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Coralie replied to the topic K.M. Shea in the forum Story Analysis 8 years ago
@missfaeriekaiti AH! I’ve just recently been introduced to K. M. Shea through the Entwined Tales! I haven’t had a chance to read any more of her books, but I have her on my radar for sure! I’m a total sucker for a good fairy tale. I’ve got lists and lists of them to recommend.
I’ve been digging into a few fairy tale indie authors lately, which is…[Read more]
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Coralie replied to the topic New Excerpt for Theme Discussion in the forum Critiques 8 years ago
@missfaeriekaiti Oh my gosh! That was fantastic!! Okay, first off, I loved…gosh, well, all of it! I like the peek into your world-building; the creatures, the political system, the gifts, etc. I completely loved your characters! Saria and the priest and Erika and the prince. Just, guggle! I want MORE!!! (*cough* *blushes* *scrapes boot against…[Read more]
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Coralie replied to the topic 2018 Week 5 – Lend a Helping Hand in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 8 years ago
@missfaeriekaiti I noticed the same thing! I wasn’t sure if I was doing it incorrectly or what; I’ve never dealt with tags before, so *shrug*
Thank you for the welcome! 🙂 Hah, yeah, me too. No worries! I’m so grateful you took the time to read the first scene and leave feedback!!!
Ooh, have fun at church camp! I’ve never been to one before, but…[Read more]
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Coralie replied to the topic Willow Wood Excerpt in the forum Critiques 8 years ago
@missfaeriekaiti Thank you so much! 😀 This is so encouraging to hear! I’m really excited about exploring all of the different creatures I have plans for, so I’m really thankful to hear you felt it was so balanced. Thank you for taking the time to read and leave your thoughts. I truly appreciate it!
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Brandon Miller replied to the topic 2018 Week 5 – Lend a Helping Hand in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 8 years ago
@missfaeriekaiti, I don’t know what’s up with that, but I’ve been noticing it too. Strange stuff.
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Archer360 replied to the topic New Excerpt for Theme Discussion in the forum Critiques 8 years ago
@missfaeriekaiti Yay! I am so glad that you have more written 😀 I would absolutely love to beta-read it for you when you need it!
Enjoy your life outside the computer! 😉
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Archer360 replied to the topic 2018 Week 5 – Lend a Helping Hand in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 8 years ago
I left some feedback on @missfaeriekaiti excerpt 🙂
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Archer360 replied to the topic New Excerpt for Theme Discussion in the forum Critiques 8 years ago
@missfaeriekaiti Nice work! I really enjoyed reading this excerpt and definitely want to read more. 😀
The descriptions you have of the place where this scene unfolds is great! Just some thoughts to think about – Is is a small or big room (I am going to guess small because of how the action played out?), did the dog/werewolf fight break anything…[Read more]
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Coralie replied to the topic Exposition in the forum Critiques 8 years ago
@missfaeriekaiti I’m sorry I missed this before you updated! :-/ I’ll be sure to check out the new excerpt, though.
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Brandon Miller started the topic 2018 Week 5 – Lend a Helping Hand in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 8 years ago
Hey,
I’m back!
You guys had an eventful week while I was gone, let me go ahead and hit up some of the highlights.
First off, GUYS WE WON A GUILD WAR!!! I saw the numbers. It was not close. You guys ROCKED it. WAY TOO GO. I wish I could come give you all high-fives or something bc wow I am proud. Nice work.
Our (obvious) MVP was @Jane-Mare…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Welcome to Rillumen! in the forum Announcements 8 years ago
Hey folks, I’m here to bid you a fond fare well. As you can see, I’m now a guildmaster, and I’m off to start my own guild. Which means we’re now rivals. 😛
Kidding, kidding. You’re all still epic. 😉 But this is where I leave you. It was a pleasure to be with you all, and I couldn’t just leave without a little explanation and farewell. *salutes…[Read more]
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Rolena Hatfield started the topic Word War Form! in the forum Announcements 8 years ago
Hey Rillumen word warriors!
It’s time to fill out the form with your final word count for the week! Anything you wrote from last Monday till last night at 11:59pm can be included.
If you signed up last week to join the word war click here to enter your final count! Way to go…[Read more]
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Rolena Hatfield replied to the topic 2018 Week 4 – Switching Lists in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 8 years ago
*comes in and plunks down on the plush Guildmater’s throne* *bounces* Hey, this is really comfy.
Hey guys! So I’m actually not that great at tyranny, BUT I do love to have a bit of fun. 🙂 *hands everyone chocolate muffins* *releases a squirrel in the throne room*
Now that that’s taken care of @missfaeriekaiti @jane-maree Excellent. Thanks for…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Word War! in the forum Announcements 8 years ago
@missfaeriekaiti Haha yep, I just saw that too. 😛
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Word War! in the forum Announcements 8 years ago
@missfaeriekaiti Brandon said he was going to send out a link/form we could fill out, so I assume that when he does that we won’t be able to update the count after filling that out…?
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Brandon Miller started the topic 2018 Week 4 – Switching Lists in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 8 years ago
Hey everybody!
Before I get to the activity, I have a few announcements:
1) My fam is on vacation this week so this is the last you’ll hear from me. Lucky for ya’ll, the fabulous @Rolena-Hatfield had agreed to be acting guildmaster in my stead. (So hey, I guess you’re going to be rolling with her own personal brand of tyranny this week. I di…[Read more] -
Inkling-for-Christ started the topic How can I find MY Genre? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
Hey,
So I was asked recently “What genre do you write?” I said Dystopian. Later I realized that dystopian is a type not a genre. I’ve been dabbling and I know mystery and fantasy aren’t my gig, so how can I find what genre fits…[Read more]
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Brandon Miller started the topic Word War! in the forum Announcements 8 years ago
Hey everybody!
Who plans on writing this week? (That should be all of you.) We’ve got a chance to snatch the guild war crown from Avensbeck. That’s right, another prompt. However this time around, instead of writing off a prompt, we’re going to all work on our on WIPs.
Ladies, gentlemen, members of Rillumen all, I welcome you to our first word…[Read more] -
Brandon Miller started the topic 2018 Week 3 – The Unique but Specific in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 8 years ago
Hey Everybody, it’s another week!
However, since I posted last week’s topic really late (shame on me and my cow, I know), not all of you got to it. And *spoileralert* our next week activity relies heavily on this week, SO
If you didn’t do last week’s activity, give it a shot this week. If you did, do it again in the same room. I want to pus…[Read more]
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Brandon Miller started the topic 2018 Week 2 – Finding Details in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 8 years, 1 month ago
Hey Everybody,
Made it one week in before I fell behind. Yay go me. 😛
Alright, anyway, this week’s challenge.
Writing description is a delicate balance of providing enough details to create a picture, while moving on to the actual story fast enough to keep from boring the reader. One critically important method of doing this is finding si…[Read more]
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