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  • Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Best Analogies in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 1 month ago

    This one I’m pretty proud of… sends shivers….

     

    Female protagonist, in describing the man she’s attracted to after he carries her in from the rain – after drying off, he sits in front of a fire with a blanket rapped around him…

     

    The shadows and lights danced upon his face as a lone drip of water streaked down his face, following the curves of his cheek bone.

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