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Mel replied to the topic Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 2 months ago
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Mel replied to the topic Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 2 months ago
Yes, naming a place after himself is very villain-like. Let’s do that.
And everything else sounds good, especially competing in every branch; it makes a lot more sense — as does an apprenticeship!
Yes, I agree!
Speaking of ships, what do these look like? And are portals just swirling holes?
One of us could try drawing something. I…[Read more]
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Mel replied to the topic Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 2 months ago
I like the Neromiro Drake as the villain title and Andor as his “real name”. Cool idea! And glad we finally picked a name for him lol.
Yeah, I think we should allow more than one character per country. I mean, people think Vika’s from the same country as Melody’s characters, so they’ll have to take three or leave…
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Mel replied to the topic Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 2 months ago
If you win you get to lead the branch. You become the ultimate leader of the whole thing.
I like that idea but my characters are teenagers… Do you really want teenagers to be leading major government positions? (Not saying that my characters will win but still… there might be others).
Maybe the characters all play together, and…
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Mel replied to the topic Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 2 months ago
I meant that the bad-guys get impeded in some way, so they aren’t able to dispose of the losers of the Cullings — so then our guys go in and do a daring rescue
I understood that sentence for like a split second and then my brain crashed… Sorry. Plz help me! **sitting here laughing my head off**
Yes the bad guy will be a guy…[Read more]
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Mel replied to the topic Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 2 months ago
So far there are eight branches of the government, and each has a separate Culling. This might not work properly if we want out characters together though…
Yeah. So I just read through all 8 pages. LOL (took me forever :)) I saw all those categories:
-military
-science
-technology
-diplomats
-judicial branch
-legislative b…[Read more]
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Mel replied to the topic Character Building Game in the forum Characters 6 years, 2 months ago
For Chloe,
1. Would rather be someone else.
2. She really struggles with that. Towards the end of the story, tho, I think she realizes,
3. IN her mind this is scary: She went on a tube on the back of a speed boat with her friend, Lucas 🙂
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New Questions:
1. Does your character have a major sin issue, addressed in the story or not…[Read more]
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Mel replied to the topic Short Story…about a Duckling. in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
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Mel replied to the topic Short Story…about a Duckling. in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
So I really enjoyed this!
I didn’t really pick up on that it sounds like you want people to be content to be stuck in their homes…
I took away that we should trust God even when he cause everything we know to change and I LOVED that quote at the end. I’m going to like write that in my locker at school 🙂
MELODY
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Mel replied to the topic Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 2 months ago
Yes! That’s a super great idea! I love it! Remember when I mentioned
The government of the country Sinoraus is very corrupt. (Tell me if you like the following idea). Somehow they have some sort of connection with one of the game builders (not a Judge, actual builder/planner), who also is corrupt. That game builder has agreed to pay…
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Mel replied to the topic Super Important Questions about Character Castles 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
So everybody is using characters to make a story? So, it’s kinda like a collaborative story?
MELODY
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Mel replied to the topic Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 2 months ago
Also, just had a thought…
So as you can see, we already have 7 pages…
I was thinking…
After we get bulk planning done on some of the stuff I mentioned above we should start a new topic, (tag everybody), with all the details, plot, all our characters, EVERYTHING at the very top.
Don’t worry ’bout that yet tho… We still have some…[Read more]
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Mel started the topic Super Important Questions about Character Castles 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
Hello!
I see Character Castles ALOT on here.
What are Character Castles?
Just wondering!
MELODY
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Mel replied to the topic New Writer Here in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 2 months ago
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Mel replied to the topic Fresh Eyes in the forum Contemporary Fiction Writers 6 years, 2 months ago
Oh, we love helping people with their current writing works!
So what I normally do, and other people, is post your story in whatever group (fantasy, contemporary fiction, historical fiction, horror, mystery/suspense/thriller, romance, sci fi, or writers of children’s books) it fits in on the forum page. (Make sure you’ve joined that…[Read more]
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Mel replied to the topic Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 2 months ago
I’m not really understanding what you mean by that. Government position? How do you get eliminated? What do you do to not get eliminated?
Hope your move goes well! You moving far from where you were before or just in the same-ish area?
Maybe my brain is just fried, but I am confused by your idea as well. Who is…[Read more]
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Mel replied to the topic Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 2 months ago
Good ideas Winter Rose! I agree with them. 😉
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MY PLANET
Name: Rithagua
Random thought LOL: So, the whole planet is one big land mass. There is no water on the surface of the planet at all. How do the inhabitants survive? The core of the planet is…[Read more]
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Mel replied to the topic Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 2 months ago
So, had a thought about the games. (Cullings, is that the name? Sorry I forgot)
Earlier @wingiby-iggiby (P.S. Where did you get the idea for your name?) asked “How do our characters apply for the games?”.
I personally don’t think that our characters should apply for the g…[Read more]
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Mel replied to the topic Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 2 months ago
Nice character! It’s good that you have a boy, we’re lacking on those 🙂
His planet is gonna be interesting, I can tell. 🙂
BTW, Luv your quote about God, milkshakes, and people. So true!
Great progress guys!
MELODY
P.S. Still working on my planet and Country
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Mel replied to the topic Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 2 months ago
It was me who mentioned about that. 🙂 lol
I had the same thought for the “arena”.
I think I figured out what I was doing wrong. It’s cause when I copied and pasted it cut off the last letter of the tag before it. That box is easier lol Thanks
I’m working on developing my characters’ world right now :). And thinking about the game world in the process.
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