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@rose-colored-fancy

THANK YOUUUU!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!

*Does not stop thanking for another 10 minutes*

(But seriously thank you. Because I get stuck whenever I want to injure one of my characters because I don’t know what it will look like or how to heal them. So thank you!

*enters room slowly* hey so I was told this was a good place to come and ask my harming of characters questions soooooo… Here I am! With some questions.

So I have a character who fell maybe a couple feet of the ground and then got hit in the head by the pulley system she built and I wanted to know if A. The pulley system would break the skin.…[Read more]

@the-inkspiller

THANK YOU SO MUCH!!

And I have a lot of research I need to do… Thank you for that as well.

The story was honestly just a concept that just floated into my brain and I was like “hmm I haven’t had a ton of motivation to write, but the story makes me feel really excited” And then I realized that I would probably have a lot of…[Read more]

Yoooo! So um not sure if this should be here but gonna put this here anyway. Thank you in advance for your help.

So first I want to figure out how much a 16 or 17-year-old would be affected by murder and stuff. And I also want to figure out how brainwashing works. And I want to be brainwashing a six or seven-year-old. So how does murder affect…[Read more]

So anyone know if you can die to a stab wound in the abdomen or stomach? Google isn’t helping me at all.

Answer when you have the time and thanks!

@emily-waldorf

Alright I’ll post it! Warning it might not be very good.

Critique when you have the time!

Wigeon stumbled into camp. She could make out faint decorations hanging on the walls of the wide notch cliffs. Flowers, and feathers tied together on vines were hanging on any spot a cat could reach.

The faint light that emitted from…[Read more]

@storysmith

I don’t really mind how long chapters are and I would be willing to communicate through Google docs.

That’s where I do most of my work too.

@emily-waldorf

I don’t know how long my WIP will be.

The first chapter is 900 words but I would be ecstatic if you just helped with that since it’s my first time

@jared-williams

I would also like to switch to either a website that would help with critiquing.

I think a word limit would also be a good idea too.

I will check out this other…[Read more]

Hi…!

So poems are very new to me. I have this poem that isn’t sitting right with me word wise. It doesn’t sound like a poem to me. Now I know nothing about poems, so any advice you could give would be oh so helpful.

Thank you for your time.

The Scar

A lush forest is blemished by this coulee

A imprudent child is at the bottom of it

That…[Read more]