Beth Darlene

@beth20 You’re welcome!

@beth20 Good job on this poem! 🙂

Nithel nearly jumped to the ceiling, his eyes wide as saucers. His hands still clenched, he squinted through the dark to Jaylin. A youth, if one could judge by size.

He didn’t know what a troll was, “I am not a troll.” The stones were cold, stinging his feet like it was snow.

He put his chin up, looking to the ceiling again, How strange. His…[Read more]

@beth20

Hi, Beth. You did a great job of writing an emotional piece in masterfully concise way. I like you’re writing style and thought it was cool how you ended the poem with a thought-provoking question. Great job!

That may help @beth20 . (: Thank you!!!

@beth20

I’ll try to read that soon. I won’t make any promises though. 😛

Thank you @joelle-stone and @beth20 !

Yes Beth, but you may do what you will with him. 😁

Nithel’s arms strained as he lifted the new table. Amit calling for him to be careful as his feet dragged outside toward the cart.

The smooth wood slid onto the carrier, and Nithel sighed while pushing it to the back of the shelf. “To Siebel son of Rate?!” Nithel calls over his shoulder toward the workshop door. Thickly callused hands alrea…[Read more]

@beth20

That makes sense! I’ll have to develop a little bit more then to make sure I got it. Thank you! 😀

@the-fledgling-artist

Thank you! That is probably one of the things I’ll end up doing, because drafts are made to rewrite, right? 😀 It will be like connecting the dots 😉 I hope I can discover what my writing process is soon… t…[Read more]

Alright, yes, dropping him with you @beth20 , would probably be a good idea. 😊

Or, dropping him somewhere you can find him. ☺

21(ish) it is. (:

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Nithel son of Father:

Age: Classified, but for simplicity, 21. (You could ask him, it will be fun to see how he answers…hm.)

Height: 5′ 6”. Quite short.

Eye Color: Light brown, with a bit of…[Read more]

@kimlikesart,

I like the 21-39 range. You can pick what would best fit him from there. 🙂 Nithel sounds like a really cool character! Can’t wait to meet him (although maybe you should stick him with @beth20 since her writing partner isn’t really responding)!

@beth20

Thanks! 🙂 Things are settling down more, so I’ll have a bit more time, but since school started, I’m busy with that all morning and till the afternoon.

@beth20

Very interesting backstory! Can’t wait to learn more about the characters. 🙂

@olivia

Hey Olivia!! 👋 Great to hear from you. 😊 Wow I’m sure you’ve been busy with moving! What made you guys move? I’ve been pretty busy myself… I took it upon myself to audit a seminary NT Greek class. It’s been very intense to say the least. 😂 The…[Read more]