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  • Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 1 month ago

    I don’t know if what happened back there was entirely clear so here’s a short of it:

    Isella held time–and hence, the cloud–still for about a minute. Enydd ran up and was going to touch Issa, but that could result in disaster, so Isella told her to run. May and Halmar were able to get up, but they’re sick from getting so close to the cloud and can’t go fast enough, so Isella did two things with Time at once: with her left hand she held Time ( and also the cloud) at bay;  with her right hand she sped Time up around May and Halmar to get them out of there quicker. She then resumed holding Time with both hands, but it’s too strong for her and she is thrown backward by it’s force as it rushes back to normal, bringing the cloud with it.

     

    This is the situation as I envisioned it, without people editing the actions of their characters. 🙂

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