M BACK.
*looks around*
What’d I miss? Did Zanar die some terrible fate?
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 2 months ago
Bring dynamite instead 🥰
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Noah Cochran replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 2 months ago
My situation exactly Rose. xD
You’re right. Haven’t y’all ever heard the saying: “Never bring a gun to a sword fight.” 😉
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 2 months ago
11:49 pm
She’s really scared. For a second there I thought she would kill me but I think she’d kill anything that came near me here. I really wish I could remember…The last thing I can remember is when me and my brother left Dad and started working at Gheon’s bar. It was the last day I ever had to go to school so that was a plus…
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 2 months ago
That’s an awesome idea!
@everyone
I’ll try to post soon but school started recently and I’m still trying to balance school, life, SE, and actually writing. Sorry if I’m less active than usual 🙂
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calidris replied to the topic Villains’ Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 2 months ago
“You don’t know what a goose is? Where are you from where there are no geese?” Kongar asked. Chantara snorted disdainfully. The Shrike smiled grimly.
Wouldn’t you like to know…
Kongar grinned at her mockingly. “Well, farm girl, tell them.”
“Tell them yourself,” Chantara snapped. Kongar raised his eyebrows as she gritted her teeth.
“That…[Read more]
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Rusted Knight replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 2 months ago
@noah-cochran
I got you swordsmen (and women) in mind. In CQB, range of weapons become less important. Reflexes and speed are the name of the game. Klein will go to a rooftop and establish overwatch to get an idea of how many targets there are. He will try to cut down some of them but the urban environment will create many blind spots. Spots…[Read more] -
Rose replied to the topic Villains’ Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 2 months ago
Ahh yeah, I didn’t quite think that one through although I tried to convince the stubborn characters you needed Pawns to leave the room but that didn’t work so, say, Pawns provide hints, clues and also in the next room they have to fight so they need score an army or something?
Or say each player, character etc has to get like five Pawns with var… -
Rose replied to the topic Hello! Is anybody in the mood to critique a short story? 😀 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 2 months ago
, the harp is such a beautiful instrument! And yes, I can read music, but I’ve only memorized one song (well, most of it); do you have a lot memorized? And reading music is so hard, especially when those notes go way up or down, LOL
LOL, nope! Just this week, my harp teacher asked me to play a song from memory. (I know it really w…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Hello! Is anybody in the mood to critique a short story? 😀 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 2 months ago
*kinda peeks in…*
OH @WINGIBY-IGGIBY I MISSED YOU!!!! *bowls over with a hug!*
Oooh *reads shortstory. Oi…dolls, eyeless dolls, soul stealing/twisting…*glances uneasily at my current WIP** That was a fantastic story! Just kinda popping in I think everybody already covered whatever I was gonna critique, but I will add I would legit read a longe…[Read more]
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Brooke replied to the topic Hello! Is anybody in the mood to critique a short story? 😀 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 2 months ago
That’s so cool! I’m still playing harp. Can you read sheet music yet? I remember what an absolute struggle that was to learn XD Learning to sight-read was an uphill battle and until then I had to memorize the songs XD
Oh, the harp is such a beautiful instrument! And yes, I can read music, but I’ve only memorized one song (we…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Hello! Is anybody in the mood to critique a short story? 😀 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 2 months ago
I know! I love piano And yeah, I was taking guitar lessons, but then I decided I wanted to swap them for piano, so yeah, now I’m playing piano.
That’s so cool! I’m still playing harp. Can you read sheet music yet? I remember what an absolute struggle that was to learn XD Learning to sight-read was an uphill battle and until the…[Read more]
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic City Seekers (Seekers of Londima) in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 2 months ago
Shaking her head, Nora answered, “No! I mean, they were always slightly pointed, even when I was little, but I thought that was because my ancestors were elves.”
Lagoron frowned. This was unexpected. Was it normal? What even was going on? As far as he knew, he’d always had pointed ears – Larawen too, and she even had a Man’s blood flowing thro…[Read more]
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Brooke replied to the topic Hello! Is anybody in the mood to critique a short story? 😀 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 2 months ago
That’s a brilliant idea! *Hurriedly looks up picture prompt* Wow, your description was flawless! That looks exactly like I imagined it!
Thank you! 😀
You’re totally welcome! I can’t wait to see it in its proper place as the winner! 😀 You did awesomely and I’m glad I got to read it! It had me thinking about it for hours afterwa…
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