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There were a lot of people Alessio didn’t know now and it was disconcerting. But he didn’t have time for that he just needed to keep his cool and thin-

“BURN!” A girl yelled sharply enough Alessio flinched out of his skin. “Leave the evil pool alone! For just a minute! Okay? One minute!”

Wait, no. Nobody needed to touch the glowing pool?!?!

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“Is there a priest among us?”

I turn to look at the stranger. He looks like a fish out of water. Poor guy.

“I don’t believe so but one could easily fall out of the sky at any minute.” Nathair said.

Sky. Hm. There’s that word again. what does it mean.

That being said, I do remember a time Padre Drake tumbled out of a fourth-stor…[Read more]

Alessio didn’t look up until he felt Leana hand. He blinked, glancing up at her thoughtful, kind eyes. How was he supposed to protect her, or anyone here!? Everything was going to come crashing down all at once, he was sure. But he still felt warm when she squeezed his arm, and he froze in place trying so hard not to flinch or anything that w…[Read more]

Update: I did some more worldbuilding that hadn’t occurred to me to do before. Some of the layout might be odd, but it’s the best I could do without typing it all out again. Here it is. Thoughts anyone?

The World’s Name: Deppord-Dnal

World Description by Perception:

·       Beginning of the book: Deppord-Dnal is comprised of many region…[Read more]

Nithel sighed softly, and shut his eyes, thinking as Nathair walked off. He fingered the pendants on his necklace, feeling the flower he’d carved, for Leana… *memories/worries for the future/other thoughts…*

Leana smiled sadly at Alessio and squeezed his arm. *thoughts* “How do you know that?” She pushed to her feet, shutting her eyes in a…[Read more]

Alessio glanced up as Nathair wandered off. He’d noticed Leana seemed to sympathize with the man, and Nathair was so good with words, he’d use that to his advantage Alessio knew. But if he said anything, if he said too much he’d kill him.

Biting his lip, Alessio curled his knees into his chest. The pounding of his own heart thudded against him n…[Read more]

So cool you’re writing a mystery! I write mystery games, so my experience is very hands-on; creating a mystery hard enough to be challenging and logical enough the players don’t feel cheated after the reveal. I can say two of the biggest things to know are 1) the answer should not be “whodunit” and 2) the deduction must be calcula…[Read more]

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Ironically enough, Burn has never lead me wrong when it comes to his duties as a scout.

“As much as I hate to say it…” Words cannot even begin to express how much. “if Burn says we should go to the glowy pool of evil magic that absolutely will kill us, we should go…”

Burn nods vigorously out of the corner of my eye.

“Because there…[Read more]

“Ah yes the glowy evil water” Nathair said, “You know, maybe we should consult the grownups on this, mm?”

BURN

I point to the glowing pool that I can somehow see.

“I pick that direction!” I say triumphantly.

Nathair was getting bored (terrifying prospect, he knows). So he wandered off in search of Burn to annoy. He was talking to somebody new (that or Nathair just hadn’t bothered to remember the strange, masked person).

“Burn’s the only person I’ve known before…whatever this is.” Search was saying to the man.

“I’ve learned the names of the people I…[Read more]

hey. @this-is-not-an-alien. I thought this was supposed to be a one-shot story. Not Middle-Earth. lol

@kimlikesart @hannahrenner Ya’ll’s worlds look awesome!!!

*cracks knuckles* Now…to actually write my world’s worldbuilding

(THIS IS GOING TO MOTIVATE ME TO ACTUALLY WRITE THAT CASUMBRAN ENCYCLOPEDIA I KEEP MEANING TO WRITE BECAUSE I KEEP FORGETTING THE NAMES OF EVERYTHING I MADE UP ON THE SPOT FOR THE PLOT!!)

WORLD CHARACTER CHART…[Read more]

“Well Hades. It would seem most of the people in our group are gone. Why don’t you introduce us to your group.” Search smiles. “Burn’s the only person I’ve known before … whatever this is.”

Very well. This was reasonable. “I’ve learned the names of the people I was with, but as I have said I do not know anyone here personally.”

G…[Read more]

@hannahrenner – Ooh! That sounds really cool, Hannah!

@bookdragon

Hey Book Dragon! (Awesome name btw XD)

I am absolutely still looking for advice, it’s always welcome! Thank you so much for it, that makes a lot of sense! Thankfully I am definitely an outliner, so that part comes naturally to me at least XD

Thank you, and nice to meet you!