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Skylarynn replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Apologies for the absence…
“No,” Jericho said as Alessio volunteered to sacrifice himself. “No, wait a moment.”
Brendin had sat down on the floor with his back against one of the beds. “Jericho,” he said softly in Kithin. “There is a way we can do this without losing anyone.”
She turned to him, startled. “You speak as one of the Eya…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
“If we start arguing over who’s the weakest member we’ll become too divided to survive even if we make it through this. We don’t have enough time to argue this.” Alessio’s voice was defiant, but scared. “Let me get just one thing right, and finish this.”
Nithel had looked back at his friend, forehead wrinkling. Pain is in his eyes, heartach…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
@kimlkesart
Thanks! It’s a combination of I think it was @rose-colored-fancy’s dilemma in Character Castle 2.0 and a dilemma in my WIP. Oh and yes I can’t wait to see who Malvet chooses @joelle-stone!@skylarynn, oh goodness that’s rough!!! I’m so happy you’re back tho, you’re just in time everybody’s about to die!!!!!!!! 😀
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Skylarynn replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Hey, sorry for the prolonged absence. The laptop I’d been using to write on here wasn’t mine, and I couldn’t get my own one for a while after I returned it. I didn’t use my phone because I have trouble typing on it, and my typewriter doesn’t get an internet connection 🙂 .
@kimlikesart @joelle-stone @this-is-not-an-alien @millenium @crazywriter
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 12 months ago
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Cathy replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 12 months ago
@joelle-stone
Lol ARE YOU NOT ENTERTAINED!?!
@millennium (lol, Ryuu means dragon. Clever 😉Everything came crashing around him. Including the dragon.
“I figured it was time we rejoined.” He was already talking. “There is a mankind here by the name of Gavin Thunderfoot. Who is this she-wolf, and was it she who issued the command?”
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Rainy Emily replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 12 months ago
Asena listened to the voice of “Lord Castle” and felt a shiver run down her spine. Suddenly the wall shattered and dragon burst through, a cloud of pale dust showering him as he bounded forward and slewed before them.
“I figured it was time we rejoined.” He spoke and Asena narrowed her eyes at him. Dragons were always dangerous and unp…[Read more]
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Skylarynn replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago
I wasn’t planning on doing that, I just meant the spelling was somewhat important to the meaning.
Also the castle has been somewhat dormant the past few days…y’all doing alright?
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Neasa replied to the topic Stories and Fantasies in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago
Hi thank you so much, it’s great to meet you! I’m so delighted to be here, finally my search for a good writing forum has ended haha XD
Thank you! It’s so lovely to meet you 🙂
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Rebekah12 replied to the topic Stories and Fantasies in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago
You’re good!
And. . . wow. . . thanks! I suppose that means I need to prepare to post the next chapter 😉
Welcome! *grins*
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Skylarynn replied to the topic Stories and Fantasies in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago
Thanks for critiquing! I probably won’t be able to return the favor – the semester is wrapping up and my teachers saw fit to drown me in projects – but I’ll reply to some of your annotations.
Or maybe Nadia is just the observative/I’m-calm-in-any-situation type.
She is, that’s part of why there’s no frenzied thoughts in this sc…[Read more]
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Mischievous Thwapling replied to the topic Stories and Fantasies in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago
Noticed no one’s really been able to critique your story yet, so Imma jump in and do that 😉
Hm… You just described her as a woman, now grown up, when she was startled by her reflection, so maybe saying “at the young woman” would be better than girl 🙂 Just a thought. *shrugs*
It’s hard for me to explain, but something about…[Read more]
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Mischievous Thwapling replied to the topic Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago
Heeey!!
Yeah, I’m good with whatever we do for the POVs–I honestly don’t care XD Though, yes, third POV would definitely be less confusing when/if we turn this story into a book.
*returns @joelle-stone‘s glance* *nods vigorously* YES. Turning RPs into manuscripts that even remotely resemble books is so messy and difficult, l…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago
Dealing with the emotional roller coaster that is a must for a teenage girl, and battling the “I’m almost done with school” drag.
I’m sorry.
How long until you are done with school?
Other than that, fine and dandy! What about you?
That’s good! I’m doing alright. (:
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago
“Brendan is not dead.” Nithel whispered, his chest aching so much, but he let Alessio scoot back.
“I will stay with you, even if I am cursed. A life lived in safety is selfish.” Nithel’s eyes were serious, showing the ache inside him. “I am not saying safety should not be desired. Rest is good. But if your safety costs the safety of others… It…[Read more]
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Skylarynn replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago
Hey everyone, sorry for the prolonged absence; there was a semi traumatic incident a few days ago and then my schedule has been booked since.
Jericho healed the wounds on Brendin’s face as quickly as she could without doing a hasty job of it. She needed to follow the others after Alessio had run off, but she couldn’t leave Brendin here alone…[Read more]
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Erynne replied to the topic Explain your plot badly! (Just for fun XD) in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years ago
BTW, a lesson about driving in the snow? *imagines blizzards and sheer cliffs and car crashes* That’s somehow intriguing. XD
Well I’m glad you think so lol. If you’re curious about the plot, you can find it in the Romance section. I don’t remember the title, but the plot is in like the fourth paragraph down.
*makes note to ask you…
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago
I’m not what you think. Alessio whispered, and Nithel breathed a moment.
What does he believe I see? Nithel squeezed Alessio a bit tighter, holding him as he pondered. Then Nithel lifted his chin, and looked at Alessio. Sadness in his eyes, but also firmness, “Eaziziun Wahid,” very softly, “even if you had murdered someone, I would not leave y…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago
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Erynne replied to the topic Explain your plot badly! (Just for fun XD) in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years ago
Wow, @joelle-stone. That first one is hilarious 😂😂
A book I’m going to secretly write one of these days (so in like ten years): A girl with a serious temper issue gets lost in the woods.
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