Grace Benham

@gbfruitbat

Well first of all, that sounds like a very cool, but tragic story that brings sorrow and pain from the inside out. I like it.
It doesn’t necessarily sound cliché to begin with. That stuff does happen. Even I became fatherless at quite a young age. It isn’t like so common like divorce is. No offense to anyone, but divorce is so common…[Read more]

@gbfruitbat

Thank you. It would be greatly appreciated. I’m curious to see how close you get to her real personality.

@erynne @ajstoryteller @gbfruitbat

this is the girl I posted before but now I have a better picture of her face.

so her face is the new one but I like the clothing of the old one

@gbfruitbat @erynne @emma-walker

Anyone want to give this lovely lady a try?

Yes, she is a dragon, but she thinks and feels like any human… And she is part of the same story the rest of my characters have been from.

I’m very curious to see what you guys to pick up from a visibly non-human character.

@gbfruitbat

Don’t worry, I’ve done it too XD

1) Name: Jaye

Libelle at the moment, but it may change

2) Age: 16

yes

3) Career/Role in Story: side character? 

Yeah, she’s MC best friend

4) Personality: confident and friendly

She is friendly, and has her moments of being quite funny, but not that confident in herself. She is introverted but…[Read more]

@gbfruitbat

Are you doing mine or someone else’s?

@gbfruitbat

Oh, don’t worry, I understand! Would you be allowed and want to join my Writing board? Several people from SE are on it

@gbfruitbat

Oh that is very helpful!! Thank you! You on Pinterest too?

@gbfruitbat,

No problem! I love it when people butt in. 😛

@erynne,

According to the tests, I’m a type 5w4, or 4w5 occasionally. Though according to an expert personality typer who had me take like eighteen tests and asked a lot of questions about myself and compiled info from that, I’m a type 8. And honestly, I think that fits me better than a 5. 😀

@gbfruitbat

I comnpletely understand XD Aren’t they amazing for charater development?? What type are you?

@k-a-grey

Also, some other things…I’d never admit it in person, but I’m a hopeless romantic.  I’m a realist in terms of daily life, but in my head I’m full of dreams which the realist side of me says will just get crushed.  I’m basically a walking paradox.  I like to say my room and desk is “organized chaos.”  It looks like chaos, but it’s org…

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Also, I love how @gbfruitbat and I (the J types) gave these detailed answers, and the P types were just like, “I don’t know much about my type but this looks interesting, so yeah.”  xD

(Oh, one other thing about my type.  I have spent nearly five minutes deciding whether to post this or not because I don’t want to offend P types, and if I did, I…[Read more]

@gbfruitbat

Hi Grace!! That was incredibly helpful. Like super duper absolutely amazingly helpful and I appreciate it very much. THANK YOUUU

@gbfruitbat I started doing the characters, family and friends of Cass and Aspen on page 10. Cassidy is on page 21 and Aspen is on page 22 if you want to read up 😉 😉

@gbfruitbat

1) Name: Edmund or Elliot

2) Age: late teens

3) Career/Role in Story: Protagonist or protag’s best friend

4) Personality: He’s a kindhearted soul. Naturally friendly and sweet.

5) Would you be friends with that character?: Yes he seems nice.

6) Any other details you may have gotten from the picture: He’s wearing formalish attire…[Read more]

@gbfruitbat they are previous characters I’ve done, along with Cass’s strange family. Dakota and Aspen are sisters and I’ve also done some of their other siblings. I’ve almost finished their story as well.

@erynne @gbfruitbat hiiii here’s a new one

From Dakota’s story

@gbfruitbat I wrote a 3rd person pov book with several POV characters. At first, readers struggled to relate to the main character. I tried switching his scenes to first person as one tactic to help readers relate to him better. I know one guy who didn’t like it, but almost everyone thought it improved the story.

Most writers who only have two…[Read more]

@gbfruitbat

Hi Grace!

My previous project was written from dual points of view, and so is my next one.

I wrote both perspectives in first person, with names at the beginning of the chapter. I did have several chapters from other points of view than the main two, and those were in third person.

Is it weird or confusing to go from first person…

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