Adrelle

Okay, I picked a name let’s go!!

Name: Halmar. (Pronounced just like you’d think XD) Often goes by Hal.

Age: Again… not quite sure. I think about 20.

Appearance: Maybe about 6′, looks pretty similar to Mejt. You can definitely tell they’re siblings. Same light, curly hair.

He’s wearing plain, common clothes like Mejt.

Personality: Again……[Read more]

Yes, I only just now got to this. Was it worth it?

ABSOLUTELY

This. Was. Amazing. Your heart and soul seemed to be poured out into this scene, one of those moments where your fingers pound the keys and the scene in your brain just… comes. Beautifully.

Tag me if you ever post more. 🙂

@rose-colored-fancy

Nice to see you again!

Thank you so much, that answers all my questions.  I was aware that longswords are actually pretty light but it slipped my mind… 🙃.  So my boy will have bad bruising, a nasty cut, and lots of stitches.  Got it.

@crazywriter,

OH NO IS IT THAT ONE YOU MENTIONED?!

Sorry, if this is overloading you, but I can’t thank you enough.

Hey, no problem! I have time specifically set apart for critiquing, so it’s just a matter of whether I’m diligent or not. 😛

“There’s many caves in the forest. My people use them often, some are even homes.” K’Nika explained softly, “But like I said earlier, I was mining the rock.”

Kallun nodded and he and Pia both said at the same time, “Lighlorite.”

K’Nika nodded, munching on an onion.

(Oki doke)

“oh, I’m so sorry!” Ellie said placing a fish and a few onion pieces on each “plate”

Julian grabbed the first two she finished for himself and K’Nika.

“how’d you end up in that cave place we were in?” he asked handing her the food

(btw, I’m not sure how active I’ll be over the weekend. going on a trip to a conference)

@jared-williams

Okay, can I just say how much I love that part!? It makes me like Abirami so much more. He was literally willing to take the injuries he’d dealt to the others. That’s an awfully big sacrifice. I love it so much!

@everyone

I think I might drop in Mejt’s older brother. I had an idea for his character and it could be pretty h…[Read more]

@skylarynn

Hi Skylarynn! I believe we met in the villains’ character castle a while ago! Nice to see you again!

Disclaimer, I have next to no medical knowledge, I’ll leave that to @the-inkspiller . However, I have some experience with longswords and some knowledge of medieval stuff (having researched it myself) So I’ll try to give you a partial…[Read more]

Let’s see if I can revive this thread.

@the-inkspiller

So a character of mine (@anne_the_noob14 not Brendin, I swear) had a longsword thrown at his back when he was 17.  I’ve already decided that it miraculously managed to cut his back open from his right shoulder to his left hip, but my questions for you are:

1) Is it possible the impact from…[Read more]

Haha yeah XD

“The thabians attacked us while we were unarmed and not ready. My brother… he tried hiding my sister and I but when I tried to find them… everyone was just… gone.”

“I’m sorry.” Pia said. “I didnt know my father was even thinking of attacking.”

Kallun said nothing. He only nodded.

Glad to do it. 😉 and Lorcan is fully healed now too. =) Lots of fun things to come, I don’t doubt… (oh, and Ku is currently sending her bugs out into the castle to map it out. hehe. – well, at least a map of the castle as it currently is… or perhaps even as it changes… hehe hehe.)

“what happened?” Ellie asked finding some smooth rocks to use as plates for the fish

THE IRONY!!!!! Look at what I said about her family on cucg

“that’s alright.” Kallun peeled them and cut them in quarters with his dagger. He passed them all around and K’Nika passed around some sticks so they could roast over the flame.
“K’Nika?” Kallun glanced at the small girl.

She looked over at him.

”Could you tell us about your family?”

K’Nika nodded. “I have two siblings, and my parents… or I did.”

“Perfect!” Ellie proclaimed, “shall we eat, or shall I cook the onions first?”

@Jared-williams Thanks for interacting with Isella! It was really great and will provide much fun and interesting stuff to answer to. :))) I’m a very happy camper over here. One problem is that I doubt I’ll be able to reply until Monday. I’ll try tomorrow, but…

K’Nika raised her eyebrows.

Kallun brought a few extra fish, just in case. He looked around, “Pia?”
Her red-brown hair bobbed up about the tall grass, “I found wild onions!” She made her way back with a arm load of them.

”Wild onions are local here, the Tribe would eat them all the time…” Her voice trembled. She missed her people.

The fish were cooking away. “Hm…” Ellie thought turning them slowly so they could evenly. “Julian, come turn these, and uh, don’t turn them into charcoal this time.”

“Stop it.” he mumbled glancing at K’Nika.

She went over to bag that was laying on the rock with her wet clothes, and dug around in it until she pulled out a small box. Inside were…[Read more]

Tears…. I just wrote a whole section and lost it again. waaa.

Ok. bah. here we go again… well, at least, for me… here we go… again. :,(.

Abirami

I put on my garb as Ku’Aya stormed in and stomped over to me.

I held my hands up as she wielded her quarterstaff like a painter’s brush. “How dare you throw me! What if my hive hadn’t…[Read more]