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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Best Analogies in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
I think it’s an awesome visual. In a tumultuous sea, it can very well seem like a dark hand rising up to swat you into oblivion!
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Please Critique: Warning- Emotional Scene (1809 words) in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
That’s awesome and sounds like a great and interesting book!
amen!
no problem. =) I understand.
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Emma Walker replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
Kallun pulled out two more, and K’Nika brought them to Ellie.
Pia was digging around by the trees and tall grass in search of any other edible thing. -
Erynne replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
Julian frowned. “Alright. How many more do we need?”
In the meantime, Ellie had found some sticks that had a sort of Y shape to them and stabbed them into the ground on either side of the fire. “Hey, Julian, let me have those. This is something I can actually do.”
He gave the stick to Ellie and she laid the stick over the fire. “You stay away f…[Read more]
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Erynne replied to the topic Best Analogies in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
Hi there, sir! I don’t believe we’ve met yet. I’m Erynne (Erin 😉 )
This is a really cool idea!
The best analogy I’ve used in writing was a fantasy story and the scene was of siblings trying to escape pirates in the middle of a storm. They were in a small getaway boat and to describe the waves I used this analogy:
The large,…[Read more]
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Emma Walker replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
Kallun shook his head head. “That’s alright.” He walked over to the edge and reached down into the water, the fish swam right to his hands, and he pulled them out with ease.
K’Nika grinned.
(lol yesssss I have that’s the best.)
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Erynne replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
XD I would love to see a cat do that. Have you seen Olaf’s version of his smolder? That’s the best
Julian smirked at K’Nika, “please, this is my specialty”
He took his stick which was just long enough to get a decent way into the room and took a stab. In just a single stab he was able to get two fish on his stick. All of this happened in less…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Please Critique: Warning- Emotional Scene (1809 words) in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
It is a truly difficult subject to tackle. How much duress can cover, and evil actions vs the actor and factors that might diminish guilt but exactly how far?
In my story, the MC, Alessio, is a seventeen-year-old prince who’s a fantastically intelligent, gifted protégé, escaping a cult he was sold to. Because he’s so clever, and can detect lies…[Read more]
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Annabelle Batie replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga 5th book RP in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
Hi everyone,
I’m new here. And I saw this post in the forums, and I was like–OH MY WORD, A WINGFEATHER ROLEPLAY?!!!!
I love Wingfeather. Just love it.
So please, Include meeee
Please
Please Please Please Please Please…
(infinity pleases)
So yeah, um, am I too late to join? Also, I didn’t really feel like reading through the million posts…[Read more]
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Annabelle Batie joined the group Romance Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
As @inkhorn said! You can add any room, we’re just making it up as we go along. We do try to keep all the characters more or less together because otherwise the castle gets stuck much easier.
You can make up anything you like! We’ve had some wild settings already. XD The zero-gravity room, the dinosaur greenhouse, all the caves…[Read more]
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Emma Walker replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
I looked at my cat the other day and she was giving me the Flynn Rider smolder and I looked over at my brother and was like, look at the cat, she be like, here comes the smolder. XDXD XD
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Crazywriter replied to the topic Talk room in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
Thanks so much! I’ve got Chapter 5 finished, so when you get done with chapter 4, I’ll send it over. It’s a real tearjerker!
Sorry, if this is overloading you, but I can’t thank you enough.
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Best Analogies in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
A proverbial saying of my world…
“A week’s journey can cast a year’s shadow.”
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Emma Walker replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
K’Nika grabbed Kallun’s arm and pulled him toward the River, “Come, Gorodramvy Ahiyed. You can help since you’re already wet.”
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Joshua Scheele replied to the topic What is the most bizarre creature you have created for your WIP? in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
Thanks! I look forward to yours as well.
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Best Analogies in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
This one I’m pretty proud of… sends shivers….
Female protagonist, in describing the man she’s attracted to after he carries her in from the rain – after drying off, he sits in front of a fire with a blanket rapped around him…
The shadows and lights danced upon his face as a lone drip of water streaked down his face, following the…[Read more]
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Erynne replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
“Excellent. Anyone hungry?” He asked picking up a stick and breaking it in half on his knee so it formed a point.
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Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
The characters have been to many different parts of the castle like the gardens, library, zero gravity room, etc. However, the castle is constantly changing. You can create any type of setting you want within the castle. The only rule concerning the setting is that it has to be within the castle since characters are not allowed to…[Read more]
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