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Urwen Starial replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 5 years, 2 months ago
Era hasn’t really gone anywhere, as far as I know, I believe she’s still somewhere outside the prison. I think it would be nice to have another part from Pasha’s POV when he meets up with Era. They’re very adorable in a room together and you do a very good job writing them. 🙂
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Dakota replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 5 years, 2 months ago
@urwen-starial @mayacat @esmeralda-gramilton @kayla-skywriter @emberynus-the-dragonslayer
Okay, peeps, @naiya-dyani and I have been working on what happens next with Megyn, Kiet and Kedori . . . and here is part one. Hope this is good. 🙂 (dashes indicate POV switch
As the young woman walked past the gates, Kedori sucked in a breath through…[Read more]
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 5 years, 2 months ago
@urwen-starial @mayacat @esmeralda-gramilton @kayla-skywriter @naiya-dyani @dakota
Here’s the newest part for Chance:
Chance picked his violin up from where he had laid it on the floor. As he looked at it his lips quivered and a tear dropped onto it’s shining wood. He knelt down beside the violin case and laid the violin careful inside. A…[Read more]
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Urwen Starial replied to the topic Depressing Poetry LOL in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer @mayacat @esmeralda-gramilton @dakota @naiya-dyani @kayla-skywriter
I have a short excerpt from a song I wrote around October. Hope you enjoy.
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I feel like there’s too much space,
Not enough love, not enough grace,
To help me rise from my broken down state.
I’m tired of living, the same old stuff every day…[Read more]
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer started the topic Depressing Poetry LOL in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
@dakota @esmeralda-gramilton @mayacat @trallion @urwen-starial @naiya-dyani @kayla-skywriter
Hi Peoples!
I started this thread to post some of my depressing poetry that i like to write. Typically it is lyrical poetry. It’s not very good so you will have plenty to call out a critique. If anyone else has any depressing poetry to post you are…[Read more]
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 5 years, 3 months ago
@urwen-starial @mayacat @esmeralda-gramilton @kayla-skywriter @naiya-dyani @dakota
Logan:
“I’m sorry.” Rhioe apologized. “I shouldn’t be asking you about this.”
“No! It’s fine Rhioe. Thank you so much for caring . . . for asking,” Logan was silent for a moment as he carried her, “You remember when we first met and- and- I locked up?”
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Naiya Dyani replied to the topic My Landing Page–At Last! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
@dakota @kayla-skywriter @mayacat @seekjustice @edmund-lloyd-fletcher
Tagging you guys separately so the spam filter doesn’t eat things up. XD
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Dakota replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 5 years, 4 months ago
@urwen-starial @mayacat @esmeralda-gramilton @kayla-skywriter
@naiya-dyani ( It’s okay! Hey, would you mind if we started writing together, like in Google docs? That might doing the next parts with Kiet a little easier.)
Megyn nodded. Yes, I’m ready. Let’s go. she signed. She turned and walked through the gate.
As the Tower came into view, she…[Read more]
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Urwen Starial replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 5 years, 4 months ago
@dakota @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @mayacat @esmeralda-gramilton @kayla-skywriter @naiya-dyani
“I want to tell you Rhioe but. . . it hurts so much. . you know?” Logan said.
“I know.” Rhioe said quietly. “It’s just. . . You’ve been so kind to me, and I can’t stand to see you look so hurt.” There was a silence, and Rhioe wondered if she’d…[Read more]
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 5 years, 4 months ago
@dakota @urwen-starial @mayacat @esmeralda-gramilton @kayla-skywriter @naiya-dyani
Korynth, Iyan, and Jin:
Light was barely glowing in the eastern sky as Korynth and Iyan reached the tower with their prisoner. The trek to the tower had been a long, cold one and Korynth was glad for Iyan’s sake that it was over. Just the same he hated every time…[Read more]
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 5 years, 4 months ago
@dakota @urwen-starial @mayacat @esmeralda-gramilton @kayla-skywriter @naiya-dyani
Logan & Rhioe:
Logan blinked. He wasn’t expecting the question. What am I supposed to say to her? He opened his mouth to speak, but no words came. He was grateful that she noticed and cared enough to ask. But could he really let her see the things that hurt him? T…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 5 years, 4 months ago
@urwen-starial Great job!
@naiya-dyani It’s okay!! 🙂 BTW (this is not be nasty – just saying), Megyn isn’t blonde. She has chestnut brown hair, something similar to this –

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer @mayacat @esmeralda-gramilton @kayla-skywriter
Footsteps pounded on the street. Megyn lifted her head, her facing lifting with a small smile w…[Read more]
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Naiya Dyani replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 5 years, 4 months ago
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer @dakota @urwen-starial @mayacat @esmeralda-gramilton @kayla-skywriter
Kedori dodged piles of garbage and rubble on the road as he raced for the Sector Two gate. Please let her be there, God. Please.
At the sight of the blonde woman by the gate, tears sprung into his eyes. She got permission. He’s going to be o…[Read more]
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Urwen Starial replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 5 years, 4 months ago
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer @dakota @naiya-dyani @mayacat @esmeralda-gramilton @kayla-skywriter
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The streets were dark as Jin was led through them by the two officers who had come to take him to the Tower. The sun was just beginning to rise in the east, but its light was hidden behind the dark buildings. His breath huffed gently in the cold…[Read more]
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Urwen Starial replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 5 years, 4 months ago
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer @dakota @naiya-dyani @mayacat @esmeralda-gramilton @kayla-skywriter
Back to it.
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Rhioe blinked hard as her eyes adjusted as Logan carried her out of Leona’s house and back outside. The dark gray clouds had cleared a little, enough for the evening sun to shine through a little. Logan’s shoes barely made any noi…[Read more]
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Urwen Starial replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 5 years, 5 months ago
Great, thank you! 🙂
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Urwen Starial replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 5 years, 5 months ago
I don’t know if it notified you when I posted it a little while ago. If you’re able to check, I believe it was on 74 of this thread.
If you’re not able to I can try reposting it again.
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Urwen Starial replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 5 years, 5 months ago
Hey, just a follow up on a question I asked a while ago, as well as a new one.
Would you like for Era to meet up with Pasha again?
And if you are okay with the role I’m hoping to give my new character Dither, pls let me know.
Thx.
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 5 years, 5 months ago
@mayacat @urwen-starial @kayla-skywriter @esmeralda-gramilton @naiya-dyani @dakota
Here is the next part for: Cade/Joan/Thyme/Jordan
Mayacat and I wrote it together. She did an incredible job 🙂
Thyme awoke to a frantic rapping on her door. She glanced out the window as she rolled off of her couch, already pulling on a warm coat and a pair of…[Read more]
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Grace replied to the topic I'm not ready to write this in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 5 months ago
@kayla-skywriter No problem! Good luck moving forward 🙂
@arindown Right now I’m working on a Beauty and the Beast retelling that’s a contemporary fantasy. How about you?
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