Mischievous Thwapling

@backwardslivewriter

Yeah!  Join!  And yes, I agree completely on the Podo subject.  I think there was even a line somewhere in the third book comparing him to like a sunset or something, saying how the glory of his youth was fading… 🙁

And I like the idea of Sara finding Sylvie, but I suppose you might have to run it by @kylie-wingfeather fi…[Read more]

@wingiby-iggiby

Yeah! I love the names. And your sister, lol, that’s awesome!  Send her my thanks! 😛

Aw, thank you so much!  No, lol, I like the nickname Thwap!  Keep it 😛

And thank you!  I’ll be honest, my writing style has evolved quite a lot.  I used to use waaaaaaaay to many “-ing”s  (You probably know what I’m talking about :P), and a…[Read more]

BTW, @wingiby-iggiby, really love that signature!

@jasmine

I. Love. Foxes.  They’ve got to be one of my favorite animals! (And that’s saying quite a lot ’cause I LOVE animals 😛 ) Brin sounds so cool!  BTW, on this sort of note, have you read “Foxcraft” by Inbali Iserles?

@wingiby-iggiby

I wrote a very long reply to everything you said, but it for some reason I wasn’t signed in, but I didn’t k…[Read more]

@lonathecat

Yay! Glad I could be of some help!  And thank you, I always want to give that constructive criticism, y’know? 🙂

@kylie-wingfeather

Hmmm, the Podo idea is intriguing, though I kinda want to leave his sacrifice alone.  I mean, after all, he died to save everyone he loved and everybody in the Green Hollows, and so forth.  I feel as if us making him alive would take away his act of love, but y’know, we can do whatever 😛 It would be fun to have Podo again.

@kylie-wingfeather

Another great idea!! Though what if we combined that with some of the other ideas?  Like if we do one of the other ideas above, and they discover that island?  So we would still have the possible Bonifer Squoon and Oood idea, and so they’re helping/taking care of that, but while they’re sailing to get there, they stumble a…[Read more]

@lonathecat

Nice!! That was so awesome. Just some notes:

“Accordingly, he was reluctant to let his daughters create such a creature, but when they assured him that they would personally teach the creature, he relented.”

I would suggest cutting the second “the creature” and replacing it with, “it.” The two “creatures” just sound mite word-y to…[Read more]

Yay, thanks for letting me join, guys!  And @joelle-stone, yes, I also think it would be nice to have the story on here.  I started reading this story on the Wingfeather Saga website, just ’cause I thought it looked cool (and I’m a nosy person, lol), but I didn’t get to finish reading it ’cause (Alas!) the site shut down. *a tear and sniffle*

@joelle-stone

(read in deep, slow voice, like one a troll would have) Thwapling think that very good thinking!!  Very good thinking.  Thwapling like your thinking.

@joelle-stone

Ooohh, that is a very good (and wise) idea!  Speaking of which, I wonder when we’ll be able to start writing it?  I guess once we get through this mountain of developing 😛

@wingiby-iggiby

The poor Pi/Pays!  Lol, “slept like a deaf log” Love that analogy.

YES!!  I am horrible at creating good names.  If it’s no trouble, would ya mind trying to come up with a name for him? Pretty please with a cherry on top? 😛

*gasps* You’re right!!! I never thought ’bout it, but Garfield does nine lives!  Too bad he wastes his s…[Read more]

Read and LOVED it!! Will you give my thoughts as soon as I find the time. (So probably not tonight, but hopefully tomorrow or Wednesday night!