September 9, 2020 at 12:09 pm #119277
Maybe I’m a grammar snob (actually I know I am) but I imagine I’m not alone in having writing-related pet peeves.
Two of my “favorites” are when writers use “they/their” to refer to a single person when gender is unknown, i.e. “I tried to get that crazy driver’s license plate, but they drove away too fast.” (And yes, I know this is become standard practice, but still. Yikes.)
The other biggie is excessive use of “ly” adverbs, i.e. “He walked slowly down the stairs and carefully lifted the lid of the intricately carved chest.”
What are yours?September 9, 2020 at 2:04 pm #119280Arindown@arindown
😂 I know I have a lot of grammar pet-peeves in writing, but I can’t think of any at this moment.
Live doing what you love. Die doing what you love. Do what you love for the Master.September 10, 2020 at 12:42 pm #119356Alabama Rose@bama-rose
Hahah oh yes those bother me too! I’m trying to think what mine are….
One of them is when almost every sentence starts with ‘the.’ It’s just…. *shivers*
Courage, dear heart ~ AslanSeptember 10, 2020 at 1:17 pm #119357
Ha ha, this is funny 😛 I can’t think of many peeves, but one of them is when a single word is used multiple times in the same sentence or closely related paragraphs. I like it when folks make use of synonyms — there are so many words you can use to convey the same thing, and it makes reading interesting!
We both started laughin' when the sky started to rain -- Get AlongSeptember 10, 2020 at 2:09 pm #119360
That’s a good one, @wingiby-iggiby, and one I’m unfortunately sometimes guilty of, because I tend to try to keep my vocabulary simple when writing stories.September 12, 2020 at 10:17 pm #119457
Great question. Probably run-on sentences. I know it can be a style of writing, but when the author just keeps tacking on “and”, it annoys me. Not quite sure why. I think it’s just a bit harder for me to follow. 😀
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"May the wind under your wings bear you where the sun sails and the moon walks." ~GandalfSeptember 13, 2020 at 7:38 pm #119476
I totally get it! I do it myself a lot, and so I search the internet for synonyms, which is actually sorta fun 😀 . (I was writing a part describing a staircase and an alcove just off of it, and there are not many synonyms for stairs, LOL it made me nuts to keep saying “stairs” over and over again). Sometimes using a weird word for something can just throw the reader off; but I think doing that would work well for comedy, such as a “woody perennial plant,” in substitute for “tree.” I think I’m just droning on, so, uh, yeah….
Ahhhh!!! Yes!!! I don’t like “and” and “and” and “and.” Not at all. But have you read “The Places Beyond the Maps” by Douglas Kaine McKelvey in Wingfeather Tales? I don’t think he used “and” over and over again, but the way he ran his sentences together…. wow. It was such a beautiful story, and the way Peterson described it in his introduction, yeah, that’s what I mean.
We both started laughin' when the sky started to rain -- Get AlongSeptember 13, 2020 at 8:00 pm #119483
Yes!! I have! I know, he has such a beautiful writing style… I could never write with such elegance and beauty and description like he does. But yeah! I think he did have run-on sentences, but, you’re right, the way he did was so lovely and stunning. (I can’t even find a decent word to describe it!)
"May the wind under your wings bear you where the sun sails and the moon walks." ~GandalfSeptember 15, 2020 at 3:34 pm #119538
I suppose the truly great writers can break pretty much any rule, but as for the rest of us, we’d better mind our P’s and Q’s.September 19, 2020 at 5:10 am #119729Kristianne Hassman@kristianne-hassman
@zee I have SO many grammar pet peeves! My biggest peeve is when people use “try and” instead of “try to.” Also, when people misuse “sit” and “set” ALL. THE. TIME.September 19, 2020 at 6:22 pm #119734
It was amazing….. it gave the story such a heart…. like you were inside Cobbler’s soul…. really feeling his pain….the loss…. the shame….. the thought…..
it is so hard to describe!!!
Yes! I totally agree. Those who are experienced just know how to break the rules and make it seem like they aren’t….
Those are some interesting ones! But they make total sense (why they are annoying, I mean)!
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We both started laughin' when the sky started to rain -- Get AlongSeptember 19, 2020 at 9:05 pm #119746
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