Jordyn Emma West

@vivian-grant If you can pay special attention to setting, and the girl character (Moira), that would be super helpful!! Although anything you notice and can give me feedback on is great 🙂

@esther-sears

You’re welcome! What do you want me to take note of– character development, plotting, both?

@vivian-grant Yaaaayyy!!! Thank you so much! 😀 Now, it is more or less a tragic love story, so as long as you’re prepared for that… 😉

Here’s the Google Doc!

Thank you again to everyone who helped, especially @deeprun and @caseybold. I finished my final edit tonight, and submitted the manuscript. Fingers crossed =P

@esther-sears

Hello! My name is Vivian. I joined this group a couple days ago. I would be willing to beta-read your story! 🙂

@katthewriter

Those all sound really neat.

I’m trying to figure out how to describe it. XD It’s basically a sort of “life is worth living/anti suicide” message with a road trip aesthetic. If that makes any sense.

@katthewriter Yeah, I like these too! 🙂

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

They sound cool not sure if they actually are xD but thanks

@katthewriter

*pops in*

Your stories all sound super cool!

@pensword

Joe books,are spies, and how that has effected thier family,  and dealing with loss, and that you can’t do everything on your own.

Unknown is kinda about forgivness/letting go/pro life

Finding You. .. is complicated. 3 MC’s who are all dealing with different forms of hurt, its an old time/slight sci-fi one.

Scars is about a…[Read more]

@katthewriter

Those sound neat! What’s the premise of them?

@katthewriter

XD No planet, my dear friend. Indeed, the Realm of Dreams is what I call home. 😉 But yeah, I don’t like dark chocolate. Milk chocolate is iffy. White chocolate is perfection, tho.

Thanks! Coming up with names is one of my favorite things to do. Hm… a bit of both, I think. Kari, Talia, and OH Veronica too(another fave, but she’s…[Read more]

@kari-karast

YOU don’t like chocolate??? What planet are you from? ? 😛 😉

Ohhh. Lots of cool names. Are they all your favorite cuz they’re good characters,  or you line they’re personality,  or what?  XP

Thanks!  It took me so long to figure out his name. For the longest time he was just ‘the-dude-with-revenge-issues’

XD

@katthewriter

Aww. Poor thing. I don’t like chocolate, personally, but if someone who does hasn’t had it in that long…

Ohhhh. XD Well. There’s a lot. Kari, Eina, Zane, Talia, Sage, Blade… *ignores fact that Kari’s and Sage’s stories are no longer in progress* I could go on. XD

Ooh. Roger is a very good name. My friend has a character named…[Read more]