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  • Our Final Chapter Dear Story Embers Community, After much thought and prayer, we’ve decided that Story Embers will be closing its doors. This has been a difficult c […]

  • By Laurel Wood
     
    I wake to the taste of saltwater on my tongue and throbbing behind my eyes. Heat sears my back as I bob in turquoise waves. Below and around me float crates imprinted with Japanese symbols, […]

  • By Victoria Shanks
     
    The desert is no place for a guilty conscience. The silence eats at sinners until they’re small enough and broken enough to be swallowed whole.
     
    That’s why Erin Flores chose the Mojav […]

    • Very cool, what a great setting.

    • Whoa. This is literally the best short story I’ve ever read. I love how Erin’s backstory is hinted at from the beginning, but not fully revealed until the end; it really kept me reading attentively! The message of grace and redemption is so beautifully and powerfully conveyed. This one won’t be easy to forget.

    • Beautifully executed!!

  • By Mackenzie Nicole 
     
    Wine in hand, I stepped into the scalding shower without checking the temperature. The sensation offered a brief reprieve from the ache in my heart. I stumbled on a leftover sliver of a s […]

  • By Allie Robyn
     
    We stopped at the teashop on Madison Street.
    Abstract renditions of flowers hung from the walls.
    A case displayed little pastries, perfect and neat.
    The worker behind the counter gave us a […]

    • Aw! I love the whimsical way this starts out. You did a good job, though, of preparing me for something less whimsical to follow. I love the line, “Would I chase after my dreams? or let dreams chase me?”

    • This took quite a turn at the end! I like the focus on authenticity, and the contrast between the dream-like external environment and the inner battle in the main character’s mind.

    • This is so great! I love it!

  • By Emily Waldorf
     
    Recently I had a dream;
    Creeping and stealthy, it quietly came.
    The pictures I saw were dull and blurred,
    But the air about me with voices stirred.
     
    Confused at first, but gradually c […]

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    By Kathryn Sadakierski
     
    I walk the length of another road,
    but endless paths branch from it
    in every direction.
    The journey was arduous
    but rewarding
    in strengthening me
    so I can climb another […]

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    By Claire Tucker
     
    Every moment in every story makes a promise: the conversation, decision, or setting that the author is focusing on holds significance, whether immediately or in a future chapter. As a reader, […]

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    By Alithea Wrights
     
    The phenomenon first happened when I was seven years old.
     
    Mud caked my pants and the tip of my nose as I stirred an earthy concoction with a stick. “Leaves!” I commanded, my hand outst […]

  • By Zachary Holbrook
    When I was nine years old, I became the dictator of a sprawling, shape-shifting land called Fiction, and my political party consisted of myself, a few other students in our homeschool co-op […]

    • Wow. This was a fabulous article, Zachary. Firstly because it was amazing advice, secondly because it quoted Aristotle, and thirdly because I think you alluded to Zane and Leander. XD

  • By Sarah Wiens
     
    Dedicated to the Sidwell family, in memory of Wynn, my childhood playmate.
     
    You asked me if I believe. I’m not sure
    After all my sister and I have endured.
    What made You stay so far awa […]

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  • By Rachel Evans

     

    “The hero sobbed piteously over the corpse of her mentor, swearing to avenge him. After an hour of weeping, she wiped her eyes and returned to saving the world, setting her sadness aside un […]

  • By Emily Waldorf
     
    The sunlit world is all aglow
    While shafts of golden brightness find
    The dust of diamonds on the snow.
    But darker seem the lines of shade—
    Long lines of shadow on my mind.
     
    The pea […]

  • By Joe Bisicchia

     
    Love begins and never ends.
    Love is, with justice never distant,
    raveled and unraveled, here, everywhere.
    No departed utterance,
    it endures beyond sounds
    of rhyme, time, upon lips, […]

  • By Al Zapor
     
    I never meant to bring you along to this cliff,
    But still, here we sit, watching the tide roll in.
    The sun sets in the vast emptiness, and I wonder if
    You know this isn’t a detour, rather, th […]

    • This is a beautiful picture, Al! Thank you for writing it. It leaves me asking so many questions, prodding my imagination into action.

  • By Jonathan Babcock
     
    Your character shivers alone on the shore, her clothes soaked from her boat overturning in the rapids and her backpack drifting somewhere along the river bottom. She spends several minutes […]

  • By Rachel Leitch
     
    Mythology influences countless books and movies. At the elementary school where I work, it appears in Rick Riordan’s popular Percy Jackson series, which Christian readers have split op […]

    • Woah. This came at JUST the right time!! I’ve been debating whether or not Lord of the Rings is a good story to ingest so much (it’s definitely high on my favorites list), considering Tolkien’s wizards and Gods (capital G pluralized) and all the Greek mythology throughout his series. I’ve reckoned with the wizardry and decided that it actually ISN’T magic, as Tolkien himself insisted (it’s a natural part of their world and doesn’t involve supernatural forces), though I wish he wouldn’t have used the words “magic” and “wizardry” to describe it. His whole “Gods” concept has been a lot harder for me to grapple with, though. This article gave me the missing piece I needed. Tolkien is using MYTHOLOGY, not a worldview. And it make sense.

      So thank you SO SO SO much!! I really didn’t want to stop reading a book so chock full of great lessons and role models and morals just because of his worldbuilding. GREAT article!!

    • Great article! I’ve been looking for something like this for ages as its something that I’m still a bit jumpy about as a writer. I love mythology and I really want to incorporate them in my stories in a way that I feel comfortable doing, without completely erasing God from the narrative.

      • A thought-provoking article. In my latest story, there are my own versions of fairies, elves, dragons (no magic in the world, more like a sci-fi “alternate Earth/strange planet”). They’re just supposed to be creatures that live on the planet with “alternate Earthlings”. I’m not trying to support worldviews contrary to Christianity. I’m just trying to make a world similar to Lord of the Rings (best comparison I can come up with) but with more science fiction elements

  • By Sarah Spradlin
     
    Stories from all over the world hold that wayfarers,
    especially sailors,
    often got tattoos of swallows.
    It was, after all, the swooping swallows
    against the blue sky
    they would see well […]

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