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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 6 months ago
Ooh, those were all so great and fascinating!
Here’s one for Mara:
As I lunge toward the giants, the floor disappears. In fact, everything disappears. Only a white mist whirls around me while I twist weightless in the air. Is this whole thing just a bad dream? It’s all too fantastical to be real.
Or not. Being thunked on the floor hurts ple…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 6 months ago
Thank you! I can’t blame you XD
Also I loved your piece! Cahira sounds like quite a character, I can’t wait for her and Frey to interact XD I think he’ll annoy the heck out of her.
Okay time for Frey to meet his future self I guess! Also going to attempt to write this in second-person present because that’s… the weirdest tense I…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 6 months ago
Sir Scary somewhat obligingly sat down so Alessio flopped on the blankets as like someone falling to their death to a heroically resigned playlist. Which was going to be safer; burying himself under the blankets to be as invisible as possible or pushing the blankets out of the way so he could react faster? This was stupid postulation: if anything…[Read more]
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Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 6 months ago
Cahira:
The horns blare outside with that unrelenting force that I know will eventually pull every human in the city from their bed, except for me. I’m already awake and out of bed.
I meticulously study my reflection in the mirror. My birthmark is dull after powdering it but still visible which is quite irking for someone of my significance.…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 6 months ago
Okay yessss here we go! I’m excited! Fair warning, I may mess around with some weird tenses or points of view. I missed experimenting with those in here XD
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I grip the steel rails of my wheelchair and push, the motion as familiar as breathing by this time. It’s too cold for an April morning, the fog bunching thick around the tall…[Read more]
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 6 months ago
Val:
I suck in my breath as the giant rips his sword from the Castle’s chest. The Castle’s lifeless form crashes to the floor.
Now what?
Are we free?
The ground shakes as the the body crumbles in a cloud of white dust.
“A worthy battle, Saevus. Well done! I suppose you’ll all be wanting your reward? Very well then! I’ll grant you all a …[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 6 months ago
Yessss awesome!
@everyone
I suggest we ‘resurrect’ Lord Castle so we have an antagonist again, so he just reappears in the form of the castle again, shuffles the rooms around and has all the existing characters reappear in a new room! That way all the new characters get a fresh start. Will that work or are there any other…[Read more]
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 6 months ago
Hey guys, sorry I haven’t been on lately. I’m gonna finish up here in one go hopefully…
Saevus ducked a blow from Lord Castle, and then returned the blow in like manner, only to be stopped by Castle’s blade. Swinging in again, Lord Castle parried Saevus’ blade, who immediately followed with a massive combination. Saevus brought down a vertica…[Read more]
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C. Leonard replied to the topic Cleanfunny exclamations? in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 6 months ago
“Ninny-hammers! Noodles! My beautiful rope!” ~Samwise Gamgee
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Cleanfunny exclamations? in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 6 months ago
When I’m coming up with exclamations, I usually draw from the story world and the character’s life. My favorite right now is probably “What the stupid flopping fish?” (My character was a fisher)
Sconeses, Precious? Seriously though, I’d be sooo disappointed if someone exclaimed SCONES! and there weren’t any 🙁
Brian and Rose’s sugge…[Read more]
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 6 months ago
Ooh, Spire-not-Spire is sounding really interesting! And poor Val 😭
Yesss, the challenge! This is going to be fun. *cue Mara giving me worried glares*
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Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 6 months ago
I’m going to go ahead and get started on that new challenge!
Great! I’ll follow your lead.
I’m really, REALLY looking forward to this next challenge XD
So am I. I’ve got some…interesting ideas.
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 6 months ago
I love the drastic change to your story! It’s very intriguing (:
I’m going to go ahead and get started on that new challenge!
Awesome! Sounds good!!
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 6 months ago
@anyone else I missed
I’m going to go ahead and get started on that new challenge!
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic City Seekers (Seekers of Londima) in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 6 months ago
Honestly holding a funeral actually sounds kinda fun… XDBut I’m up for retrying if y’all are! Just let me know. 🙂
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 6 months ago
@everyone soooo…I have a rather disruptive update…
After some prayer about Spire and God’s will for the story, Spire underwent a MAJOR renovation in the span of maybe three days…to the point where I can’t actually title it Spire anymore because it’s not actually set in a city called Spire (I do plan on recycling it for Basil’s story,…[Read more]
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Ragnarok replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 6 months ago

Picture of what Arsene’s talon knives would look like.
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Ragnarok replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 6 months ago
As amusing as it would be to watch the Syndicate of Disorder fight, the gentleman thief slipped away. Many would have called this irresponsible or shrinking from duties, but Arsene Lupin was actually going to check on the other group. Maybe check out some of the apartments later on. However, checking on the other group would be quick, as they were…[Read more]
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