Ava Murbarger

(Dunno why I’m getting upset over this scene. It’s like it’s a friend telling me they don’t belong because of me. It’s got me sad XD)

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(Honestly didn’t think Pia could make me sad but here we are)

“No, don’t leave, Pia.” Eliana said. “I know Julian can be hard to deal with at times, but that doesn’t mean you should leave! I know he has a…[Read more]

@obrian-of-the-surface-world. I think the pacing was good–it certainly was in the dramatic read-through, but then I get bamboozled by the epic music, and lost in the storm of  the words so…I’d have to read it again to see if the piece itself is paced well. I loved your music, btw!

@rusted-knight oh my! How characteristic of Klein, and yet so unexpected. Poor guy…he can’t protect every one in the world. :'(

Klein set up his rifle quietly. He would hold back and remain on overwatch while the others moved forward. When they moved. The others were looking over the prisoners. None of them looked like good characters. Then he saw one chain in an interesting way. The others had the usual shackles. This one was chained at the waist and ankles. As Klein…[Read more]

I haven’t posted one of these in a while so I thought I’d put one more out here, just to see what you all thought of the pacing of this…[Read more]

Pia glared at him for a long moment. She roughly jerked her shoulder from Eliana’s touch. “Maybe I should leave. I don’t fit into this group and will be of no help to aid you.” She gripped her pike hard.

Kallun’s eyes widened. “Pia! That’s not true.”

“let him tease, Pia, we need the smiles.” K’Nika added.

Pia shook her head. “I should go an…[Read more]

@denali-christianson

YOU KILLED YILA?! Is she going to pull a Qatar (I will forever use that term) or is she truly dead? Either way, POOR NIAROK!

@rose-colored-fancy

You were not kidding when you said that we would loathe Chantara. I have only read two pages concerning her, and she’s already made me want to yell at her (I’m not physically…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy I just subscribed! And it’s so refreshing to see Aydin as a bigger person. (that sounded weird, but whatever).

@everyone I think after this challenge is over I’m gonna pull Quin and Qatar, and introduce a new character of mine, if that’s okay with everybody?

Julian stopped and turned around. He looked into her eyes and frowned, “you know, you aren’t the only one with a rough past.” He said quietly, but firm, “but sometimes, you just have to stop thinking about yourself and focus on what’s happening right now.”

Ellie let go of Kallun’s arm and placed her hand on Pia’s shoulder.

Julian continued,…[Read more]

Okay time for some d r a m a XD

Aydin

I didn’t want Chantara anywhere near me, but this was the only way to loosen the chains.

I couldn’t quite look at her. I couldn’t forget the last time I’d seen her, and I knew she remembered too. I could tell by the way she hadn’t let go when she felt me flinch.

She knew exactly how much I hated being…[Read more]

Okay I’m gonna post this here too! I’m starting a monthly newsletter that’s going to include… writing stuff, writing updates, and some snippets from my projects!

Here’s the link for anyone…[Read more]

@crazywriter,

Heh, me too!! It’s really nice to have other eyes to catch those. 😛

@joelle-stone

Thanks a ton Joelle! I can’t count how many grammatical errors I face palmed myself over. I really can be airheaded sometimes. XD.

She clenched her jaw. “I don’t like jokes on certain subjects! Because words do hurt! They can get into your head! They come back and remind you of the pain and make you feel it again!”

Kallun was helpless in trying to console her, his eyes were slow to adjust. “Pia..”

“no! No, Kallun! You know what I mean! Words are like demons, nightmares!”

“They only hurt if you let them hurt…” He put his arm out and made his way around her, “Besides, you of all people should be able to tell when someone is joking.” he said over his shoulder.

Chapter 3

@crazywriter,

Same format as always!

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Abner entered the private stables reserved for royalty, urgency in his every step. Bedecked in battle gear, the moon glinted (the moon is bedecked in battle gear? XD) through the narrow windows of the stables, glimmering off the cool metal armor. Having said his goodbyes the previous evening,…[Read more]

@denali-christianson

WHYYYYYYYY THIS IS AWFUL TIMING AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGHHHHHHHHHH I’M GOING TO M U R D E R H E R R I G H T N O W

Why are you hurting my sweet cinnamon roll? ROSE!!!!! Aydin’s been through so much already WHYYYYYYYY

*pointedly ignores the fact that I just murdered my character*

*Evil laughter*

REVENGE IS MINEEEE!!!!! Don’t wor…[Read more]

After living with an abusive father her entire life she knows very well how much words can hurt

Kallun shook his head, wrong words bud. 
Pia stiffened and towered over Julian. “They’ve hurt me.”

“Calm down, princess. Words never hurt anyone”