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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
*Kimmi sent something earlier this morning, and… sees now it never went through* *grrs* *types abbreviated version*___________________
Leana had been joking about the biting. She tended to joke, when nervous, but always wondered if anyone realized it was in jest. Dom did…
She danced away from Alessio when he released her. But she didn’t…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
Search grinned evilly at the quip/question, while Burn shoved some writhing, squirming creature back into her pack.
“When the exes are fighting the kids get to play.” She laughed.
That’s nice to know, he was hoping for more context, he really was…
“Uh. Is that thunder?” Burn interjected, and Nathair glanced up. Then at Burn, oh yes he was blin…[Read more]
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Catholic Creed replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
“That’s incredibly treacherous how could you do such a thing.”
Snake-Punk adds almost amiably. But also, with a suspicious hint of confusion.
(despite the fact that he didn’t really know what a lizard was.)
“So.” Oh boy, here it comes. “How’d you get permanent blood stains in your hair?”
Not what I thought was coming.
But I grin anyway -whi…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
“How do you break free?” His arm locked around her neck.
Leana did her best not to make a gagging sound. Break free? Uh… “Bite you?” If I had my dagger, I could try to stab you in the gut. But I left it on my horse, and… I wouldn’t want to risk success, with that. Not that I would have success. “But… you might not taste too good.” *br…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
Alessio had actually thought he’d have to convince her to throw a decent punch at him, so he wasn’t entirely prepared for the stunned look in her eyes to quickly shift to determination – anger?
Before he could overthink it, a punch swung at him hard. He automatically moved to the side and snatched her wrist using her own momentum to yank her i…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
Alessio nodded thoughtfully and took her hand, and shaped it into a fist. Leana watched, brows furrowing a bit.
She tried to put her thumb inside her fist, because she always did, but Alessio corrected, “You need your thumb outside of your fist, so you don’t break your hand throwing a punch, your feet need to be spaced enough for balance but not…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
The silence was deafening…
Well, he hadn’t really expected her to have a lot of fighting experience anyway.
“I…I’ve only been a messenger.” She said “Riding a horse from outpost to outpost. I had a dagger, but…All of us knew it wouldn’t do any good, if caught. It isn’t really a stable job.”
Alright, she’d be used to the feel of a knife that’d…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
Alessio backed out of the embrace, but his hand still lingered on Leana’s shoulder. “We’ll need to decide which mirror to enter and come up with a plan to make it through alive.”
Leana nodded slowly, and took a step back. You said… the point of all the mirrors is to make us feel guilty?
Alessio glanced uneasily at the chocolate guy, I should…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
“I don’t know either.” She said in a nearly cracked voice. “I don’t know…”
Was this what it felt like to lose someone who actually cared about you…? That was numbing.
She was still speaking, softly, almost as if to herself.
“So many in this war, have lost fathers. Brothers, friends…” If there hadn’t been a war…would his father have loved him…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
Her heart relaxed, when Alessio truly squeezed.
“I – Sorry,” He stammered.
Leana didn’t pull away or look at him. So many things still rushed through her mind.
After a minute or two, Alessio spoke again, “I’ll keep searching until we find your father- I believe we’ll find him eventually, but if we don’t…” Leana stepped back. Alessio’s face ti…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
He could hear her take a slow, painful breath. He should’ve thought of something better to say…not that it would do any good…
“Alright.” She said, as if taking in all the information she’d been given. He bit his lip, not sure if he should say something or just shut up for how “helpful” he’d b – Alessio flinched as a hand rubbed his arm, but…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
Alessio seemed in a daze, and Leana resisted the urge to fidget.
Finally he looked at her, biting his lip, “It’s possible if Nithel is still in this world…dimension…place…then he might be forced into the trials as well and there’s a chance of us finding him there. I don’t know.” He sucked in a deep breath, and Leana’s brows furrowed. “The…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
Lol that’s good!!! Well, not the confusing brain part lol XDD
Whichever one has more braincells this castle has a huge braincell deficiency. 😌✌️
Alessio nearly jumped when Leana crawled out from under the table – a safe distance away from them. Devisldevilsdevils was she listening in? That was stupid she would’ve hidden better if she int…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
“Alright, we’ll need to come up with a plan.” Alessio spoke, “We don’t have a lot of options and we don’t know really what’s ahead of us so we should be prepared for the worst. Our best option would be to work together and manage our assets and liabilities accordingly.”
Leana’s eyes widened, as she still hunkered under the table. Is it too m…[Read more]
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ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic No idea where else to post this, but I need help in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Sorry that I’m so late!
I know a guy who was in the Army, and he strongly encourages you to do a lot of research, which you seem to already be doing (I wish you the best of luck!)
From my own experience with this guy, on your question about language and cold-blooded killers:
- You can avoid cursing, but soldiers will insult and…
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
“Lots of strange events these days, aren’t they, Alessio.” Arsene said, something about his voice sounding a little odd. Alessio glanced up quickly, regarding him a little warily. What was he probing for…?
Instinctively his mind started assessing every possible escape route in the room, but he bit back the urge. This was Arsene, he’d be fine.
“L…[Read more]
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calidris replied to the topic Hi. Really long re-introduction bio dead ahead. in the forum Introduce Yourself 3 years, 4 months ago
Hi Kayla! I do remember you, and I’m glad you’re back!
What’s your WIP about? Do you have any favorite books? What are some of your favorite crafts?
That’s really cool that you’re learning to knit! I never learned to knit, but it does seem fun (and practical.)I think that SE is…unfortunately rather inactive at the moment. I think that…[Read more]
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Catholic Creed replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
SEARCH
Pardon me for sounding like Burn here, but punk literally not a single word of that made sense!
Okay. Deep breaths Search. Piece together what you can.
Whitehall – a location.
Jetstream – um.
Ship – drawing a blank… oh, probably transportation? Put a pin in that.
Job and money – that can’t be too different?
Tickets – okay, for tra…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
“Where are we going?” Search asked
“Whitehall.” Caleb said “There we can sit out the jetstream and catch the ship north. From there I go back home. You guys can follow but that is up to you.”
Very little of what he said made sense but hey sticking together sounded like a plan.
“And what in this clearly gods-forsaken land is a jetstream?” B…[Read more]
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Rusted Knight replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 4 months ago
“Where are we going?” asks Search.
“Whitehall. There we can sit out the jetstream and catch a ship north. From there I go back home. You guys can follow but that is up to you.”
“And what in this clearly gods-forsaken land is a jetstream?”
Caleb looked at Burn hard for two reasons. First, having lived all his life on the floating islands…[Read more]
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