Adrelle

Alessio felt Nithel nod, and he was trying to pay attention everything was turning numb. He didn’t want to feel anything anymore, he didn’t want to have to think.

Fear not…for I have created…

He couldn’t remember the words, not in order at least. Just in fragments, like broken thoughts or phrases. It was a stupid thing to fixate on, but it wa…[Read more]

@jared-williams

I just posted critique on CW!

@jared-williams

“Womanizer”

HA! That’s the best one yet😂 Ku’Aya has certainly taken a disliking to Lorcan. So far her descriptions of him have made me laugh pretty hard🤣 I am loving this!! So so funny 😆

haha… did you just compare him to a damsel in distress? haha. I wonder how he’ll feel about that.

I completely agree! So many people try to capture success, and it just can’t be done. All of our society seems obsessed with it. No tropes because tropes are typically over done. But they are overdone because they work and are well liked and…[Read more]

@ajstoryteller Cool.

Samatha looked around, bewildered. What just happened? Where am I?

She had been headed back home to Frappeli, when the storm hit. Home, to her father and her little boy. But she couldn’t remember what happened.

She clutched at the hilt of her rapier that hung at her waist, her insides twisting and making her feel si…[Read more]

@inkhorn

Right?! Enough of this sad endings stuff, eesh! (Okay, okay,guilty as charged!)

I only hope I can make him a character to match her. *scrunches up face in doubt and confusion*.

@emily-waldorf

Mmm-hmm. And a certain someone… 🙂

My heart is singing with joy! We all need characters who have happy endings. 🙂

@noah-cochran

An enemy from her past in a contemporary setting could be interesting

Yeah, I thought so too. I was thinking maybe an ex husband who she thought had died…

I would recommend you think along the lines of: pick a relatively normal activity or hobby, add some interesting conflict to it, and have it connected to both the guy and the…

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@rose-colored-fancy

Thanks! Sounds good: whenever you get time.

Aw, yay!

I don’t know if what happened back there was entirely clear so here’s a short of it:

Isella held time–and hence, the cloud–still for about a minute. Enydd ran up and was going to touch Issa, but that could result in disaster, so Isella told her to run. May and Halmar were able to get up, but they’re sick from getting so close to the cloud and…[Read more]

@noah-cochran

I love romance subplots in books, but I don’t typically read straight romances. They do interest me enough to think about writing one though.

Gotcha. That’s cool! It’s hard to read straight romances. I enjoy them, but it’s hard to find clean ones.

I like both of those ideas! I was thinking of ways to make it a mystery, but I s…[Read more]

@emily-waldorf

Ooooh, that was AWESOME!!! I can’t write a reply soon though 😭😭 I’ll try but probably not before Sunday.

Okay, so Idk how Isella escapes the effects of the cloud; if some of Ku’s bugs are immune and can help, or if her connection to Time does something…idk, but she’s not dead, just so you know.

If anyone wants to keep going until…[Read more]

@irishcelticredflowercrown

Thanks! And YAYYAYAY. Poor Daire. he couldn’t have chosen a hero more reluctant to be worshiped.

@inkhorn

Mmm-hmm. And a certain someone… 🙂

@jared-williams

Well I know, but I don’t understand why people want big-brother SCs instead of MCs. Whatever *shruggs* they also don’t like adjectives or tropes, and I…[Read more]

Isella

She could feel herself blushing. Stupid thing to do. Lorcan’s quick eye glanced her up and down. He saw, and didn’t care. He treated it as something normal. Of course. He’s handsome enough he’s used to ladies blushing when he talks to them.

She cursed herself and blushed deeper with embarrassment, then tried to force the color out of her…[Read more]

@noah-cochran
Haha, ngl, i totally didn’t see you as a romance guy.

Yes, it is the former. I think It’ll probably be more of a contemporary thing to show the difference in a Christian courtship versus a modern day thing.

I have no plot ideas, just characters and genre.

Thanks for being willing to help!

ENYDD

A look of panic overtook the girl’s face. “No, no, no,” she whimpered, her eyes staring into the distance.

“Is everything all right?” I asked gently.

“No! We must run. Now!” she yelled.

I whirled around, expecting to see some hideous monster looming over us. There was no monster aside from the dead beasts. What was wrong?

The clo…[Read more]

@annabelle-batie

I don’t actually know those languages, lol. I’m sort of learning Spanish, but…yeah.

Cool! Do you have mermen, too? Those one-word titles can be so gripping! I’m currently working on two WIPs, When Morning Comes, a story about two brothers whose relationship has stagnated through a tragedy and their journey back to mutual…[Read more]