AshleaAdams

I looked at my cat the other day and she was giving me the Flynn Rider smolder and I looked over at my brother and was like, look at the cat, she be like, here comes the smolder. XDXD XD

@joelle-stone

Thanks so much! I’ve got Chapter 5 finished, so when you get done with chapter 4, I’ll send it over. It’s a real tearjerker!

Sorry, if this is overloading you, but I can’t thank you enough.

A proverbial saying of my world…

“A week’s journey can cast a year’s shadow.”

K’Nika grabbed Kallun’s arm and pulled him toward the River, “Come, Gorodramvy Ahiyed. You can help since you’re already wet.”
Kallum nodded.

@obrian-of-the-surface-world

Thanks! I look forward to yours as well.

This one I’m pretty proud of… sends shivers….

Female protagonist, in describing the man she’s attracted to after he carries her in from the rain – after drying off, he sits in front of a fire with a blanket rapped around him…

The shadows and lights danced upon his face as a lone drip of water streaked down his face, following the…[Read more]

“Excellent. Anyone hungry?” He asked picking up a stick and breaking it in half on his knee so it formed a point.

@jared-williams

The characters have been to many different parts of the castle like the gardens, library, zero gravity room, etc. However, the castle is constantly changing. You can create any type of setting you want within the castle. The only rule concerning the setting is that it has to be within the castle since characters are not allowed to…[Read more]

anyone mapped the castle or gone other places in the castle yet?

Joshua (@storysmith)

There is a great deal of wisdom in your words.

Too often people who fear for the future are imagining dreadful scenarios where God is not present.

Amen, my brother!  I look forward to hearing more about the story as you develop it.

@irishcelticredflowercrown I look forward to it! I feel pretty comfortable with Lorcan, not so much with Daire b/c I don’t know him as well–so thanks for the permission. Lol. Poor guy. He’s been too good at everything for too long. He could use a bit of humiliation now and then, I shouldn’t wonder. :’)

@emily-waldorf

i will post a chapter later today lol, but I‘m liking it so far! Feel free to use Lorcan and Daire (as long as you don’t give them radical personality changes🤣) challenges are exciting hehe i would say Lorcan is mostly concerned with how he has managed to humiliate himself by getting injured😂 i will also write Daire‘s respo…[Read more]

Isella

The first thing she noticed was how tired she was. Then she realized that she was very, very cold. She opened her eyes.

The man that had transformed into a beast was standing next to her, rubbing her cheeks with his hands. She caught herself just in time to spare a scream. The armored man, who had risked his life to fight the dragon, was…[Read more]

@crazywriter

Sorry it took me so long to get around to this. *fp* Life is nuts. 😛 Anyway! Same format:

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In the morning, a gray fog had settled over the fort and the surrounding terrain, minimizing visibility, and giving the land an eery eerie look. Abner woke early, and patrolled the walls, straining his eyes for any sight of the enemy, but…[Read more]

Mejt

The man turned toward me, and I took half a step backward, wariness overcoming anything else. Running wasn’t an option. If he really could change into animals, he could outrun me. He didn’t have weapons, but he didn’t need them.

He looked confused. His eyes were mismatched, one blue, one green.

He bowed, giving me an unfamiliar greeting.…[Read more]

@jared-williams

lol. well, he is only 18, and for the most part self-taught   (fyi… he’s not usually so clueless, but he can be rather carefree…)

Oh, absolutely! I don’t think he’s stupid, his confusion is just quite amusing, though it makes sense considering the circumstances.

I love how all the different characters react to appearing in a stra…[Read more]

Hi Joshua, (@storysmith)

Perhaps I just noticed the parallels because of the biblical study I have been doing.  I do know that the primary purpose of prophecy is not so much that God merely is wanting us to know the future, but especially that He wants us to know that He holds the future and has full knowledge of it so that we can trust Him as…[Read more]

Enydd

“I’m May. I live in Varseina at the Lighthouse,” a blonde-haired girl said shortly.

I smiled politely. Varseina? Where on Thrae was that? A dark figure in the corner of the room stepped forward. It was a man. I watched in horror as the man disappeared. In his place was a raven.

Was he a Blessed? But there was no such thing as shape…[Read more]

Yay!

lol. I kinda felt the same about trying to go back to read pages and pages previous story line to see who the characters were… lol. but… at least for my characters, I posted links… but there are pretty good visuals in the links. Used Hero Forge… it’s free (though it does have paying features -but only if you want it), and it…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

that’s beautiful!