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Catherine Roche replied to the topic NaNovember…GUILD WAR : WORD WAR in the forum Announcements 7 years, 7 months ago
@steward-of-the-pen Thanks! Yeah, you might’ve seen it. It’s from Culture of Life for students (K-12).
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Cassie Hartfinh replied to the topic NaNovember…GUILD WAR : WORD WAR in the forum Announcements 7 years, 7 months ago
@steward-of-the-pen *squeals and hugs self* Yay, I’m so glad you like it!! (I know @ariella-newheart probably won’t as much though. She was getting attached to Vorok. Sorry, Ari!)
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Evelyn replied to the topic NaNovember…GUILD WAR : WORD WAR in the forum Announcements 7 years, 7 months ago
@steward-of-the-pen Indeed! I love it!! ๐
And great job on your new record!! YAY! *cheers*
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Julia replied to the topic NaNovember…GUILD WAR : WORD WAR in the forum Announcements 7 years, 7 months ago
@steward-of-the-pen Haha! Love the snippet!
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic NaNovember…GUILD WAR : WORD WAR in the forum Announcements 7 years, 7 months ago
@steward-of-the-pen Hahaha, yeah well, class is a bit different when you get on in the years. People start being quiet. Tis good. And I’m fairly used to tuning people out.ย But yeah, writing in noisy classrooms is never fun. :/
Oh my word. Nice.
Woot! (I would, but I currently haven’t written any more. Hopefully I will tonight.)
Hmmm, if you…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Lesson 23 : Edge-of-Seat-Plots in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 7 years, 7 months ago
Quick task: Look up, ‘plot twists’ on whatever internet server you use. A lot of those things are just lists of handy plot twists for you to use! Useless.
I mean, honestly. Try to insert these ‘ready made plot twists’ into your story. How random would that be???
A lot of people think that if their story is flt, and lacking in something, the…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Lesson 22 : Feedback Time in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 7 years, 7 months ago
@steward-of-the-pen Oh yay! I’m glad you liked those. *nodnod*
Hmmm, interesting plot? Let’s see what turns up in today’s lesson. *fingerguns*
Stellar! I was thinking on going with characters. I’m currently doing a mini blog series on them, so this will give me a chance to delve more into them!
Welks!
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic NaNovember…GUILD WAR : WORD WAR in the forum Announcements 7 years, 7 months ago
@writercatherine Oh my woooord. That’s priceless.
@silverclaw-bonnetfolly Ooooh, cool! (And go girl! That’s a lot of words in a day. I average about 1700.)
@esjohnson Woot! Keep it up! Is this more on Talisman? Your Pinterest board there is so insane.
@steward-of-the-pen Nice, and keep it up! (Haha, to be fair, I’m spending 6 hours a day at…[Read more]
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Emily D posted an update 7 years, 7 months ago
@j-a-penrose @steward-of-the-pen @julia @writercatherine @evelyn @silverclaw-bonnetfolly @cassie-hartfinh @ariella-newheart Hi everyone, just letting you know that I’m leaving Story Embers…will miss you all and your advice, and our camaraderie. Keep writing for the kingdom! God bless you all. Emily D P. S. I have a show don’t tell document…[Read more]
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We’ll miss you! ๐ I wish you the best of luck with your writing, wherever it takes you! (Do you have a blog? I would love to be able to follow it so that we could stay in contact at least a bit ๐ )
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Awww, you will be missed! But I understand. ๐ And like Julia asked, do you have a blog that I could follow?
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Aww, may God take you where you’re needed. Mayhaps we’ll see you again someday.
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Namarie, @emily-d! I’ll miss you! It was fun working on guild wars with you. ๐ May God bless you, wherever He leads.
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Aw, namarie, @emily-d! We’ll miss you! Best of luck in that thing called the real world.
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Ohh, now I’m sad. Goodbye, @emily-d! *gives you cookies and lembas bread for your journey*
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@evelyn @silverclaw-bonnetfolly @steward-of-the-pen @writercatherine @ariella-newheart Aww, you girls are so sweet! Thanks for all your beautiful words! Yes, I have a website (yay!) which I am still building and have put like almost zero words of content on it yet. the address is thefierypen.atwebpages.com but it could change. I will try to let…[Read more]
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Till we meet again. Perhaps in that thing called the real world, as you Catherine XD
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Yay! Thanks for the link to the blog! I’ll definitely be keeping up with that. ๐
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@evelyn Thanks!
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Julia replied to the topic NaNovember…GUILD WAR : WORD WAR in the forum Announcements 7 years, 7 months ago
@steward-of-the-pen Awesome sentence! 😃
@esjohnson Nice job!
@silverclaw-bonnetfolly Awesome!
Yesterday, I wrote 1,807 words for Creative Writingย (I may have gotten a *little* carried away…ย 😂)ย andย 854 for my story.
So far today (I’m quickly updating here before I get on a roll) (I wrote earlier today ๐ )ย I’ve doneย 1,583 words. *whew…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic NaNovember…GUILD WAR : WORD WAR in the forum Announcements 7 years, 7 months ago
Agh! Sorry I haven’t been updating here for a while!
Can I just say, you’re all doing fabulously! There are so many words being written, and from what I can tell, you’re all really enjoying writing and getting into your stories! That’s awesome!
My total word count is 29776 words at current, and my favourite sentence is:
New mission: Get Felix…
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Evelyn replied to the topic Hello from Flyover Country… in the forum Introduce Yourself 7 years, 7 months ago
@ireneadler Parimi Alca all the way!!!!
#notbiasedatall ๐
You like writing stories set in early Bible times? Let me summon one of my friends who has similar tastes… *sends a Parimian shoulder messenger dragon to fetch her* (All the more reason to join Parimi Alca! ๐ )
@esjohnson Come say hello… ๐
And why not meet some other friends…[Read more]
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Cassie Hartfinh replied to the topic Parimi Alca Creed in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@esjohnson
@coggleton
@julia
@silverclaw-bonnetfolly
@evelyn
@ariella-newheart
@sarah-vdh
@steward-of-the-pen
@e-jo3
@emily-d
@writercatherine
@thewanderingtypewriter
@jade
@taylorclogston
@kaladinstormblessedGuysguysguysguysGUYS, @silverclaw-bonnetfolly and I just came up with a first verse and chorus for the Parimi Alca Creed!!…[Read more]
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Evelyn replied to the topic NaNovember…GUILD WAR : WORD WAR in the forum Announcements 7 years, 7 months ago
@ariella-newheart Oooh! I want more too!
@cassie-hartfinh WOW! That’s amazing! Great job!
@steward-of-the-pen Now we wouldn’t want you to mop the floors of the castle in the winter, would we? ๐
I love your sentence. XD
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Lesson 22 : Feedback Time in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 7 years, 7 months ago
Eyyyy Parimis!
It’s been nearly two months since I did a check up, s I figured I’d give this a chance to see what you’re thinking.
Have you improved in Pacing and Suspense? Have you had any favourite lessons? Are there any things in this topic you’d like to look more into?
What about next Annual Theme Discussion? What would you like our next…[Read more]
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Parimi Bards anyone? in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@cassie-hartfinh @steward-of-the-pen @j-a-penrose @evelyn @julia @esjohnson @silverclaw-bonnetfolly – Here’s the poem I was talking about on the other topic. Thoughts and critiques are welcome. ๐
The Dark and the Light
Beyond my window, the Dark.
In my heart, the Light.
At this time, a Spark.
A candle that rallies a fight.
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Julia replied to the topic NaNovember…GUILD WAR : WORD WAR in the forum Announcements 7 years, 7 months ago
@steward-of-the-pen I love the way that you described the glasses! 😃
@evelyn All words help!! 😉
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Evelyn replied to the topic NaNovember…GUILD WAR : WORD WAR in the forum Announcements 7 years, 7 months ago
@steward-of-the-pen Hey! 24 is way better than 9 words! ๐
(Which is what I’ve written today. xD)
Though, I just sat down to write again before bed, so hopefully I’ll turn out more.
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Parimi Alca Creed in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@cassie-hartfinh @steward-of-the-pen @evelyn @sarah-vdh @j-a-penrose
What an awesome idea! Erm, here are a few verses (all from NKJV) about light that I dug up. We could possibly use these to compose a song.
The people who walked in darkness Have seen a great light; Those who dwelt in the land of the shadow of death, Upon them a light has…[Read more]
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Cassie Hartfinh replied to the topic Parimi Alca Creed in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
Ummm…wait…oh, YES!!!
“You are the light of the world. A town built on a hill cannot be hidden. Neither do people light a lamp and put it under a bowl. Instead they put it on its stand, and it gives light to everyone in the house. In the same way, let your light shine before others, that they may see your good deeds and glorify your Father in…[Read more]
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