@anne_the_noob14
Active 3 years, 1 month ago-
Naiya Dyani replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago
@anne_the_noob14 Um. . . not fantastic lately. XD
Kiet: *swipes tears away and hopes you don’t notice as he grins and sips the milkshake*
Grace: *takes a deliberate sip of coffee* We’re alright now. . . last night was a bit rough. It was for the best in the end, though.
Kiet: Yeah. *suddenly blushes* Sorry to invade. . . castle people!
Oh,…[Read more]
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Naiya Dyani replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago
@anne_the_noob14 @ariella-newheart @the-others-on-this-thread
I’m sorry–I know I popped in earlier, but I thought I should let you know that I don’t think I can join right now . . . as usual, I piled too many things on my plate and am just trying to get those under control! 😅 But thank you for the thought, Livi! I hope you guys have a grand…[Read more]
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Ariella Newheart posted a new activity comment 6 years, 6 months ago
@anne_the_noob14 Oh, thank you so much! I saw that you had left a few comments.
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@ariella-newheart No problem! I left myself a bookmark on page 39, and I’m gonna read more tomorrow! I really love it so far! Looking forward to seeing where you go with it!! 😀 😀
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The Inkspiller replied to the topic Worldbuilding in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago
@e-k-seaver R.M. Archer puts up some super useful priming questions and pointers for world building. I’d like to take a crack at answering and see if there’s anywhere I can go into a little more depth. I’ve been inventing and running D&D campaigns fora good few years and so have had a lot of hands-on practice with a live audience (players) in…[Read more]
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Evelyn replied to the topic Writing free verse poems in the forum Poets 6 years, 6 months ago
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Emma Starr replied to the topic Writing free verse poems in the forum Poets 6 years, 7 months ago
@anne_the_noob14 Such a fun poem!! I liked the banter. ;P
For tips….free verse is, well, free. I used to think that meant that you wouldn’t use any poetry techniques in free verse, but now I realize that free verse really opens up my writing to use the full variety of tools.
I use free verse as an opportunity to ruthlessly cut out any…[Read more]
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Naiya Dyani replied to the topic Character memes in the forum Characters 6 years, 7 months ago
@urwen-starial XD XD XD
What my characters do in their free time:
Grace: medical research, language learning, reading
Kiet: adopting cats, playing his dulcimer, getting lost in thought
Dari: looking after his little sister, messing with Tai, quelling arguments
Kedori: studying, teaching Kiet sign language, getting very much…[Read more]
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Hope McClellan replied to the topic Spontaneous Word Wars (for slow writers) in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@tinuviel @naiya-dyani @anne_the_noob14 @tashah-claymore @phoenix @anyoneelse
If anyone is around for a word war, I’ll be here practically all day!
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Character memes in the forum Characters 6 years, 7 months ago
@anne_the_noob14 Yup XD. I wuv dat boy 🥰
Zack: Aww thanks. At least you love me.
Me: Don’t start! You know other people love you too.
@naiya-dyani Those were so funny!!! I love Tai
@kayla-skywriter I like Altan. He’s cool.
Here’s my variations of two short memes I found:
Tony: I’ve had ten times the dates that you have.
Jordan: You have?…[Read more]
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Hope Ann started the topic Those posh sounding charactors in the forum Characters 6 years, 7 months ago
Another character question, this one from Emma:
I have a main character who comes from a well-to-do family and is well educated. When she is talking to characters who are not wealthy or well educated, she uses normal dialogue. But I want the dialogue between her and her family to sound educated and eloquent without being so wordy that my readers…
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Dashuri Halad replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 7 months ago
Alright, sorry I didn’t get anything posted over the weekend. My mom had my entire family out taking care of yard and garden work for most of the weekend and I had to finish up some school, but I’m back now.
@ariella-newheart   Did you bring in your manipulative character? That could get a little strange, because part of Connor’s telepathic po…[Read more]
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 7 months ago
Marlowe Reynolds was in complete control. She stood on a rooftop overlooking the assembly hall, taking note of each ambassador who walked in and out of the large, triangular gateway. Her list would be valuable. The Commodore wanted to know who was in the building at all times—who was present for votes and who skipped them. Who paid homage to the E…[Read more]
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 7 months ago
@anne_the_noob14 Aaahh, I see. In that case, I think I’ll bring in Marlowe just to test the waters. I need to get to know her character anyway. 😀 (I think I’ll try to write later tonight.)
As for Caedon, yes he is from the same world but unfortunately from a different timeline than the one in the book you’re beta-reading. There are several…[Read more]
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Naiya Dyani replied to the topic Character memes in the forum Characters 6 years, 7 months ago
@urwen-starial @anne_the_noob14
When Kiet gets in a mischievous mood:
Kiet: *sly smile* Tai looks adorable in his sleep.
Tai: What?!?! I do not!!!!
Kiet: Yeah you do. I would know. I barely sleep, so I see you all curled up like a little angel child every night. . .
Grace: *snickers*
Tai: Oh, yeah? Well, you purr like a cat in YOUR…[Read more]
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Naiya Dyani replied to the topic Character memes in the forum Characters 6 years, 7 months ago
Haha!
Okay, I’m gonna do this one (and tag @urwen-starial and @anne_the_noob14 since they probs know my characters best out of the peeps on this thread):
Answer to the question “What would be the most surprising or embrassing fact about you?
Tai: I’ve swallowed an earthworm before.
Grace: She said a surprising fact, Tai. Unless you were g…[Read more]
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Naiya Dyani replied to the topic Spontaneous Word Wars (for slow writers) in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@anne_the_noob14 @tashah-claymore @hope-mcclellan @tinuviel
If any of you are around, I need a serious kick into action XD
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Silver Shadow replied to the topic Spontaneous Word Wars (for slow writers) in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
I’ll be around, too! Â I wasn’t able to work on my Camp NaNo project yesterday because of school, an interview with a college I want to go to, and working on art for someone. Â I’m hoping to get a lot done today!
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Naiya Dyani replied to the topic Spontaneous Word Wars (for slow writers) in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@anne_the_noob14 Awesome, I’ve got a lot of writing to do today! 😀
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 7 months ago
@anne_the_noob14 I like the details you put in that fighting scene! Dharin seems like an interesting character. I wonder what would happen if I brought in a female character who has no patience for his antics. Or one who would try to manipulate him. (I have one character who is very adept at putting on different masks for certain situations and…[Read more]
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Dashuri Halad replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 7 months ago
I have decided to bring in Connor O’Dan for now. Here is a character bio on Connor. I hope to actually add him by this weekend.
Connor comes from a future of our world. (The use of ‘a’ instead of ‘the’ is purposeful, there are multiple dimensions and times in the story.) He is short, 5’7, with a wiry build. He has black hair and dark brown…[Read more]
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