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Catholic Creed replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
Okay, who said you could talk to me like a kid?
I am in my twenties and an adult thank you very much!
Course, I don’t feel much like an adult in the moment. Which is entirely irrelevant to the task at hand – namely, trying to act like an adult.
Of course creepy punk is babbling still. Like I’m a kid – actually, I’m pretty sure nobody talk like…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
“Thank you. I…That’s…kind of you.” Leana said looking baffled and glancing at everyone crowding around her. Honestly felt like the Disney Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs but Alessio would have to break the Fourth Wall to make that observation 😉
They certainly made the most outlandish group you could think of, now that Alessio was thinking…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Research of less-than-desirable topics (wounds, wound complications, etc.) in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
Of course, I’m happy I could help! And yeah, injuring characters is tough XD
As for your first questions, that’s quite beyond me XD But I can answer the latter!
Does anyone also know if there could be a pain-killer strong enough to ease physical wounds in pill-form?
Yes! Painkillers that work on the central nervous…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
Leana’s eyes widen when the man playfully shoves some sort of parcel into her hands. It crinkles strangely, a sound she’s never heard before… Like the crunching of locust shells? But… mixed with the song of a living locust? And it felt smooth… few things were this smooth. Maybe the flat of blades, but even that was a different smooth.
“I h…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
Alessio peeked up again when Arsene tumbled in carrying a strange bag.
What did you just steal?
With an unusually kind smile, he handed the bag to Leana. Alessio stared at it inquisitively. And then blinked because he wasn’t as suspicious of the contents as he should be. What just happened, why isn’t he more wary of Arsene, he’s wary of every…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
Blind Guy fell over in the middle of them escaping. Further he yelped like a frightened puppy.
Nathair sighed.
“Now you’re scaring the kids.” He murmured to no one in particular and went over to the Blind Guy. “Not planning on wandering off again, are you?”
Nathair crouched beside him, evaluating. No good them getting separated again he wasn’t…[Read more]
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Miller replied to the topic Research of less-than-desirable topics (wounds, wound complications, etc.) in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
THANK YOUUUU!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!
*Does not stop thanking for another 10 minutes*
(But seriously thank you. Because I get stuck whenever I want to injure one of my characters because I don’t know what it will look like or how to heal them. So thank you!
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Rose replied to the topic Research of less-than-desirable topics (wounds, wound complications, etc.) in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
Okay I can kinda answer a few of these! I have no medical experience in this, but I do have some personal experience with both, besides some historical research for the same kinds of questions in my WIP!
So I have a character who fell maybe a couple feet of the ground and then got hit in the head by the pulley system she built and I…
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
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I did?
Ok it sounds vaguely familiar but I’d forgotten all about that XD
Yes honey you absolutely did and it was honestly such brilliant advice that it stuck with me XD
Wait.. that ain’t normal?
*reads through everything* hmm… *goes to looks up symptoms* Wait a minute… I’ve wondered if e-n-leonard was “neurospark… -
E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
@rose-colored-fancy @calidris @lady-grace
If it helps, @calidris once gave me some great advice when I was doubting Aydin. She told me to imagine if they had grown up in completely normal circumstances. Would they still have those traits? For Aydin, that was a resounding yes.
Hmm, that’s interesting advice. I’ll try it on Ríadnu. Thanks…[Read more]
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
Oh cool!
Lol I knew you weren’t, but in general I think that’s the context I see it in! Which…weird how something as simple as that can take on a whole new meaning after a bunch of people use the same way enough times…
Kit: “Looking for anything in particular? Or are you just here to see me ;)”
How horrible of h…[Read more]
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Miller replied to the topic Research of less-than-desirable topics (wounds, wound complications, etc.) in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
*enters room slowly* hey so I was told this was a good place to come and ask my harming of characters questions soooooo… Here I am! With some questions.
So I have a character who fell maybe a couple feet of the ground and then got hit in the head by the pulley system she built and I wanted to know if A. The pulley system would break the skin.…[Read more]
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C. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
*skips into room cause I heard there were drawings* —
Huh. So that has a name. *remembers the times I’ve panicked and practiced in my brain before phone calls even to simple, mundane restaurants *
Wait.. that ain’t normal?
*reads through everything* hmm… *goes to looks up symptoms* Wait a minute… I’ve wondered if @e-n-leonard was “neurospark…[Read more] -
Ragnarok replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
Hades had been quietly standing beside Alessio, having become passive again. He hadn’t flinched the entire time, having mastered the art of appearing completely unnerved on the outside. After listening to the young lady and Alessio talking, Hades noticed Arsene coming back. He was holding a bag. It was a shopping bag, but it wasn’t transparent…[Read more]
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Rusted Knight replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
Drip.
Drip.
Caleb listened to the rhythmic water. It helped calm him. What he had done before was stupid and cowardly. He should help others who were in the same trouble as him. He couldn’t cower at every issue he encountered. But what could he do now.
Drip.
Drip.
Drip.
Water. Caleb still had his canteen. He had his axe and revolver. He had…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
*Oops got super sidetracked and forgot to reply*
Thanks so much for your answers! I do like to categorize things, but I was a bit concerned about not wanting a label to wind up defining a character. Which isn’t really an actual issue for me because my characters are themselves and categorizing them other ways doesn’t change that. So…
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
And speaking of art, I’ve finally finished a sketch of Jade that actually looks like her:

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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
Thanks for that explanation!
AWWWW! Is he from the same story as Jade and Rosemary?
No, he’s from a different story. Ríadnu is the “chosen one” of a (favorite) WIP of mine, though not the POV character.
I t h i n k slightly sarcastic? I honestly can’t exactly pinpoint it tbh XD
Oh…well I definitely wasn’t being sarcastic.…[Read more]
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Catholic Creed replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
Someone touched me. Someone touched me. Someone touched me.
And I can’t set them on fire or anything reasonable like that because the roof is caving in and I need them to carry me to safety – which tragically necessitates touching.
Hey, at least I’m not flat-out dissociating anymore. That’s progress, right?
Oscar says that’s progress.…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
“Worrying about the nation won’t do anything right now,” Alessio murmured, staring at the carpet. “But if you focus on one goal at a time…that can make a difference.”
It’s the only way to survive. One step at a time, even if you know it won’t make a difference.
‘No matter what you do, you are changing the world.‘ Nithel had said that, so serio…[Read more]
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