Knowledgeful Butterfly

@e_Elaine_soup5: So basically she just turned the serpent into bone, but can still bring it back to life with her magic? That correct? 🙂

@e_elaine_soup5: Wait, did you just kill the serpent? Or did you wound it? I’m just trying to make sure…

@e_elaine_soup5  I love the…flavor of the words (if that means anything!) and the tactile feel that you get from the words like “shivering,” “wither,” “leaks,” and “clinking.”

@e_elaine_soup5 Yeah, but in between killing Nebula and the Snap, she should be dead. She doesn’t disappear after killing her past self, from what I remember.

@e_elaine_soup5 So, this is my understanding of the time travel stuff. Ever time a change is made in the past, it becomes an alternate timeline. This timeline is now an alternate universe, and does not affect the original timeline. Cap being affiliated with Hydra, Thanos dying ten years early, and Loki escaping are all in a separate universe. The…[Read more]

@e_elaine_soup5 Wow, I love that poem.

@e_elaine_soup5 I really like it! May I ask what the inspiration behind it was?

@e_elaine_soup5 Wow! What a cool poem! I loved your imagery. 🙂

@scarletimmortalized @e_elaine_soup5

Are you two still participating in this or no?

ah, well wallflower or not, welcome, @e_elaine_soup5

And we don’t forget about people, @therealameliahoch. We just forget about paperwork. 😉

Glad to see you both here!

@countryboy77 @e_elaine_soup5 Just so you guys are aware…David is with your characters…just hanging out…eyes solid black…about to attack them…just an fyi

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Marnin limped over to Finley and Gwyneth. “Are you alright?” he asked, bending down worriedly. “Is the EMP wearing off any?”

This was so strange and hard to believe. But they…[Read more]

Welcome to the guild @therealameliahoch and @e_elaine_soup5!  🙂

@brandon-miller Thank you for that insightful beta reader post! I was lucky enough to find a good handful of beta readers who have done a wonderful job helping me polish up and further develop my novel! I still find myself drafting my work over and over again and I feel kind of…[Read more]

@therealameliahoch and @e_elaine_soup5  We haven’t met yet. So hi!

@brandon-miller  I’ve never thought about having beta readers before.(mainly because I’m not really at that point yet.) I have posted a (super) short story or Flickr and asked for critique, but they mostly gave polite assurance that it was “good”.¯_(ツ)_/¯

Also, I can’t imagi…[Read more]

@kari-karast Thank you for your feedback! The ghost part is well…ambiguous…aka I don’t know what I’m doing.

@i-david Thanks!

@e_elaine_soup5 Alright! Thanks!

@taylorclogston Thanks for all your comments and answers! Mom always said I was a drama queen, I’ll look into that video! The subtlety and character development answers were helpful as…[Read more]

Kieron nodded. “I’d say yes. You said you don’t have a weapon, right? Well take my sword, I can’t exactly do anything with it like this anyway.” He nodded down at the boy in his arms with a rueful smile.

@introverted-elf @e_elaine_soup5