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ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Character description critiques/game in the forum Characters 4 years, 11 months ago
Cool!
I haven’t listened to Adventures in Odyssey for years. What is your Fanfiction about?
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ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Journals, retrospective, and odd points of view in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 11 months ago
*high-fives fellow Dickens fan back* Yes, audiobooks are amazingly helpful for classic novels… especially when they were paid by the word…
You’re welcome! I’m so glad it helped!
My draft is about a woman (named Naeva) who became/married a vampire. her husband (named Falworth for now) is cruel (and my first villain with a…[Read more]
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ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Sci-fi short story in the forum Sci-fi Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
You’re welcome!
Thank you so much for your feedback! It’s really helpful for me, especially since sci-fi is an unfamiliar genre for the hopeless fantasy nut. 😊
Marian and Jake (at least for now) were in a relationship in the past, but Jake had been hiding his illegal lifestyle from her and when she found out she…[Read more]
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ScoutFinch190 posted a new activity comment 4 years, 11 months ago
Thank you! It all felt pretty natural, but yes, it certainly is an adjustment.
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ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Character description critiques/game in the forum Characters 4 years, 11 months ago
Also, (if it works) here’s a picture of what Marian kinda looks like (her hair’s more of a bob though)

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ScoutFinch190 posted a new activity comment 4 years, 11 months ago
How cool! My WIP is lagging, and I need to organize my ideas.
I didn’t think of joining NaNoWriMo this year… but now you mention it, I’m kinda tempted!
I actually have had a pretty crazy year, so I’ve also been a sporadic on SE and KP. My friend moved back from out of state, and he promptly became my boyfriend and I graduated High School the…[Read more] -
ScoutFinch190 posted a new activity comment 4 years, 11 months ago
It’s good to see you too! How’s your book going?
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It’s going okay! May expand it into a trilogy, actually. Are you doing NaNoWriMo this year?
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How cool! My WIP is lagging, and I need to organize my ideas.
I didn’t think of joining NaNoWriMo this year… but now you mention it, I’m kinda tempted!
I actually have had a pretty crazy year, so I’ve also been a sporadic on SE and KP. My friend moved back from out of state, and he promptly became my boyfriend and I graduated High School the…[Read more] -
Wow! It definitely sounds like you’ve been busy. (I mean, getting engaged and then married… wow. XD) I’m so happy for you – that’s really exciting! But I bet it took some getting used to, for sure. Congratulations to you and your new husband!
I’m working on a novella for NaNo. Not sure if it will expand into a novel or not… maybe a longer…[Read more] -
Thank you! It all felt pretty natural, but yes, it certainly is an adjustment.
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You’re welcome! Yeah, I bet. XD
Ah yes, so the novella is focusing on themes of justice and injustice, crime and punishment, judgment and mercy, and where compassion and love enter into all that. The main question I’m exploring is “Is an act of violence ever permissible if it is done to protect and save someone else?” I’ve just been thinking…[Read more]
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ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Journals, retrospective, and odd points of view in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 11 months ago
I actually have a fantasy rough draft set in a (I guess) Victorian-esque era where I did first-person retrospective. I found it great fun, until I couldn’t figure out how the darn thing would end. (but I haven’t given up on it!)
I recommend reading Treasure Island by Robert Louis Stevenson (which employs a First-person…[Read more]
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ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Sci-fi short story in the forum Sci-fi Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
@joy-caroline (I just saw you’d joined SE! I am @ScoutFinch180 on KP)
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ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Character description critiques/game in the forum Characters 4 years, 11 months ago
How interesting @dakota! what is your fanfiction about?
Here’s the first description(s) of my MC’s love interest, it’s a fast-paced scene so I had to scatter her descriptions around a bit. (if you want to read the whole story, I posted it here: Forum – Sci-fi Writers – Story Embers the topic is Sci-Fi short story).
A woman shouted, “Dro…
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ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Dream Big (motivational cartoon I saw) in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 11 months ago
How cool! that was a very great comic!
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ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Sci-fi short story in the forum Sci-fi Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
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ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Sci-fi short story in the forum Sci-fi Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Some of the tags didn’t go through 🤔:
@devestate-lasting
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ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Sci-fi short story in the forum Sci-fi Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Thank you for reading!
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ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Sci-fi short story in the forum Sci-fi Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
The next thing Jake knew was his breath coming in gasps. The blizzard had passed, and the stars in the darkening sky gaped at him. He sat up, dusting a thin layer of ice off his suit. How long had he been unconscious? The unfamiliar peaks turned vivid red in the fading light, and he brought his knees up to his chest, shivering.
Jake’s vi…[Read more]
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ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Sci-fi short story in the forum Sci-fi Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
A metallic clank crashed Jake into consciousness. He stared at the dark ceiling, where was he? Then he recalled the fight with the thrid, and a shudder went down his spine… had the HSI found him after he failed? What would they do to him now? As he tried to turn his head he froze and cringed, waiting for the pain in his neck to subside. The s…[Read more]
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ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Sci-fi short story in the forum Sci-fi Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
13: what is this short story missing, if anything?
14: can you all think of any other name for a creature than thrid or is thrid fine?
15: Am I showing instead of telling?
16:Do any scenes drag?
Thank you for reading this! (Every time there’s a seperate post there’s a *** scene break in the original text) this story has also been polished…[Read more]
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ScoutFinch190 started the topic Sci-fi short story in the forum Sci-fi Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
@this-is-not-an-ailien, @devestate-lasting, @brian-stansell, @daeus-lamb, @Gracie-J, @lissie-w, @fitz, @anyone-else.
Hi!
I’ve spoken a little about my current WIP here I think. It’s a short story under 8,000 words. I decided to post it here to see what you all think! if you want to, I’ll post some questions I’d like answered:
- does this even…
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ScoutFinch190's profile was updated 5 years ago
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ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Hello there! in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 2 months ago
Hi @lissie-w! I am
tired@ScoutFinch190, an irregular on SE.What books/movies do you like?
How interesting! I’ve never attempted a mystery personally, but I’m somewhat familiar with Hercule Poirot and Sherlock Holmes (mostly movies). Is it hard to come up the clues to a point where they’d be revealing just enough to not be a spoiler?
What’s your WIP?
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