Joelle Stone

@mischievous-thwapling,

Yurp! *thumbs up*

@mischeivous-thwapling,

Honestly, as detailed as of a critique that you have time to give. Don’t feel pressured to get super deep, though. 🙂 *wonders if I even posted part 3* *goes and checks*

@melancholicwriter,

Ooh, both of those are good. Do you like the movies or the books better?

@rebekah12,

First off, that is SO intriguing!! I can totally envision the slick deck and pelting rain. Your descriptions are vibrant and your dialogue realistic. But before I go rattling off, how detailed of a critique would you like?

@skylarynn,

Concerning description and stuff, your revised version was much better!

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So, last time I did one of these, I got completely overwhelemed trying to critique everyone’s stories. So this go-round, if y’all are okay with it, I’ll just pick two or three to follow so that I can critique those as well as I can instead of giving you hasty and probably inaccurate ideas. Sorry if that hurts someone’s feelings. :/ I think I’m…[Read more]

@rebekah12,

Yurp, works for me!

@mischievous-thwapling,

*salutes* One question though: Ian ISN’T an Elf, right? Or is he? And you do want him in the prophecy, right?

*realizes that was three questions* *shrugs*

@mischievous-thwapling,

No worries! I do that sometimes on accident too. 🙂

Erm, personally I like the first two the best. Maybe we can combine them, though? Like have them play a board game without communicating with voices, then one of them accidentally does and they’re shrunk as punishment? XD I have no clue where that came from, but it…[Read more]

@mischievous-thwapling,

Ha, I was going to say that! (The “um” thing, that is.) And go straight ahead!

@kylie-wingfeather (and everyone else),

I have no clue what to do with Arundelle & Artham, so I await y’all’s lead! 🙂

@mischievous-thwapling,

Uh… *looks at Bekah* I think so?

It’s WIND!

@kimlikesart,

Pretty well! Life’s a bit crazy, which is why I haven’t really been on. How about you?

(@skylarynn Ooh, I’m so sorry!! My family recently lost our dog of 14 years as well, so I feel for you. ):)

“Oh, I think we are quite alright,” the woman replied breezily. “You have my thanks for the offer, but I must decline.” Something followed her words, a whisper of thought, but just beyond Malvat’s reach. A slight frown dimpled his face. The…[Read more]

@jasmine,

Do you want her to team up or fight alone? Either one works, and if you want Gwendolyn could be on her team (please don’t feel obligated, I was just throwing it out there,).

Either works!! If you want to have Gwen and Riure on a team, I’m all for it (plus it’ll help Riure recognize her better. ;)).

@rebekah12,

I read your story, and it looks awesome (plus great cliffhanger – and Chapter 56?!? That’s AMAZING!! My longest WIP is 23. XD). I’ll critique when I have time. 🙂

*sheepishly hangs head* Ooh… page three? Was it really that bad? *coughs*

Welcome back, Crazywriter! 😀

@crazywriter,

No problem! I know how moving is. 🙂 Welcome back!

Yurp, I’m not sure what I’m gonna do with Ash right now either. *shrugs*

So, is Klein with Riure and Zanar or with Ferran and Dancrow?