Caseybold

@naiya-dyani

No, actually, but I can see how you’d think that 🙂 I wrote this one day as I was thinking about the day I got to go see her after her surgery a couple months ago, and how much I hate hospitals and the whole mess of things that I was dealing with (had mild depression in the couple weeks before her surgery, I think because I was so…[Read more]

@naiya-dyani *grins* It was so fun!

GAAAAAHH YOU’RE RIGHT DANGIT

Sorry XD I get aggravated at myself when I use the wrong homophone XD

And yeah, I get what you said about poetry being “too personal” to critique comfortably. I’ve had the same problem a couple times, even with some prose.

@anne_the_noob14 Aw! <3 Is your mom a nurse?

@anne_the_noob14 Okay, that’s really funny. XD It sounds like something my sister and I would do.

Like you said, free verse is hard to critique (I find all poetry hard to critique, honestly, since it feels so personal and individual), but I will mention this one thing–in this line:

I think you mean “faze.” 😛

@katthewriter

Those all sound really neat.

I’m trying to figure out how to describe it. XD It’s basically a sort of “life is worth living/anti suicide” message with a road trip aesthetic. If that makes any sense.

@katthewriter Yeah, I like these too! 🙂

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

They sound cool not sure if they actually are xD but thanks

@katthewriter

*pops in*

Your stories all sound super cool!

@pensword

Joe books,are spies, and how that has effected thier family,  and dealing with loss, and that you can’t do everything on your own.

Unknown is kinda about forgivness/letting go/pro life

Finding You. .. is complicated. 3 MC’s who are all dealing with different forms of hurt, its an old time/slight sci-fi one.

Scars is about a…[Read more]

@katthewriter

Those sound neat! What’s the premise of them?