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Sam M replied to the topic Grief in the forum Poets 5 years, 3 months ago
Great job on your poem, Kimmi! There was a lot of strong emotion in it. It felt very raw and real and true. Keep up the good work.
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Beth Darlene replied to the topic Grief in the forum Poets 5 years, 3 months ago
Oof.
That was really good Kimmi!
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Kimmi started the topic Grief in the forum Poets 5 years, 3 months ago
‘‘.
Grief
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Do you not know what you
do?
Do you not know that the
tongue is like an adder, like
wild horses if not tamed
and brought into subjection?
.’’
Do you not know your words
cut like knives? Take
you no heed with your
tongue? Do you not know
the pain they cause?
.’’
Does your conscience not
smite you? Is there no sorrow…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic You Are in the forum Poets 5 years, 4 months ago
Thank you @sam-m . (:
I’m glad you liked it!
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Sam M replied to the topic You Are in the forum Poets 5 years, 4 months ago
Hi, Kimmi! I really like your poem. 🙂 Some of my favorite lines were: “Do you not know, you rival the stars? Do you not know, who you are?”
Thanks for sharing!
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Danielle Ansiel joined the group Poets 5 years, 4 months ago
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Kimmi started the topic You Are in the forum Poets 5 years, 4 months ago
You Are
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You are loved my friend.
Do you not know your worth?
Do you not know, you rival the stars?
Do you not know, who you are?
_=
You’re worth is more than the sun.
More than the flickering lights of the heavens.
Your heart is pure, cleansed by the blood of the Lamb.
You are clean. He loves you.
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My friend, do you not know it w…[Read more]
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Bethany joined the group Poets 5 years, 4 months ago
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Catholic Creed posted an update in the group Horror Writers 5 years, 4 months ago
This place is a message… and part of a system of messages… pay attention to it!
Sending this message was important to us. We considered ourselves to be a powerful culture.
This place is not a place of honor… no highly esteemed deed is commemorated here… nothing valued is here.
What is here was dangerous and repulsive to us. This message is…[Read more] -
Catholic Creed posted an update in the group Horror Writers 5 years, 4 months ago
Pelicans shove their spines out of their mouths to cool down when they’re overheating.
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Catholic Creed posted an update in the group Horror Writers 5 years, 4 months ago
Hi!
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Catholic Creed joined the group Horror Writers 5 years, 4 months ago
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Beth Darlene replied to the topic Drowning in the forum Poets 5 years, 4 months ago
=)
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Dakota replied to the topic Drowning in the forum Poets 5 years, 4 months ago
@beth20 You’re welcome!
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Beth Darlene replied to the topic Drowning in the forum Poets 5 years, 4 months ago
@dakota Thanks so much, Dakota!!!
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Dakota replied to the topic Drowning in the forum Poets 5 years, 4 months ago
@beth20 Good job on this poem! 🙂
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Beth Darlene replied to the topic Drowning in the forum Poets 5 years, 4 months ago
Thanks Sam! It’s one of the only two poems I’ve ever written.
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Sam M replied to the topic Drowning in the forum Poets 5 years, 4 months ago
Hi, Beth. You did a great job of writing an emotional piece in masterfully concise way. I like you’re writing style and thought it was cool how you ended the poem with a thought-provoking question. Great job!
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Sam M replied to the topic I Would Be in the forum Poets 5 years, 4 months ago
Yeah, I can see now how that would be confusing. Thanks for the feedback! 🙂
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Sam M replied to the topic The Party Tree in the forum Poets 5 years, 4 months ago
Hi, Jenny! I like your vivid writing style and how the first lines of each stanza were parallel to each other. The way you ended it was cool too. I can’t think of any recommendations for improvement. Sorry. 🙂 It looked great to me.
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