Joelle Stone

@skylarynn,

Critiquing time!! Same format as before. 🙂

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Unlike the outer masonry of the wall, which had been intentionally made smooth to keep invaders from climbing it unaided, the interior side was formed of [from] rough-cut stones with large gaps between them.  Nadia had little trouble finding hand- and footholds…[Read more]

@skylarynn & @rebekah12,

Oof, sry for not critiquing! Life has been just about as hectic as it gets. XD And Bekah, I’m SO SO sorry (especially since your story is awesome), but IDT I’ll have the time/mental energy to critique, and since I told Skylarynn I’d critique hers first, I’m gonna go ahead and stick with her. I’m still reading yours though…[Read more]

Asnea looks great, @millennium! I can’t wait to see what happens with another shape-shifter around… 😀

@millennium,

Of course! Welcome back!

“Alright. Lets do this.” Klein’s voice was muted, but he spoke slowly and enunciated clearly. Riure cocked her head to listen better. “The green cards are used to move. The grey cards are used to attack. You can only use one per turn. DON’T TELL ME WHAT YOU HAVE.”

Wow. Riure fought back a smile. That must be important.

“There should be a c…[Read more]

“Gavin Thunderfoot. Halt.”

The mankind hesitated, as if considering obedience, then continued his rapid flight. Malvat temporarily lost sight of him as he wove around corners, but the sound of his thoughts let Malvat track him down.

Cursing the size of his dragon-form, Malvat paused his movement and cautiously tested the sturdiness of a wal…[Read more]

@kimlikesart,

Dealing with the emotional roller coaster that is a must for a teenage girl, and battling the “I’m almost done with school” drag. Other than that, fine and dandy! What about you?

@melodyjoy,

What Rose said. Although, if the only reason you’re writing from Ryumon’s POV is ’cause we need an inside slave-thing, I think Aleck and one of Wing or Thwapling’s characters was gonna lose too. 😉

@melodyjoy,

Hey, welcome back (and we’ll miss you)! Thx for letting us know. 😉

Yeah, that’s what I thought too, but I figured that we had decided to just write the RP first and after we’re finished see if we wanna pour the work in to make it into a book. Honestly, it’s a LOT of work to make it even remotely close to book-form. *glances at @misch…[Read more]

@mischievous-thwapling,

*trembles in terror* Yes ma’am! Yes ma’am!! Just don’t send the peanut-butter dogs after me. XD

Yay, welcome to The Castle, Crazywriter!

@jasmine,

Aha, she sounds awesome!!

@mischievous-thwapling,

1. How could I hate you for that especially when I tend to do the same thing?
2. Ooh, that sounds cool! Other reasons could be it’s a family heirloom, an Elvish friend gave it to him, he found it, etc.
3. Glad you’re back with us! 😉

Where am I? What is this place?

The thought floated through Malvat’s head, spoken in a strong voice. A newcomer? Did all mankind enjoy hiding in the shadows instead of presenting themselves as soon as they arrived?

Malvat turned towards the thought, narrowing his eyes at a pile of books and scrolls on the floor, no longer concealed by the…[Read more]

*decides to put this in a dictionary* Castle: a glorified pile of rocks.

XD Nicely put, Evil Scientist!

@winter_rose @mischievous-thwapling,

Aha, three of our quartet is here! And to answer the questions:

1. I don’t think it matters. A few various ideas we tossed around were having the story start off when the contestants realized they were going to be sent to the Cullings (although that might be repetitive), or, as you said, we could start with…

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