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  • @this-is-not-an-alien

    @kimlikesart

    (Quick translation: Con: short for Confident / Ensin: variation of the Latin word Ensis which means sword.)

    CON

    “Hello, Brave Counsel,” she said, bowing slightly. Brave Counsel? Con wondered. “I am Leana, daughter of Nithel.”

    Con could tell that she was nervous, as her eyes kept darting back and forth ove…[Read more]

  • Interesting…the character I ennd up writing the most in the castle is very much an extrovert XD

    Well, when you and Ruan feel up for it, you’re more than welcome to rejoin!

    haha we gotta love the extrovert characters XD

    thank you! <3

    I’d say that the overall tone of the castle isn’t dark, but there’s definitely been some heavy, touchy subjects…

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  • Before Nathair could think, the other one burst in – that king fellow, yanking him to his feet very heroically. They made a mad dash for the tunnels and somehow made it out alive. Miles instantly set to bandaging the Blind Guy – yeesh were they ever going to get his name?

    “Thanks for that,” Nathair said, breathlessly after the run, and eyed th…[Read more]

  • The girl nearly flinched when Alessio spoke, darting looks back and forth between them. He winced. Couldn’t he just try to be a little more reassuring and it wasn’t even his business he wouldn’t be surprised if she thought he was some sort of creep now! Whatever, as long as he backed off…or was proved to not be a threat.

    Alessio just wanted…[Read more]

  • @mamaauthoress

    Interesting…the character I ennd up writing the most in the castle is very much an extrovert XD

    Well, when you and Ruan feel up for it, you’re more than welcome to rejoin!

    I’d say that the overall tone of the castle isn’t dark, but there’s definitely been some heavy, touchy subjects that we’ve explored.  There was one…[Read more]

  • @calidris

    AHW HI CALIDRIS!!! :] That’s just so sweet you guys were wondering about me 🥹

    Ahwww Basilllll … that makes me so happy for himmm. ☺️ And I’ll definitely think about it! It’s been a while since I’ve written Rúan (my guess is that he got worn out from me writing him all the time and needed a break because he really is an introvert),…[Read more]

  • Oh… Woe. Leana straightens her shoulders, some, and rubs her hands together nervously. She had no idea what most of that meant, but assumed he was important. In some way. Some how. Maybe a prince of his clan?

    She cast a quick glance to the second guy, and back to ‘Con’. She searched her brain, for what the name meant. Dad always knows right…[Read more]

  • @kimlikesart

     

    Con smiled slightly under his helmet as the girl jumped back and screamed. She then swung around and slammed a fist into Con’s helmet, which he barely noticed.

    Breathing heavily, she looked at him. She took a few small steps back. “Hi…what do you want?” She said.

    Con was silent for a moment. Then-

    “I am Con Ensin, of Clan Ensi…[Read more]

  • The loud smash behind her, made Leana’s eyes widen. She put her back against the wall, not a door, but still looked at the helmeted man. His voice had sounded kind, teasing. But she wished she could see his face, his eyes.

    More voices off to the side.

    Her hands hovered over the small pouch.

    “Hey, is there something you want to say, s…[Read more]

  • @lady-grace Sorry I haven’t responded!  Your story sounds really cool – it’s got that “Narnia” feel, but it’s also really distinct!

    NO YOU HAVE TO KEEP IT!!!  That’s HILARIOUS!

  • @mamaauthoress YOU’RE BACK!!!!

    Of course I remember you!  Seriously though, I’ve been wondering if you’re ok, and how you’re doing.  It’s great to see you again!  And I totally get it, I’ve had to take long absences as well.

    And how could I ever forget my boi Ruan and his flaming hair?

    If you ever want to join a castle again, there’s a ne…[Read more]

  • He dug his heels as Sir Scary let out a muttered curse and started to yank him forward.

    “I’ll scream I’ll convince everyone you’re kidnapping me you can’t make me get in there!” Alessio threatened barely in a whisper, his voice beginning to border hysteric. Almost instantly a fist landed a hair’s breadth from his head as he ducked, catching the…[Read more]

  • “Hello there.”

    Leana gave a quick screech in start, and swung around. Her hands fisted together, swinging too, hopefully bruising whatever infernal male-

    Thunk. Her hands hit a helmet,. “Owww…” She growled, gritting her teeth. She glanced down at her hands while recoiling backwards. Leana’s eyes hurriedly looked up. Her heart thundered. He did…[Read more]

  • @rose-colored-fancy

    Ahw, hey Rose, it’s so nice to hear from you again. (:

    And I’m so glad you remembered me and ma boi Rúan. It’s been a while, haha.

    and yeah, I’ll likely be spending less time here because of academics, but I’ll be around (:

  • @kimlikesart

    For those of you who aren’t aware I am now dropping in Jedi Knight General Con Ensin, of Clan Ensin, House Vizsla. (Yes, he is a Mandalorian)

    Con softly approached a door. Voices outside could be heard, angry voices at that. It seemed as if one person was in trouble with whoever owned this place.

    Sighing, Con looked around for a w…[Read more]

  • @kimlikesart

    Will do! Dropping Jedi Knight General Con Ensin onto Leana as soon as possible.

  • @mamaauthoress

    Hi Laura! Of course I remember you and Rúan! I’ve been wondering if you’re okay, it’s so nice to hear from you!

    Absolutely don’t worry about it, most people on here have hit the same issue (me included) I had to pull out of all the castles because of school 😅 Anyway, it’s totally okay, it’s lovely to hear from you again!

  • Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago

    @ethan-leonard

    Hi! A pleasure to meet you!

    Sure! Con sounds really cool. I wonder what his story is… since he’s Mandolorian. <3

    But… you’d have to drop into Group 1? Or they might all fall into the same room, again, at some point.

    Group 1 is in a hotel, at the moment? Leana just appeared…[Read more]

  • Hello all.

    I have disappeared for a while now.

    Please pardon my length absence. Life has hit hard, and academics are taking most of my writing time away. I gathered the strength (and courage) to come here again because my boyfriend suggested I check in with you all (he’s also a writer but I don’t think he’s on here).

    So please. Accept my…[Read more]

  • @kimlikesart

    Greetings! Interesting character. If you wouldn’t mind I would love to have Con and Leana meet. Thoughts?

    @this-is-not-an-alien

    😂😂😂the self-hanging teddy bear! I haven’t gotten to rigging yet, I need to soon, and I’m pretty good at weight painting…

    Sure! Hrrrmmmm…..Group 2 with Nathair. Fire away when ready, Con has made his entra…

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