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@noah-cochran

Nine thirty isn’t that bad at all, but treating Rose like a naughty girl who stays up past her bedtime is fun, so let’s keep it up anyway.

Haha, you’re not my parents, I don’t have to listen to you! Also, I don’t have to listen to someone who replies to things during class and doesn’t pay attention. *Evil grin*

Depending on how far…

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THANK YOU! I know, I know! I was just joking!

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Also, hello peoples. I hope you and your writings are well!

@this-is-not-an-alien

I gotta use it as an onomatopoeia from now on

You’re gonna what? How is that even…oh, yeah, you’re Cathy, it’s totally possible.

SEE THAT’S WHAT I KEEP TELLING HER COZ I’M LIKE ‘IN MY TIMEZONE THE SUN’S STILL UP BUT I KNOW IT’S WAY PAST YOUR BEDTIME IN YOUR TIMEZONE WHAT ARE YOU DOING ON PINTEREST TALKING TO ME THIS LATE…

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@noah-cochran

To be perfectly honest with you, I just kinda assume that my writing could have flaws or quirks in any area, so nothing much surprises me. But I suppose the ‘it needs more introspection for internal conflict’ was what surprised me the most.

Hmmm, I know I said that and I do want to warn you that my personal philosophy on internal con…[Read more]

oik I forgot! @emily-waldorf

Oh we’re shouting coz we’re good friends of course 😉 Good friends who live to drive each other crazy!

WELCOME TO OUT INSANITY BTW!!!!

I have no clue what the Book Thief’s about ask @rose-colored-fancy aka the person who lives to have a ridiculously high word-count for no other reason than to torment me the slow writer😾(she really does write…[Read more]

Hello! I hope I’m not butting in.

What’s the Book Thief about? Can it make me cry any harder than A Tale of Two Cities? I don’t believe I’ve met the book that can. (Give it to me!)

And…why is everybody shouting? (Don’t worry, I’m always the one who glares at people who are shouting with a wilting glance…at least I hope it’s wilting.)

LEAVE MY BABY, AYDIN ALONE!!!!!! *Also me: torturing my baby Alessio…*

Pft, I can’t even remember what it was before Camvir-something-blahblah, I can’t wait to see what it’ll be by the end of the year, probably something completely different and it’ll be all my fault *I’m so happy!* 😇

LOL IT SHOULD SERVE YOU RIGHT FOR BEING SO…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

FYI, Cavirmablablah, I AM GETTING TO IT AND I HAVE STARTED TTD 2 WHILE I’M BETA READING FOR SOMEONE WHO’S PUBLISHING FEBUARY!!!!!!

It’s fine, take as many years as you would like. 🙂

@rose-colored-fancy

What’s the piece of feedback that surprised you the most?

To be perfectly honest with you, I just kinda assume that my wri…[Read more]

@noah-cochran

I’m afraid to say that the feedback is all over the place. xD Some of my betas really liked a couple of the characters, and others thought those characters had serious problems (and vice versa).

I suppose the most common agreement is that the fight scenes to be edited and shortened (though one of my beta’s likes them a sur…

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FYI, Cavirmablablah, I AM GETTING TO IT AND I HAVE STARTED TTD 2 WHILE I’M BETA READING FOR SOMEONE WHO’S PUBLISHING FEBUARY!!!!!!

Don’t worry, I’ll have it by the end of this century, ok 😁

Now excuse me while I yell at @rose-colored-fancy for her horrifying display of efficiency and absolutely ridiculously high wordcount, THAT SHOULD BE…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

How are you finding the feedback? Are you spotting any patterns or is everyone violently disagreeing?

I’m afraid to say that the feedback is all over the place. xD Some of my betas really liked a couple of the characters, and others thought those characters had serious problems (and vice versa).

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@noah-cochran

Hey Rose, I’m doing alright. The weather is frigid in Missouri, so I assume that the Netherlands is covered in ice.   School started, and college starts soon, so I solemnly await busyness.

How about you?
Pretty good! We had a couple really icy days already, but now we’ve returned to the natural Dutch state. Mud. Lots of it. Rai…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

Hey Rose, I’m doing alright. The weather is frigid in Missouri, so I assume that the Netherlands is covered in ice. 😉 School started, and college starts soon, so I solemnly await busyness.

How about you?

Four of my other beta readers have given me feedback, and the other four may or may not finish within the next few…[Read more]

@noah-cochran

Hey Noah! How are you doing? How are your beta-readers progressing? Do you have most of your feedback in? How is the new series coming along, are your characters cooperating? XD

(Those were a lot of questions… XD)

Hi…!

So poems are very new to me. I have this poem that isn’t sitting right with me word wise. It doesn’t sound like a poem to me. Now I know nothing about poems, so any advice you could give would be oh so helpful.

Thank you for your time.

The Scar

A lush forest is blemished by this coulee

A imprudent child is at the bottom of it

That…[Read more]