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  • Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago

    Sahar

    Acyn stared at me as though he had no idea what an inconsiderate fool he was being.

    Yila was staring at Leytara as though she would be delighted to murder her.

    I watched her, concerned. Her arm was healing fast, but there was still something off about her. Something that might have nothing to do with her arm.

    Niarok stood in front of…[Read more]

  • Skylarynn replied to the topic Stories and Fantasies in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago

    @rebekah12

    It did kinda die, didn’t it?

    At any rate, I’d say you might want to use pronouns a bit more?  I didn’t read through the whole thing – it’s very long and I have a very small attention span (the joys of ADHD) – but I did read the first segment, and it seemed like you used Culvin’s first name an inordinate amount of times.  I would r…[Read more]

  • Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago

    @noah-cochran

    So how is Dutch weather in the winter?

    Dutch people are good at two things. Complaining about the weather and complaining about prices. I have apparently adopted the former talent.

    Cold. Wet. Dark. In that order XD. I have endless amounts of adjectives (all of them negative) to ascribe to Dutch weather in any of its seasons.…[Read more]

  • Aw, ok! *totally hasn’t done that to myself either* Take your time!

  • Hi everyone!  Update: I am destroyed with too much work. Therefore I will still show up with an awesome character at some point but it will probably take me longer to create said awesome character…

    Okay see y’all around!😁

  • @rose-colored-fancy

    If it’s up to Sahar, that’s a yes! XD Let’s see how that works out…

    Lol! I’m definitely imagining Yila having some really bad days and then one day just randomly deciding that she’d rather be friends with Sahar than be on her bad side as it would take wayyy less energy! 😊

    Wow, Yila and Niarok kind of remind me of Gavril and…

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  • Noah Cochran replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago

    @rose-colored-fancy

    First of all, this entire exchange was HILARIOUS!! XD Y’all have the best senses of humor XD

    Why thank you, Cathy does have quite the ability to take a conversation to the next level. 😄

    Oooh, that’s odd! In fact, it isn’t particularly American. (Not arguing! Just adding my weird bits of knowledge 🙂 ) I’ve heard it often and I’m…

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  • Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago

    @denali-christianson

    I do hope that Sahar and Yila can become friends…

    Yila secretly admires Sahar’s knives!

    If it’s up to Sahar, that’s a yes! XD Let’s see how that works out…

    I LITERALLY AM GOING TO SCREAM YILA TURNED INTO A PERSON OF HER OWN AND I DON’T EVEN KNOW WHAT’S HAPPENING AND AHHHHHHH WHAT JUST HAPPENED???????????

    I was just calmly…

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  • @rose-colored-fancy

    SO, funny story, that’s actually the age I pictured her XD Sahar just talks that way to everyone she’s comfortable with XD (Niarok, Qatar, and Yila kinda scare her, though she isn’t letting on XD) Even Liorah, who is a head taller than her and one minor inconvinience removed from arson at any given time XD (Even funnier, Liora…

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  • Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago

    Aw thanks!!! And I’ve been loving Sahar and Acyn!!

    Yeah, characters just love surprising! Aaaaand you can test as a lot of different personality types depending on how suppressive you are, I’ve come out as an ENFJ when I’m overcompensating and an INFJ when I’m super depressed. The Phantom of the Opera is usually claimed to be a INTJ but he’…[Read more]

  • Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago

    @denali-christianson

    Hey just wanted to let you know that Leytera’s 17…

    Sorry I forgot to make that clear… She’s just small-boned, that’s all.

    SO, funny story, that’s actually the age I pictured her XD Sahar just talks that way to everyone she’s comfortable with XD (Niarok, Qatar, and Yila kinda scare her, though she isn’t letting on XD) Even…[Read more]

  • Joelle Stone replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago

    RAMSEUR I WANT A DRAGON FIGHT THIS WOULD BE COOL!!! (Though I know neither of us want our characters to lose (and actually I’m trying to make Malvat as over-powerful as possible ’cause that’s like his goal in life anyway so I’m not sure how he would lose except for one weakness he has which I would be surprised if any of the characters have the…[Read more]

  • @everyone

    Hey just wanted to let you know that Leytera’s 17…

    Sorry I forgot to make that clear… She’s just small-boned, that’s all. 🙂

     

    Leytera

    Leytera stared at the man as he walked away with the other girl.

    A different girl appeared, smiling brightly with a hint of roughness on the side.

    “Hello honey, don’t mind them, we just had a b…[Read more]

  • Klein heard Niarok cross the stream. The torch soon lit up the abandoned camp. The sudden change in light hurt his eyes. A fault discovered after the augmentation. Sometimes being able to see like a cat in the night could cause a sudden change in light to momentary blind the person.

    “I’m Niarok, what did you find?”

    Klein nodded at the notep…[Read more]

  • Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago

    @denali-christianson

    DON’T YOU LOVE AND HATE IT WHEN THAT HAPPPEEEENNNSSS?????????? I literally saw an older version of Niarok at the museum today and it was so weird and I had to physically stop myself from calling him Niarok. It was a problem.

    LOL!! That’s hilarious!! It’s awesome when that happens!!

    LOL!!!! I’m soooo excited to meet him now…

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  • Skylarynn replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago

    @this-is-not-an-alien @joelle-stone @kimlikesart @millenium @anne-the-noob14 @irishcelticredflowercrown

    Sorry about the prolonged absence.  I was down with mono for all of August, and then school started September and I’ve been pretty wrapped up in that (and getting an ADHD diagnosis.  And possibly having an eating disorder).  Yeah…been bu…[Read more]

  • Excellent! How was the Ark and Creation Museum?! They’re so cool!

    Also, as in…the Bella I know? Did you know her on Nano YWP at all, or is this another Bella?

     

     

  • Eeeelloo peeps! How do you be?

    BELLA JUST JOINED!!! 🙂

    I am going to have some fun now…

    Leytera

    Leytera shoved herself further into the corner as the tall, muscular man approached. He held his sword as though it were a kitchen knife, and she was certain he could kill her with it he felt like it. And he clearly felt like it.

    She gripped the…[Read more]

  • Max stood in a alley, the moon just a claw in the sky.  Creeping to the end, he peaked around the building.  After a few minutes of waiting, a man opened a door across the street, slowly making his way to the ally Max was in, who stood back form the entrance now.

    “Your late,”  The new comer growled.

    “I would apologize, but seeing that you wo…[Read more]

  • Nightraven slipped through the dark allies, Dawnthrush melting in behind her. She smiled savagely and licked the blade of her dagger.

    And then pulled up short in front of a strange girl with mismatched eyes.

    Who was standing in a really dumb pose.

    Like she thought she was cool.

    Dumby.

    “Hey. Do you happen to know where the nearest torture…[Read more]

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